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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review

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Lead
  • Minor edit: "has perform" >> "has performed"
Background
  • Minor edit: "conspired" >> "worked" (it's a song, not a terrorist plan)
  • Minor edit: "Herbert approbated the particular tune the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him." >> "Herbert named the particular tune as the most out of all of the tracks that Shadow played for him."
Composition
Charts

Nothing else. 'til the charts are fixed, i'll put it on hold. —Hahc21 19:19, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe everything is all in order. :) —DAP388 (talk) 19:54, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Mmm well, on the Gaon chart i was referring to this:
  • "South Korea GAON International Chart" (in Korean). Korea Music Content Industry Association. To properly see the chart position, select 2011 and 2011.05.22~2011.05.28. Retrieved June 20, 2012.
This way, anyone can verify the charts. And change the link to http://www.gaonchart.co.kr/main/section/online/streaming/list.gaon?nationGbn=E
I'll do it myself.

Well, since eveything has been fixed. I'll pass the article. —Hahc21 20:09, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Hahc21 20:10, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]