User contributions for 67.185.21.25

3 June 2024

• 06:0406:04, 3 June 2024 diff hist −2 SpaceX Starship (spacecraft) name is not “identical” if you can electively/willfully disambiguate it Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 June 2024

• 00:5900:59, 2 June 2024 diff hist +10 Ian Alexander (actor) →Early and personal life: MOS:CURRENT, use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 May 2024

• 21:3321:33, 31 May 2024 diff hist 0 Apollo Robbins →In popular culture: word choice, encyclopedic style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 May 2024

• 19:3319:33, 30 May 2024 diff hist +3 Future of an expanding universe →Cosmology: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3219:32, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0 Future of an expanding universe →Cosmology: partial revert, original word was better Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:3119:31, 30 May 2024 diff hist +2 Future of an expanding universe →Cosmology: fix reversed causation/logic, considering the current discussion Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:1719:17, 30 May 2024 diff hist +4 Cygnus X-1 ce: flow Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:0619:06, 30 May 2024 diff hist +3 Hidden-variable theory →Motivation: ce: not an “example” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:5618:56, 30 May 2024 diff hist −12 SpaceX Starship (spacecraft) rm weasel word. Regarding “design”, it either is or isn’t. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:2818:28, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0 GW170817 →Astrophysical origin and products: consistent MOS:CAPS with elsewhere in this article, word is not included in MOS:CELESTIALBODIES, “Wikipedia avoids unnecessary capitalization”, no consensus at MOS-talk-caps-archive16 Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:0518:05, 30 May 2024 diff hist 0 Tolman–Oppenheimer–Volkoff limit →History: rm extraneous newline Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:0218:02, 30 May 2024 diff hist −2 Tolman–Oppenheimer–Volkoff limit →History: ce: fix ungrammatical quote embedding, MOS:DQ Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:3617:36, 30 May 2024 diff hist −1 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: rm MOS:COMMA not needed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:0804:08, 30 May 2024 diff hist +7 Iron-56 →Relationship to nickel-62: ce: capitalization, clarify pipe text Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 May 2024

• 08:1408:14, 23 May 2024 diff hist −8 Neutron star merger rm parenthetical discourse mark, not needed
• 07:4607:46, 23 May 2024 diff hist −29 Neutron star merger MOS:COMMA serial, before ref, rm unary nested section
• 06:4106:41, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: MOS:COMMA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3706:37, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3306:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist +37 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: reposition cite; if covers the following sentence too Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:1406:14, 23 May 2024 diff hist −23 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: generalize; whether microbes give birth or not is not important here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0506:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +9 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: word choice (again), partial revert, meeting the microbes halfway (see previous edit) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0106:01, 23 May 2024 diff hist −2 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: word choice. Microbes have DNA but may not be “beings”, not sure if they survive here. Either way, one doesn’t think of them as “giving birth” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:4705:47, 23 May 2024 diff hist −4 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: ce: encyclopedic style, relocate existing inline {{xref}} Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 May 2024

• 18:5418:54, 22 May 2024 diff hist +361 Neutron star merger →Effect on Earth: Fix typo on 'parsecs' abbreviaions, plus copyedit
• 14:0814:08, 22 May 2024 diff hist +12 Longshot it's the opposite. as proposed last month in Talk:Wide_shot, and after a suitable waiting period current Tag: Visual edit: Switched

18 May 2024

• 07:5107:51, 18 May 2024 diff hist +1 Bell test ce: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:0404:04, 18 May 2024 diff hist +8 Bell test ce: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 03:1203:12, 18 May 2024 diff hist +3 Bell test clarify: the word “results” was already used in negated form, so a second, non-negated usage, intended as also negated, is too confusing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 May 2024

• 04:3704:37, 17 May 2024 diff hist +6 Future of an expanding universe →The Stelliferous Era: ce: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 May 2024

• 20:3120:31, 16 May 2024 diff hist −25 Iron-56 →Relationship to nickel-62: ce: awkward preposition chain and WP:PLA, fix by removing unnecessary pipe text Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:0120:01, 16 May 2024 diff hist +27 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: Further clarify 100s/1000s disparity; the latter is only discerned with hindsight Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 10:2610:26, 16 May 2024 diff hist 0 Keyboard expression →Pressure sensitivity or aftertouch: 1.) hyphen is not dash 2.) MOS:EMDASH opted elsewhere in this article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:3606:36, 16 May 2024 diff hist −45 Adam Rippon WP:PLA remove redirect pipe text, rm unsourced “world feed” (still needs further clarification) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:2906:29, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1 Stars on Mars →Format: ce: word choice - definite → indefinite article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:2405:24, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: WP:REDNO - not notable current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:2305:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →MIDIboard: WP:REDNO - not notable Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1705:17, 16 May 2024 diff hist −89 Kurzweil Music Systems Remove ‘issues’ tag - resolved - citations problem from talk page was resolved 7 years ago in 2016 when the ‘Kurzweil’ users section was deleted entirely Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1005:10, 16 May 2024 diff hist −23 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: WP:REDNO not notable, WP:NOTADVERT Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2304:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −11 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: copyedit, rm MOS:COMMA (not needed) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 May 2024

• 03:4003:40, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 Lyle Mays →Biography: MOS:COMMA serial Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 May 2024

• 18:1318:13, 10 May 2024 diff hist −323 Stars on Mars →Format: factual fix: 1.) the ‘Parade’ cite does not discuss details of the elimination/immunity process 2.) the “Base Commander” is always eligible for elimination Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:3305:33, 10 May 2024 diff hist −19 Adam Rippon ce: fix grammar, simplify Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:4302:43, 10 May 2024 diff hist +15 Stars on Mars add end date for finished series Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:0402:04, 10 May 2024 diff hist −4 Carrie Fisher MOS:EMDASH - should not be surrounded by spaces Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 May 2024

• 20:2120:21, 8 May 2024 diff hist +17 SpaceX →Launch vehicles: MOS:CURRENT dating of ostensibly expiring future plans Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:5907:59, 8 May 2024 diff hist +10 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: ce: unwrap abbreviation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 07:5507:55, 8 May 2024 diff hist +37 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: fix: MOS:CURRENT tense, grammar, encyclopedic style/clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 May 2024

• 23:1223:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist −24 Michel Petrucciani →Personality and musical style: ce: fluff Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:4520:45, 3 May 2024 diff hist +9 GW170817 fix: "100s" duration is inconsistent with later cited figure (1000s); probably refers only to human-audible frequency range
• 20:3520:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist −29 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: ce: clause sequential order, encyclopedic style