Correct Grammar in Making Definition
Correct Grammar in Making Definition
English Class
Presented by: literal, Christian M.
Subject-Verb
Agreement
• Arsenio lives in Tagabas, Catanauan Quezon.
• More people live in tagabas than any other barangay in
Catanauan.
Direction: Complete the following sentences with a singular o
plural form of the verb in brackets. Use present tense.
1. **Circular Definition**
- _Issue_: The definition is circular because it defines the term with the term itself.
- _Revision_: "Circular definition refers to a definition that uses the term being defined or a variation of it within its explanation, leading to redundancy and lack of
clarity."
2. **Jail**
- _Issue_: The definition could be more precise and comprehensive.
- _Revision_: "Jail is a facility where individuals are held while awaiting trial, sentencing, or serving shorter sentences for lesser offenses. It generally houses individuals
who are not yet convicted or those serving short-term sentences, as opposed to prisons which typically house convicted criminals serving longer sentences."
3. **Horse**
- _Issue_: The definition might be too broad or lacking detail.
- _Revision_: "A horse is a large, domesticated mammal belonging to the species *Equus ferus caballus*. It is known for its four legs, long mane, and tail, commonly
used for riding, racing, and work on farms. Horses are also recognized for their speed, strength, and companionship with humans."
4. **Synchronous Learning**
- _Issue_: The definition is incomplete, leaving out key characteristics.
- _Revision_: "Synchronous learning is a method of education where instructors and students interact in real-time, either online or in person. It involves scheduled
sessions, such as live virtual classrooms, video conferences, or in-person classes, allowing for immediate feedback and collaboration."
5. **Asynchronous Learning**
- _Issue_: The definition is vague and lacks specifics.
- _Revision_: "Asynchronous learning is a method of education where students engage in learning activities at their own pace without real-time interaction with
instructors or peers. It often involves pre-recorded lectures, discussion boards, and other flexible resources, allowing learners to study on their own schedule."
**Analyzing Missing Parts and Patterns in the Definitions**
Here's an analysis of the missing parts and patterns in the provided definitions, along with corrected versions:
1. **Circular Definition**
- _Missing Parts/Patterns_: The original definition is redundant because it uses the same term to define itself.
- _Corrected Definition_: "Circular definition occurs when a term is defined by using the term itself or a closely related term, resulting in a lack of meaningful
information."
2. **Jail**
- _Missing Parts/Patterns_: The original definition is imprecise; it doesn't distinguish between jail and prison or mention the typical reasons for incarceration in a jail.
- _Corrected Definition_: "Jail is a secure facility where individuals are held while awaiting trial or sentencing, or for serving shorter sentences for minor crimes. It
differs from prison, which is typically for longer sentences and convicted criminals."
3. **Horse**
- _Missing Parts/Patterns_: The definition is too broad, lacking unique characteristics of a horse. It doesn't specify that horses are domesticated or commonly used by
humans.
- _Corrected Definition_: "A horse is a large, domesticated mammal of the species *Equus ferus caballus*. Horses are known for their strength, speed, and their role in
human activities like riding, racing, and agricultural work."
4. **Synchronous Learning**
- _Missing Parts/Patterns_: The definition lacks specificity about how synchronous learning operates and what it involves.
- _Corrected Definition_: "Synchronous learning refers to a mode of education where students and instructors interact in real-time, either in person or via online
platforms like video conferencing. It includes scheduled sessions and live feedback, facilitating immediate interaction and collaboration."
5. **Asynchronous Learning**
- _Missing Parts/Patterns_: The definition is vague, not explaining what makes asynchronous learning different or why it's used.
- _Corrected Definition_: "Asynchronous learning is a mode of education where students access learning materials and complete assignments at their own pace,
without the need for real-time interaction with instructors or peers. It typically involves pre-recorded lectures, written materials, and other resources, allowing for
flexible study schedules."