Developing 5 Paragraphs Essay
Developing 5 Paragraphs Essay
• Narrative essay
• Descriptive essay
• Expository essay
• Persuasive essay
DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
Developing the
five-paragraph
essay
Structure of The Five-Paragraph
Essay
THE
INTRODUCTION
PARAGRAPH
The Introduction Paragraph
• The introduction to an essay is a very
important section in an essay as it sets
the expectations of the reader.
Types of introduction:
•General-to-specific
•Definition/Explanation
•Set the scene
•Problem-solution
Exercise: Identify the type of the
Introduction
Exercise: Identify the type of the
Introduction
Exercise: Identify the type of the
Introduction
Imagine a world without computers. Computers have become
dependable part of our lives; where imagining having a day go
by without using computer seems unnatural. The world
without computers would be the one where people have to
undergo many challenges. At present where the computer
has become the integral part of our world, the world without
computer would be troublesome. Computers are useful in
many aspects of life. In fact, the medicals who use computers
or with the help of the computer technology have discovered
the cures for many diseases, businessman could expand their
business globally and there would not be any computers
where people could talk easily with their distant relatives.
Exercise: Identify the type of the
Introduction
Tips : The don’ts when you begin your introduction
•Don’t apologise
e.g: I would like to apologise if my points are not enough
•Don’t use a signposts
e.g: In this essay I will discuss
•Don’t use false facts and examples
•Don’t show your weak knowledge about the topic
e.g: Actually, I don’t really know about this topic
Actually, I’m not sure about the advantages of TV
Thesis statement
Thesis statement is the statement that has the sub-topics of the
whole essay and it is normally the last sentence of the introduction.
THE BODY
PARAGRAPHS
The body paragraphs develop the idea presented in the introduction.
There are three main parts of the body paragraph. A body paragraph
discusses a sub-topic of the whole essay.
S – statistics
A – anecdote
E – examples
R – reasons
A - authority
STATISTIC
• Statistics:
i. use words such as 'in summary', 'in conclusion', 'in short', 'all in all', 'in
brief, 'in other words', 'on the whole', 'to conclude', 'to sum up' to begin
your conclusion
ii. you need to restate your thesis statement:
– use different words or sentences to restate your thesis
statement (not
exact same like the thesis statement in the introduction).
iii. you need to summarize your sub-topics:
– summarize your sub-topics and their main points only (no need
to me everything),
– show how important the sub-topics are and why they are
important to be mentioned again in the conclusion,
You need to make your finals comments that can leave some impacts on
the reader. You can make your final comments in the form of:
• Suggestions
e.g: Therefore, the government should increase the number of police
officers patrolling at the black areas so that crimes can be reduced.
Thus, the government should double the penalty for the traffic culprits in
order to reduce the number of accidents on the road.
• Prediction
e.g: If we do not start recycling now, the future generation will have to
live with rubbish.
• Quotation
e.g: As what many people say, ‘Prevention is better than cure’.
Example 1:
In conclusion, watching TV has more advantages
than disadvantages because TV is a source of
information and entertainment as well as a means
of socialization. Therefore, we should not have all
negative views towards watching TV as TV is a
beneficial and significant invention that can change
our lives in a positive way. It is important for us to
watch TV and without TV, it is difficult for us to
know what is going on in the world immediately, to
heal our boredom and sadness and also to build
good relationship with people. Thus, TV is such an
effective creation.
Example 2:
Read the following sentences and underline the transitides. Also, write the logical
relationship in the space provided.
1. _____________________
He passed the examination with flying colours despite the fact that
he did not put in much effort.
2. _____________________
Soccer teams need really good strikers to win championships.
Similarly, football teams need really good quarterbacks.
3.______________________
Some British car companies made inefficient, uninspired products for
decades. As a result, they are now going bankrupt.
4 .___________________
Properly inflated tyres can help your gas mileage. In fact, it is one
of the most effective ways to increase the performance of your
car.
5 .___________________
Adibah is a very strict teacher. That is to say she is often looking
over your shoulders watching everything you do.
6 .___________________
Luck is always on Irine's side. For instance, I once saw her win
RM100 on a horse race because she liked the name of the horse.
7.____________________
To summarise, transitions help improve the cohesiveness of one's
writing.
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TASK
• General statement
• Thesis statement