Business Correspondence
Business Correspondence
Business Correspondence
“ Business correspondence is an art of
“
selling your thoughts.
1.
1. Principles of letter writing
2. Letter format
5. Offering letter
“I don’t appreciate how your team ignores requests for collaboration from
my team. The work we do is equally as important as your work. Could you
make certain that your team collaborates more readily from now on?”
“I understand that your team is extremely busy and receives many requests to
collaborate on project work. However, my team is working a highly urgent project
with enormous mutual benefits. I would greatly appreciate if you could ask your
team to collaborate more effectively with mine to move this project forward faster.
If there is any help that we can provide to make this happen, please let me know.”
CLARITY
“Your sales conversion rate is below 50%. You must improve this to
the team average of 65% or higher.”
CORRECTNESS
“You may enter the building during opening hours but must show
relevant I.D.”
“You may enter the building during the opening hours of 9am to
5pm daily, but must show your employee identity card.”
CONCISENESS
“You haven’t completed the task that I set you,” is a message full
of ambiguity. Instead, make sure you include all relevant facts.
“The data analysis for client ABC that I asked for on March 5 should
have been completed by today. Will you have it finished this
afternoon?”
02 Letter Format
03
Layout of Business
Letter
Block, Modified Block, Semi-block
Heading &
Inside Address
Block Format Style
Modified Block Style
Semi-Block Style
Salutation
& Body
Block Format Style
Modified Block Style
Semi-Block Style
Signature
Block Format Style
Modified Block Style
Semi-Block Style
04 Kinds of letter
05 Offering Letter
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Business Heading
A
B
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Business Heading: Includes information about your business and theirs, such as the business
name, address, and points of contact.
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
A
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
B
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Introduction: Frames why you are sending the letter and then shares a bit about your business as
well as teases the purpose.
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Statement of Purpose: Summary of the most important contents of your business proposal
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Call-to-Action & Outro and Signature
A
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Call-to-Action & Outro and Signature
B
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Call-to-Action: End your proposal with a sentence that tells the reader what to do next.
Usually, this next step will be to read your attached proposal.
• “You can find the proposal below, attached to this email. Please give it a read and feel free to call
us at (Your Phone Number) if any questions arise.”
• “Please read the proposal below and give us a call or send us an email when you’ve finished to set
up time to talk about the proposal, answer any of your questions, and discuss the possibility of
working together.”
• “Please read the proposal below. To make sure you have all the information you need, let’s put
some time on the calendar for me to answer any questions and hear your thoughts. Are you
available next week at (Three Date/Time Options)?”
ELEMENTS OF OFFERING LETTER
Outro and Signature: End with a polite outro stating how excited you are about the opportunity to
work together. Finally, sign the document.
06
Replying Business
Letter
THE HEADING
Return
Address
Date
Recipient
Address
SALUTATION & BODY
SIGNATURE
ALTERNATIVES:
• Regards
• Sincerely
• Cordially
• With gratitude
• Kind Regards
• With appreciation
• Yours truly
SUMMARY
Information to remember
1.
1. Focus on Receiver
3. Be clearer in Delivering
1.4. Be Specific
Principles Write Perfectly, Mistakes
5. Free
Inside Address
2. Recipient address
3.
Format
Salutation
Body
1.4. Introduction, reason for writing &
purpose
5. Signature
1.
1. Block Format
2.
Layout Modified Block
3. Semi-block
Heading
1.
1. Business name, address, contact
Inside Address
2. Recipient address
3.
Types
Salutation
Body
1.4. Introduction, reason for writing &
purpose
5. Signature
Business Heading
1.
1. Business name, address, contact
Introduction
2. Reason for writing & purpose
Offering 3.
Statement of Purpose
Summary of the most important
Letter
contents
Call-to-action
1.4. What to do next
2. Salutation
Reply Body
3. Introduction,
reason for writing & purpose
1.4. Signature
THANK YOU