RWS
RWS
Patterns of organization can help your
readers follow the ideas within your essay
and your paragraphs, but they can also
work as methods of development to help
you recognize and further develop ideas
and relationships in your writing.
P S K A O H L R B Y O C T S
S T O R Y
T P C E O V P A E L R N O Y
E V E N T
L V R I T C W E I E D A S V N S
V I V I D
R G T K O I R S I A Y M A S N E H T
N A R R A T E
Y I G N L E S D F M K P A L
S K I L L
STORY
EVENT
SKILL
What is
narration?
Narration
The most basic pattern of
development.
Describes how, when, and where an
event or occurrence actually happened.
Used to tell a story or focus on a set of
related events.
1. Logical Actions
Are considered the very movements
within the plot or the narrative that
drive the characters forward, be it
during the dialogue, or within a scene.
Example
It was late spring the last time we saw Ross. He was
standing at the edge of the hill, and he never so much
as looked up even though we were sure he knew we
were there. There was a bunch of flowers clutched to
his fist, but there really was no reason for him to be
standing there. We knew that Carrie wasn't coming to
see him. But he stood there anyway, waiting, even as
the afternoon sunlight deepened towards the evening.
He must have been standing there for hours.
2. Way of Narration
Refers to how the writer presents the
story.
Includes the pace by which scenes
are given out.
Clipped Narration
“He came and talked to us.
Then he left the house and
then he drove the car back
home.”
Paced Narration
“He came and talked to us for a few moments. He
seemed upset, but he managed to get through all
the bad news. Shaking our hands before he left
the house come twilight, he seemed to feel better
now that he had delivered the news. He waved
from the car as he pulled out of the driveway,
narrowly missing the mailbox again, and drove
off to return home.”
3. Terminology
places emphasis on the fact that
concepts are critical to the narration.