peer editing sheet - Copy
peer editing sheet - Copy
Instructions: Provide the completed editing sheet and proof of revisions with your final good.
Section Circle Comments / Suggestions (do not correct errors)
Format - Page 1
Thesis:
Is it clear what the writer intends to Yes No State what the essay will prove:
argue in the essay?
Could you argue against the Yes No State a possible opposing argument:
thesis?
Body/Organizers State the key word(s) that refer to the thesis and
Does each body paragraph start Yes No organizers.
with a clear topic sentence that Body Para #1:
connects to the thesis and Body Para #2:
organizer? Body Para #3:
Cont’d Please list Para # and concern in point form:
Is each paragraph organized
around a distinct logical argument Yes No
proving the thesis? If not, which
ones are not distinct or logical?
Does each paragraph provide
logical textual support /proof for Yes No
assertions, including direct
quotations?
Is the context of the direct textual
support introduced before the Yes No
proof? (5 w’s)
Is the logical textual support
explained and linked back to the Yes No
thesis with clarity?
Does the writer wrap up a point in a
satisfying conclusion and transition Yes No
to the next point effectively?
Does the order of the paragraphs
flow logically (chronologically?) or Yes No
do they seem haphazard and/or
disconnected?
Yes No
● Weak diction?
Yes No
● Lack of textual support?
Yes No
● Weak or illogical arguments?
Final Comments: