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This document outlines the structure and components of an effective discursive essay introduction, including the use of a hook, background information, and a clear thesis statement. It emphasizes the importance of presenting both sides of an argument and provides examples and techniques for crafting a strong introduction. Additionally, it highlights common pitfalls to avoid, such as vagueness, lack of clarity in the thesis, and emotional bias.

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Week 4 - Class notes

This document outlines the structure and components of an effective discursive essay introduction, including the use of a hook, background information, and a clear thesis statement. It emphasizes the importance of presenting both sides of an argument and provides examples and techniques for crafting a strong introduction. Additionally, it highlights common pitfalls to avoid, such as vagueness, lack of clarity in the thesis, and emotional bias.

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DISCURSIVE ESSAY – INTRODUCTION

I. Components

Hook + Background information (Topic introduction) + Thesis statement

1. Hook (optional)
The hook is the first sentence of your introduction and is designed to grab the reader’s
attention. Effective hooks can be rhetorical questions, startling facts, or intriguing anecdotes.
For example, asking a question like 'Is social media more harmful than beneficial?' invites
curiosity.
-> tạo sự tò mò và hứng thú cho người đọc

2. Background Information (Topic introduction) – Giới thiệu về chủ đề


This section provides context about the topic and helps the reader understand why it is
relevant. It should be presented neutrally without taking a side. For instance, discussing the
rise of technology in education without advocating for or against it.

3. Thesis Statement
The thesis statement outlines the main argument or points that will be discussed in the
essay. It should present both sides of the argument. An example could be: 'This essay will
explore the advantages and disadvantages of a four-day workweek.'
Example: Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others,
however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 [Topic introduction] [The debate over the ethics of zoos has intensified as wildlife
conservation becomes more urgent.] [Topic introduction] [While some argue that
zoos are cruel and confine animals unnecessarily, others believe they are essential for
protecting endangered species and educating the public.] [Thesis statement][This
essay will explore both views, ultimately arguing that zoos can serve a beneficial
purpose in conservation if they prioritize animal welfare]

*** 2- sentence technique: Short, fast and effective

Time allocation: 10 – 15 % of the time, 3-5 minutes


2 sentences: Introduce the topic + give a general answer
Example: Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that
it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
 (Topic introduction) [It is true that genetic engineering is a key area of modern
scientific research, with broad implications for all human societies.] (Thesis
statement) [While I accept that this field of technology may have its dangers, I
believe that the benefits of genetic engineering outweigh the drawbacks.]
II. Mini-practice
Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others
believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

III. Useful language (Homewwork)

Presenting the Topic


 In recent years, there has been a growing debate on…
 One of the most controversial issues today relates to…
 The question of whether… has become a matter of debate in many fields.
 Over the past few years, there has been a significant increase in discussions about…

Expressing Both Sides


 On the one hand, some people argue that…
 Supporters of this view claim that…
 On the other hand, critics argue that…
 While there are clear benefits of…, there are also potential drawbacks.

Acknowledging the Complexity


 It is often said that…
 There is no doubt that…
 Many people believe that…, however, others think otherwise.
 While it is commonly believed that… there are some who argue that…

Significance of the Issue


 This issue is of utmost importance because…
 The significance of this topic cannot be understated as…
 It is essential to examine both sides as it impacts…
 Understanding this debate is crucial as it relates to…

Establishing the Aim of the Essay


 The aim of this essay is to explore both sides of the argument…
 In this essay, I will examine… and provide my opinion on…
 This essay will discuss the main arguments for and against…
 This discussion seeks to address the issue by looking at…

III. Common pitfalls to avoid

1. Being too vague


Starting with a broad or vague statement that does not clearly indicate the topic.
Example: “People have different opinions on many issues.”
 “The debate over whether school uniforms should be mandatory in public schools has
sparked significant discussion among educators, parents, and students.”

2. Lack of a clear thesis statement


Failing to present a clear thesis statement that outlines the main argument or position.
Example: “This essay will discuss several aspects of climate change.”
 “This essay will explore both perspectives before concluding that a balanced approach
is essential for sustainable development.”

3. Using emotional language or bias


Using emotionally charged language or showing bias in the introduction
Example: “It is outrageous that some people deny climate change despite the overwhelming
evidence.”
 “The scientific consensus on climate change presents a pressing challenge that divides
opinion on the best course of action.

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