EAPP Module 1
EAPP Module 1
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What I Know
A. To find out what you already know about the topic to be discussed in this
module, take the Pre-test. Write your answers in your notebook.
Enumerate the different features of academic text.
1. _____________
2. _____________
3. _____________
4. ____________
B. Write True if the statement is correct and False if not. Write your answers in
your notebook.
________ 1. Academic language should be explicit, formal and factual as well as
objective and analytical in nature.
________ 2. Academic language should sound complex and be difficult to write
and understand.
_______3. Academic writing should be clear and concise in order to
communicate its contents in the best way.
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________4. In English, contractions are used in informal settings and are
therefore not appropriate for academic texts.
________5. An academic text makes use of complex jargons to promote a higher
level of comprehension.
________6. Academic text uses words which tones up claims expressing
certainty.
________7. Academic text helps fill existing gaps between information.
________8. It is in academic text that issues are stated to provoke information
discussion.
C. Rewrite the following sentences, replacing the informal abbreviated form
with a more formal equivalent.
1. The radical restructuring of British politics after 1931 doesn‟t lie in the
events of 13-28 August, but in the changing attitudes within the National
Government.
2. This isn't easy to do since most historians persist in speaking of The
National Government as if the same sort of government ruled from 1931 to
1940.
3. The first National Government wasn't intended to be a coalition government
in the normal sense of the term.
4. These aren't at all original or exotic but are based on the ordinary things
that most people tend to eat.
What`s In
You have learned from your previous years about the structures of
academic text. Can you still remember them? Try doing the activity below.
Activity 1:
Using your own understanding, answer the following:
1. What is an academic text? (5pts)
2-6. What are the different examples of academic text? List down at least 5
examples.
7. What is non-academic text? (5pts)
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What`s New
Read the two paragraphs below. Identify which of the paragraphs is more
formal. Then answer the following questions.
Paragraph 1
Marketing? Yes, well… marketing is, I guess, about someone trying to
…let me see…get people interested you know, in things they… oh yes, want
them to buy.
Paragraph 2
Marketing refers to communicating about a product or service. It has the
purpose of encouraging the recipients of the communication to purchase or use
the product or service.
Questions:
1. Which of the two paragraphs is more formal?
What Is It
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contractions or informal vocabulary. It is impersonal and objective by avoiding
direct reference to people or feelings, and instead emphasizing objects, facts
and ideas. It is technical by using vocabulary specific to the discipline.
There are four main types of academic writing. These are descriptive,
analytical, persuasive, and critical. Each of these types of writing has specific
language features and purposes.
FOUR MAIN TYPES OF ACADEMIC TEXTS
1. Descriptive
The simplest type of academic writing is descriptive. Its purpose is to
provide facts or information. An example would be a summary of an article or a
report of the results of an experiment.
The kind of instructions for a purely descriptive assignment include:
„identify‟, „report‟, „record‟, „summarize‟, and „define‟.
2. Analytical
It‟s rare for a university-level text to be purely descriptive. Most academic
writing is also analytical. Analytical writing includes descriptive writing, but
also requires you to re-organize the facts and information you describe into
categories, groups, parts, types or relationships.
Sometimes, these categories or relationships are already part of the
discipline, while in other cases you will create them specifically for your text. If
you‟re comparing two theories, you might break your comparison into several
parts, for example: how each theory deals with social context, how each theory
deals with language learning, and how each theory can be used in practice.
The kinds of instructions for an analytical assignment include: „analyze‟,
„compare‟, „contrast‟, „relate‟, and „examine‟.
3. Persuasive
In most academic writing, you are required to go at least one step further
than analytical writing, to persuasive writing. Persuasive writing has all the
features of analytical writing (that is, information plus re-organizing the
information), with the addition of your own point of view. Most essays are
persuasive, and there is a persuasive element in at least the discussion and
conclusion of a research article.
Points of view in academic writing can include an argument,
recommendation, interpretation of findings or evaluation of the work of others.
In persuasive writing, each claim you make needs to be supported by some
evidence, for example a reference to research findings or published sources.
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The kinds of instructions for a persuasive assignment include: „argue‟,
„evaluate‟, „discuss‟, and „take a position‟.
4. Critical
Critical writing is common for research, postgraduate and advanced
undergraduate writing. It has all the features of persuasive writing, with the
added feature of at least one other point of view. While persuasive writing
requires you to have your own point of view on an issue or topic, critical writing
requires you to consider at least two points of view, including your own.
For example, you may explain a researcher‟s interpretation or argument
and then evaluate the merits of the argument, or give your own alternative
interpretation.
Examples of critical writing assignments include a critique of a journal
article, or a literature review that identifies the strengths and weaknesses of
existing research. The kinds of instructions for critical writing include:
„critique‟, „debate‟, „disagree‟, and „evaluate‟.
The language of the discipline that students need to learn and use to
participate and engage meaningful ways in the content area.
The oral and written language used for academic purposes
The means by which students develop and express content
understandings
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Features of Academic Language
1. Formal
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A. Contractions:
Don’t – do not
Wasn’t – was not
Can’t – cannot (Observe that it is written in one word)
It’s – it is (Observe the difference between “it’s” (contraction of “it is”) and the
possessive “its” (as in “The dog wagged its tail”)
The World Health Organization (WHO) has expressed concern over the spread of
the virus. The WHO has therefore….
Latin abbreviations should not be used in the text itself but may be used
in parentheses or in notes and illustrations.
C. Two-word verbs
Avoid using two-word verbs such as put off, bring up, give up etc.
Instead of using two word verbs, use its equivalent single word verb to make it
formal.
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Example:
Put off - postpone
Bring up - raise
Give up - surrender
D. Subheadings, numbering and bullet points
E. Asking questions
F. Colloquial words and expressions
In writing academic texts, we should have to avoid using colloquial words
and expressions such as stuff, a lot, thing, etc.
2. Analytical
3. Objective
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To be objective means you consider the following:
A. Personal pronouns
In general, academic texts are impersonal in nature. This means that the
main emphasis should be on evidence and arguments and not based on
personal opinion and feelings. The use of personal pronouns such as “I”, “we”
and “you” should be avoided as much as possible.
You should be aware that the use of personal pronouns may be different
between academic fields and that some disciplines do not accept it at all. Make
sure to check what is recommended, either by asking your instructor or by
reading other academic texts within your subject.
Example:
Examples:
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4. Explicit
A. Major signposting is used to signal key aspects of the work, such as the
purpose of an academic paper and its structure. Some examples of major
signposting:
B. Linking words and phrases create coherence and give the reader directions
by marking transitions between sentences and paragraphs. Some examples of
linking words and phrases:
However, …
Firstly, ... . Secondly, ...
For example …
… because …
Being explicit in your writing also means that you are not vague but
rather very specific in the presentation of ideas, numbers and years. Being
specific helps add precision to your writing.
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Words that are easily confused
Some words may look very similar but have very different meanings. For
example you might write “manger” instead of “manager”. Note that this kind of
mistake is not discovered by the spellchecking function of your word processor.
In order to avoid these types of mistakes it is recommended that you consult a
dictionary.
5. Punctuation
You may use punctuation and with that, sentence length, to create
variation in your writing. If all your sentences are very short or very long the
reading becomes somewhat tedious.
Example:
The research has led to many results. One result is described here.
The research has led to many results, one of which is described here.
Example:
The research has led to many results one result is described here.
Sentence fragments
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These are examples of sentence fragments:
Such as fruit and vegetables. (What are fruit and vegetables examples of?)
Shattered glass all over the floor. (This is a fragment because there is no main
verb)
What`s More
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Corporate Social Responsibility (CSR) can generate a positive reputation
for a company leading to possibly more sales and growth. According to Jones et
al (2019), a corporation that invests in the environmental and ethical
approaches of CSR will demonstrate to the public and the media that they are
a responsible company. Watson (2018) provides evidence that this improves
consumer sales as customers tend to support ethical green business practice
thus improving profitability and encouraging growth. For example, a yoghurt
company called Yeo Valley has been investing in making its products organic,
creating fully recyclable packaging and reducing its CO2 output. As a result,
profits, have doubled within the last two years providing the company with a
range of opportunities to expand (Peterson, 2019). Overall, the evidence seems
to suggest that investing in CSR can improve brand image and productivity.
Exercises 2
Now let us try to evaluate again this paragraph. Rewrite this paragraph
to make it more formal, considering the features discussed.
Marketing? Yes, well… marketing is, I guess, it is uhm…it is about
someone trying to …let me see…get people interested you know, in things
they… oh yes, want them to buy,.I guess..
How about the next paragraph? Try revising it by making it more objective.
We don't really know what language proficiency is but many people have
talked about it for a long time. Some researchers have tried to find ways for us
to make teaching and testing more communicative because that is how
language works. I think that language is something we use for communicating,
not an object for us to study and we remember that when we teach and test it.
I learned that :
Academic language has a unique set of rules: it should be explicit, formal
and factual as well as objective and analytical in nature.
Formal writing requires considerable effort to construct meaningful
sentences, paragraphs, and arguments that make the text easy to
comprehend. Correct use of terminology and language facilitates your
communication and heightens the credibility of your work. Academic texts
is relatively formal. In general, this means that you should avoid the
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following: contractions, acronyms and abbreviations, two-word verbs,
Subheadings, numbering and bullet points, asking questions, colloquial
words and expressions.
Analytical where the complexity of the subject matter is acknowledged
through critical analysis.
Objective where your writing is based on research and not on the writer‟s
own opinion about a given topic. To be objective means you consider the
following: Avoiding Personal pronouns, and the use of passive voice in a
sentence.
Explicit which means that there is a clear presentation of ideas in the
paper.One way to accomplish clarity and structure in your text is through
the use of signposts.Signposts are words and phrases that you can use in
your text in order to guide the reader along. Signposting can be divided into
two different categories: major signposting and linking words and
phrases.
Punctuation. Use of punctuation differs between languages; an example
is the upside-down question mark at the beginning of interrogative
sentences in Spanish.
What I Can Do
Activity 1
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Text averral and attribution are basic notions for the organization of
interaction in written text. The assumption is made that the author of a
non-fictional artefact (Sinclair, 1986) avers every statement in his or her text
so long as he/she does not attribute these statements to another source-
whether that source is other or self. Averral is manifested in various ways in
the text- negatively, through absence of attribution, and positively, through
commenting, evaluating or metastructuring of the discourse. Attribution, on
the other hand, is signalled in the text by a number of devices of which
reporting is an obvious one.
2.
PO Box 1452
Almeira
Spain
Missing you,
Almeira
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Activity 2
Rewrite the following text using an objective style of writing.
I want to argue that all children in Australia have the right to be
educated in their mother tongue. I expect that many children in the past spent
months or years in school but did not understand the lessons. I am convinced
that many migrant children are failing in our education system because we do
not have bilingual education programmes. If we look at the U.N. report on
language and education, we can discover that children who become literate in
their own language have the greatest chance of educational success. People
have been discussing the latest figures on university entrance recently and you
can tell
that migrant children do less well than “Anglo” children at present. I suspect
that this is because they have difficulty with English and I would claim that the
government has done too little to help these children. Surely the best way to
achieve this in Australia is for the State governments to set up bilingual
education programmes for all migrant children. I would suggest that this is the
number one important issue for multicultural Australia.
Assessment
Activity 1
Rewrite the following sentences by replacing the informal abbreviated
form with a more formal equivalent.
1. The students of today‟s generation aren‟t afraid of failing.
2. This isn‟t the result the group was expecting.
3. The editor couldn‟t access the file you sent.
4. These acts aren‟t example of being a good student.
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Activity 2
Replace the underlined informal two-word verb with a more formal
equivalent suited to the following sentences. Choose from the pool of words
below the single verb form suited to the two-word verb in each item.
Eliminate save return absorb produce
1. Dieters often feel that they should totally get rid of high-fat and high-sugar
foods.
2. The court thinks that it is just and equitable to give back the property.
3. The English liked coal fires even though they do not always give off much
heat.
4. My high-school friend enrolled for three years with the army so he could put
away enough money to go to university and study law.
Activity 3
Compare the two sentences. Identify which sentence observes objectivity.
Put a check mark (√) on the blanks before the sentence. Write your answer on
your notebook.
_________ In my opinion, this is a very interesting study.
_________ This is a very interesting study.
_________ It is easy to forget how different life was 50 years ago.
_________ You can easily forget how difficult life was 50 years ago.
Activity 4
Read and answer the following questions. Explain your answer briefly.
(2pts each)
1. When can we say that the language used in academic text is formal?
2. Differentiate the features of academic language.
3. Explain objectivity in writing academic text.
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References:
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