Teachers Students Preferences EA, Thesis
Teachers Students Preferences EA, Thesis
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Dedication
I dedicate this work to my parents for their support and prayers; and to my wife, for
her continuous support, patience, and encouragement; and to my dear children for
their love, support, and understanding.
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Acknowledgments
First and foremost, I praise and glorify Allah for enabling me to finish this work.
Heart felt gratitude is expressed to Nile Valley University, College of Graduate
Studies and Scientific Research represented in all faculty members. Also, I would
like to express my great gratitude to my advisor and teacher Prof. Ibrahim Al-Faki
for his guidance and support, and invaluable suggestions throughout the study.
My thanks go to my MA professors, classmates, and colleagues for their love,
support and friendship. Finally, my sincere appreciation is also extended to the
teachers and students whose participation led to the achievement of this thesis.
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Abstract
This research showed students‟ and teachers‟ tendencies towards error correction in
writing of classroom written errors in Saudi EFL context through a survey. In this
study, 50 teachers and 100 students were required to react on two surveys, one for
teachers and another one for students. The data were gathered and analyzed by
descriptive method. The results collected from teachers and students revealed
positive tendency for written error correction and showed a lot of mutual
preferences among teachers and students as well. However, there were some
differences, for instance; students favored to get all their written errors marked and
corrected by their teachers, but teachers, on the other side, desire to focus on some
errors which are of great importance and leave the others for students. Some
teachers believe that written corrective feedback is wasting teachers‟ time whereas
students think that feedback provision is on the teachers‟ responsibilities.
Additionally, this research revealed different theories and teaching methodologies
related to error correction, the types of errors and the techniques of error correction,
such as teacher correction, peer-correction or self-correction. Finally, the research
recommended some solutions to the above-mentioned problems.
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الخالصة
يخٕاٚي ٘ذا اٌبحذ اٌىشف ػٓ اٌطزق اٌّضخخدِت في حصحيح األخطاء اٌخي ححدد ارٕاء ِّارصت ِٙارة اٌىخابةت
ٚاٌخي ححظي بمبٛي ِةٓ لبةً اٌدارصةيٓ ٚاٌّؼٍّةيٓ ػٍةس اةد صةٛاء فةي ااةدا اٌماِؼةاث اٌضةؼٛميت ِةٓ خة ي
ٚححٍيةةً ٘ةةذٖ حزٚيةةد ػةةدم ِةةٓ اٌّؼٍّةةيٓ ٚ )05اٌدارصةةيٓ )055باصةةخبأت حخؼٍةةك بٙةةذا اٌشةةمْع ٚصةةيخُ ػةةز
اٌبيأاث بطزيمت ٚصفيتع ٚاظٙزث اٌبيأاث اٌخي حُ اٌخٛصً اٌيٙا ِٓ خة ي االصةخبياْ اْ اٌّؼٍّةيٓ ٚاٌدارصةيٓ
يخّخؼةة ْٛبٕظةةزة ايمابيةةت ٌخصةةحيح األخطةةاء اٌىخابيةةتع ٚاضةةحج إٌخةةايض اينةةا اْ ٕ٘ةةان بؼةةج االصةةخزاحيمياث
اٌّخفك ػٍيٙا ِٓ لبً اٌّؼٍّيٓ ٚاٌدراصيٓع ٚباٌزغُ ِةٓ لٌةه فمةف افةامث اٌبييأةاث اٌخةي حةُ اٌحصةٛي ػٍيٙةا اْ
ٕ٘ةةان رّةةت حنةةارأل فةةي األراء بةةيٓ اٌّؼٍّةةيٓ ٚاٌدارصةةيٓ ػٍةةس صةةبيً اٌّزةةاي يفنةةً اٌط ة أل اْ يمةة َٛاٌّؼٍةةُ
بخصحيح جّيغ االخطاء بيّٕا يفنً اٌّؼٍّ ْٛاٌخزويز ػٍس بؼج ِةٓ ٘ةذٖ االخطةاء ٔظةزا الّ٘يخٙةا ِةغ حةزن
اٌبالي ٌٍط أل أفضُٙع ٚفي ٘ذا اٌصدم ل٘ة بؼةج اٌّؼٍّة ٌ ْٛػخمةام بةاْ حمةديُ اٌخلذيةت اٌزاجؼةت ية ما اٌةس
ضياع ٚلج اٌّدرس بيّٕا يمزَ اٌدارص ْٛبأٗ جزء ِةٓ اٌّٙةاَ اٌخةي البةد اْ يمة َٛبٙةا اٌّؼٍةُع اضةافت اٌةس ِةا
اٌبحذ بؼج إٌظزياث ٚطزايك اٌخدريش اٌخةي ٌٙةا ػ لةت ٚريمةت بؼٍّيةت حصةحيح االخطةاء صبك صيضخؼز
فن ػٓ أٔٛاع األخطاء ٚاالصخزاحيمبياث اٌّخبؼت ٌٍخلٍ ػٍيٙا ػٍي صبيً اٌّزاي حصحيح األخطاء بٛاصطت
اٌّؼٍةةُ أ ٚبخفاػةةً اٌدارصةةيٓ أفضةةِ ُٙةةغ بؼن ة ُٙاٌةةبؼج أٚاخةةي ِحاٌٚةةت امران اٌةةدارس ٔفضةةٗ ٌٙةةذٖ األخطةةاء
ٚاٌخؼاًِ ِؼٙا بشىً فزماع ٚصيخطزق اٌبحذ اٌي ايمام بؼج اٌحٍٛي ٌٍّشى ث آٔفت اٌذوزع
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Table of Contents
Contents
Dedication .................................................................................................................. 2
Acknowledgments ...................................................................................................... 3
Abstract....................................................................................................................... 4
CHAPTER ONE....................................................................................................... 10
Introduction .............................................................................................................. 10
1.6 Limitations...................................................................................................... 16
Review of Literature................................................................................................. 18
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2.2 Definitions of errors ....................................................................................... 18
3.2 Population....................................................................................................... 47
APPENDICES .......................................................................................................... 78
REFERENCES ......................................................................................................... 85
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CHAPTER ONE
Introduction
1.0 Background
Foreign language learning does not occur at once, since it is considered a
progressive process. Within the stages of this process, mistakes are expected to be
made. It is taken for granted that accepting the fact that errors are inescapable part
of the learning process is crucial for both teachers and students (Davies & Pearse,
2000). In fact errors could be dealt with as a sign of learning in (SLA) second
language acquisition. Due to students‟ errors, they can work hard to master
concepts they have misunderstood and define exactly extra work they might
require.
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learning environment by either providing or prohibiting their intentional awareness
and active engagement (Katayama, 2007). This stems from the fact that learners are
expected to be highly motivated in doing things that they prefer. Based on that, it is
needful to recognize that learners have different attitudes and preferences i.e. styles
in the way they like to be corrected. For instance, some students prefer a focus on
form, while others do not. Teaching methods also vary. Some instructors have a
tendency for all errors to be corrected whereas some desire to be lenient and still
some others leave the errors uncorrected (Noora, 2006).
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learning styles will enable teachers to use appropriate techniques and methods that
are expected to be convenient to the students' preferences. Above all, matching the
learning styles of students in a class and the teaching style of the instructor would
help ameliorate students‟ learning, attitudes, behavior, and motivation (D. R. Ferris,
2003). Subsequently, it is worthy to detect the ways via which students favor to be
corrected.
At last, the current study first focuses on both teachers‟ and students‟
preferences for error correction since these attitudes have a great influence on the
whole learning process, and then investigate the difficulties of the teachers in
conducting feedback and of the students in revising the sheets after receiving them
supported with feedback from their teachers (Hamouda, 2011).
In compliance with the above statement, Saudi students achieve high scores in
speaking and listening skills, but not in writing, since they spend most of their
learning time speaking the language rather than writing it. Therefore, the researcher
believes that the problem might stem from the fear of making mistakes and being
corrected form their peers or teachers.
Main Questions:
1. What are the preferences (attitudes) of EFL teachers for error correction
in EFL writing classrooms?
2. What are the preferences (attitudes) of EFL PYD students for error
correction in EFL writing classrooms?
3. Do EFL teachers effectively use these preferences and feedback
techniques in their classrooms?
4. What are the most popular preferences for error correction in EFL
writing classrooms?
5. What are the obstacles of employing those preferences for error
correction?
6. What expected benefits do EFL students think they will gain from
recognizing favored techniques of error correction concerning second
language development?
7. Are there any training materials for fostering error correction
preferences in EFL teachers‟ preparation programs in the Saudi EFL
context?
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Sub- Questions:
There are some discrepancies of what teachers already know and what they actually
do.
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1.6 Limitations
The study focuses only on EFL teachers‟ and students‟ preferences for error
correction in EFL classroom written work in the Saudi context. It is also restricted
to EFL teachers' practices in their EFL classrooms and EFL students' practices as
well. The motivation for choosing this group stems from its distinctive features, is
that it has a collection of teachers from different Arab and foreign countries, who
have different cultural, academic, educational and national backgrounds. All of the
students participated are enrolled at Preparatory Year Deanship (PYD) level at
Majmaah University. This would restrict the generalizability of the study findings
to the participants at this university. Moreover, the study depends on a self-
reporting research method (questionnaire, survey); therefore, data accuracy
depends on the practitioners‟ points of view, perspectives, and their willingness and
ability to give accurate data regarding their preferences for error correction. Finally,
the researcher believes that some preferences are more favored than others by both
teachers and students. Therefore, there is a possibility for bias in the findings of the
study. However, the researcher will use various strategies to minimize the level of
bias, as will be discussed later in Chapter 3.
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teachers, and the second will gather information from EFL students. Thus,
receiving various types of evidence can best provide a thorough account of patterns
of interaction in the TEFL setting. The tool used to analyze the obtained data will
be a computer program called Statistic Package for Social Science (SPSS).
PYD, Majmaah,
Male (main)
campus
PYD,
Zulfi, male
campus
The researcher will choose a comprehensive sample randomly from four various
branches (two male and two female), in two different cities within Riyadh Region.
The two cities are Majmaah and Zulfi. Zulfi is in the middle, between Majmaah
and Al- Qassim. Zulfi has some colleges following Majmaah University.
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CHAPTER TWO
Review of Literature
2.1 Introduction
This chapter begins by defining the definition of errors and the different types
of errors. The following section talks about some theories of Second Language
Acquisition (henceforth SLA) connected to the error correction (henceforth EC). A
background of language teaching methods is presented next to shed some light on
the popular methods that are followed in teaching writing. The target is employing
the role of error correction in language learning. The following part will go through
the issue of written corrective feedback (henceforth WCF) and its various types.
The research displays, through previous studies, the continuous argument on
whether the provision of written error correction is effective or not. The final part
summarizes the literature of both teachers and students‟ preferences concerning
correcting written errors. Reviewing and analyzing the relevant literature provides
hypothetical basis for the current study and provides a synopsis of the emphasis and
conclusions of former research for creating new space for further study.
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From the time when analysis of error sources is a fundamental aspect in the
study of errors committed by learners, a distinction between mistakes or lapses
should be highly considered.
Additionally, Burt (1975) differentiated between two kinds of errors that tutors
perform when providing written error correction. He referred to errors that affect
the whole message of the scripted text as global errors. Alternatively, local errors
are minor linguistic violations that have no effect on the required meaning the
scripted text is aiming to deliver. To put it differently, the focal alteration between
global and local errors is the gravity of interference or inhibition they create to the
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meaning of the scripted text. Hendrickson (1978) suggested that tutors ought to
give written error correction merely on global errors since they prevent
communication. Nonetheless, the influences of tracing particular items of errors
when offering written error correction still deserves further exploration.
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Since the late 1960s when cognitive psychology affected the theory of
language acquisition, errors have been seen positively as an active part of learning
(Lu, 2010). Corder was one of the first researchers who disputed the importance of
learners‟ errors and Error Analysis (EA), which has appeared in the field of second
language acquisition, revealing the alteration from CA to EA. EA is “the study and
analysis of the errors made by second language learners” (Richards et al, 1998:
160). Error Analysis has two functions: a theoretical and a practical (Stephen Pit
Corder, 1981). On the foundation of its theoretical aspect, Error Analysis is part of
the methodology of researching the language learning process. From its practical
aspect, Error Analysis guides the remedial action. For instance, it informs the
teacher the destination in the direction of the goal the learners have developed and
what is left for them to learn (S Pit Corder, 1973) It tells the teacher how useful the
teaching approach and aids are, what the troubles in the curriculum are and how to
prepare the lesson plans and supplementary materials (S Pit Corder, 1973).
However, Chomsky (1959) criticized this theory claiming that novice and
complex sentences could be easily produced by learners although they have never
experienced them before. On the other hand, it can be difficult for the same learners
to produce some simple sentences in particular situations. In line with Chomsky,
learners are capable of forming new sentences by implying the rules rather than a
few words. Chomsky concluded asserting on the complexity of language learning
process. Some language structures could not be learned only depending on the
language stimuli that the learners may be exposed to. This limitation caused the
partial failure of the Behaviorist theory, which gave the chance to the
communicative approach to emerge and adopted by linguists. Based on Chomsky‟s
criticism, language learners cannot achieve a great improvement for the new
language structures can be easily learned by utilizing the language learned rules, in
addition to the continual responses to the stimuli.
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2.4.4 Krashen„s Monitor Model of SLA
Krashen‟s Monitor Model (1982) is considered by far one of the most argued
and detailed design of SLA. Five hypotheses have formed this model; however, this
study will be focusing on the ones related to error correction. The acquisition-
learning hypothesis, the first one, claims that language learning and language
acquisition are unlike. Consistent with the hypothesis, when learners unconsciously
grasp their L1 the language acquisition can occur. This in turn takes place when
children use language for communicative issues in the very premature stages of
their language development.
Contrariwise, language learning may occur when students learn the rules of the
target language (TL). To state the matter differently, children‟s naturally absorbing
of the language is considered language acquisition, as long as the language is
grasped inside the environment for everyday communicative purposes; whereas
language learning requires different prerequisites that could be achieved through
following some structures and rules concerning the target language (TL) (Diaz-
Rico, 2004). Therefore, the dissimilarity between both conceptions offers intuitive
understanding for the error correction. It has been debated by Krashen that
depending on the fact that naturally language acquisition happens naturally, the
effect of error correction seems to be worthless on the process of acquisition.
The third hypothesis is called the Monitor hypothesis that is relevant to the
topic of error correction. The hypothesis claims that the structures and the syntactic
rules learned by a student do not contribute excessively to his/her language
capability for the reason that utilizing language rules will be used essentially to
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simplify the language output while the graspable input is adequate for SLA. In line
with that, the language rules could be given the role of a monitor or editor the an
L2 student can employ to easily edit the L2 output whenever the utterance is
actually on paper or orally produced. For this reason, the language learned rules can
affect marginally on language production on the assumption that the output
produced by the student controlled by the acquired language system. Thus, the
argument results in the fact that the provision of error correction may simplify the
production of writing, but it is undefined if the language learning has taken place or
not. Plus, it is claimed that the rules learned by students have limited application in
communicative conditions. Therefore, although students learn all the rules of the
target language (TL), those rules are not considered valuable enough for they are
used limitedly and to a degree, worthless. Therefore, the issue can be concluded
that the monitor hypothesis averred the error correction has no influence on the
language acquisition process, whether it is applied or not.
In learning L2, formal and informal input of the target language has to be
offered to the student (Leki, 1992). The offered input could be in both forms
written or spoken and the condition of the input will have an impression on how the
student internalizes the target language. Two kinds of language acquisition are
distinguished by (Cummins, 1979) Basic Interpersonal Communicative Skills
(BICS) and Cognitive Academic Language Proficiency (CALP). BISC are skills
that mainly used in listening and speaking that student can acquire with ease,
particularly though engagement inside an environment where they can interact with
native speakers on a daily basis.
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CALP, on the other hand, is the foundation for a student‟s capability to deal
with several academic demands concerning L2. For instance, well-developed BICS
may have been acquired by a student through spending too much time in an
environment where he/she can easily connect to speakers of L1 frequently, but the
student struggles in an academic environment that proficiency in CALP is required.
The opposite could be true too. A highly professional student in CALP might find
problematic to communicate and interact in an environment where BICS is
required, a good example for that is having a conversation in informal English. The
difference between both items (BICS and CALP) provokes (Krashen, 1982)
hypothesis that focuses on the difference between language learning and
acquisition. Depending on the above statements, CALP is improved through
studying syntax rules within formal language instruction. Conversely, BICS are
skills that are acquired through the exposure within L2 environment.
In essence, an L2 student who has got a great amount of accuracy and fluency
in daily basis spoken or written English may lack the consistent proficiency and
skills that work well in academic situations. Thus, the effectiveness of providing
written error correction in L2 activities is not obvious yet. It might be supportive in
enhancing students‟ skills mainly in a classroom situation where formal L2 is the
main focus.
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explaining, interlanguage is the output of language that students can come up with
through the process of learning a foreign or a second language. According to this
theory, the language the student can come up with is considered a unique system
that can stand alone and also has special rules that can be followed. This system is
active and can be evolved through time (Mitchell et al., 2013). As a result, It is
clear that the main focus of this theory is on the innate mental ability of the student
that is basically used for acquiring a target language (Stephen Pit Corder, 1967).
Based on the above, an L2 student has his own language system that can be used at
any level of language learning
Simplification is the process in which the student uses learned structures and
lexical items presented in a very simplified utterance to express a message, in a
way that an L1 learner can do at an early stage. Overgeneralization process sums up
the student‟s use of an L2 rule in events where an L1 learner should not. The
occurrence of this process could be systematic or accidental at different language
items such as: grammar, phonetics and lexis. Another process in this regard is
restructuring. Restructuring occurs when the student aspects of his language L1 so
as to be able to produce some grammatical structures. The U-shaped action is
considered a part of this process. U-shaped action stands for using a target language
form at an early stage and replaces it with interlanguage form at a later stage. By
ways of explaining, the final product could not be distinguished from the first
product. These processes coin the levels wherein learners are believed to learn an
L2; nevertheless, no one can pledge that all the learners will master the target
grammar system in the same way.
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According to Selinker (1972), fossilization is the shortage of competence of the
target language even if the learners have the opportunity to get a great amount of
exposure, instruction and practice (Han, 2004).
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current level. It is apparent that the effectiveness of teaching is controlled by the
learning items that are thought the L2 student is ready to accept. Besides,
Pienemann debates that once the student is enrolled at the apt language acquisition
level, language instruction can positively enhance L2 acquisition pertaining to the
pace of acquisition; the regularity of rule use; and the different linguistic
framework in which the rule should be presented. Henceforth, it is extracted from
that feedback provision is of a great importance within the stage when students are
ready to process the feedback. Equally important, the correlation of this hypothesis
in respect to error correction in second language instruction is that L2 instructors
have a tendency utilize their feedback and error correction techniques to be
harmonize language learning that the study are ready to engross.
This theory is considered one of the important theories that are relevant to the
issue of written error correction. (R. W. Schmidt, 1990) averred that the amount of
attention that is given by the students in the form of input during the stage of
noticing is crucial to the following second language acquisition (SLA). This claim
works conversely to Krashen's dual system hypothesis which claims that SLA
depends mainly on the unconscious “acquisition” system; the conscious “learning”
system shares a minimum amount in SLA. An idea that has been improved by
second language investigators that students‟ increasing attention on the form might
affect to an extent the output of L2 which has been utilized for it to turn out to be
rooted into the student‟s developing second language system. By ways of
explaining, the degree of conscious attention that paid by an L2 student can
positively effect on his improvement in L2 system. To put it bluntly, it can be
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disputed that written error correction may help L2 students to some degree to be
vigilant to the form that can help in inserting the correct forms in students‟
improvement language system. (R Schmidt, 2001; Richard Schmidt, 1994) is
viewed as one of the investigators who contributed in this issue by presenting the
Noticing hypothesis in 1990s.
Along with (Richard Schmidt, 1994), the Noticing hypothesis focuses on the
attention that L2 is paying to the form may affect the treating of utterances within
second language learning that is needed for students to absorb any chunk of
language. They have to notice the related material in the linguistic data that is
suitable in the nature. To put it another way, L2 students‟ consideration has to be
directed to particular structures with the intention for them to be familiar with
linguistic features of the L2.
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them. The participations of Philp's research regarding error correction are
conducting feedback by the teacher plays an effective role to direct students
towards noticing not only the errors in their utterances, but they also will be
heading for new features concerning L2. Moreover, it can be debated that error
correction is able to stimulate alertness on the part of L2 students, which stimulates
effective L2 learning, with respect to the hypothesis.
In the light of the above stated SLA theories, varied facts concerning error
correction can be experienced. In the first place, contrastive analysis is referring to
the effect of L1 on L2 learning. The error analysis, on the other hand tells the
teacher two things: how far towards the aim the learners have improved and what is
left for them to learn; how effective the teaching method and materials are.
Behaviorist theory proclaims that the acquisition of language includes the
formation of habits through the responses to stimuli that take place actively and
repeatedly. In brief, there is an assumption that written error correction can work as
a stimulus that can be met with the proper, active, and repeated responses, so as to
stimulate efficient language acquisition. Despite Krashen‟s Monitor design
supports the idea of neglecting correcting errors due to the ineffectiveness on
language learning acquisition process, it can be disputed that providing written
error correction should not be completely neglected without scientifically proving
its uselessness. The reason behind that, L2 students who have performed a
remarkable level of fluency with the target language through communication
situations probably have not received the parallel language proficiency that is
highly standard in academic situations. It may be contested that written error
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correction provision might have a great impact on language instruction in
prohibiting fossilization to take place. The essence of Pienemann‟s Teachability
Hypothesis is that language instruction is of assistance to students on the condition
that they are all set for it. The theory came up with a suggestion that the written
error correction is of a great importance to be provided when the students are
organized to incorporate the feedback. Last of all, Schmidt‟s Noticing Hypothesis
added a modulation that written error correction might function as an enabler that is
thought to support alertness related to L2 students which probably brings about
operative L2 learning. As a consequence of these suggestions, the development and
incorporation of language teaching has constantly increased. The background of
language teaching methods will be outlined in an attempt to functionalize the part
of error correction in second language instruction.
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criticism (Richards & Rodgers, 2001). Plus, by emergence of some SLA theories
such as Krashen‟s Monitor Model and Chomsky‟s Universal Grammar theory, the
visions concerning second language acquisition SLA have been entirely changed. It
follows that, in the mid-nineteenth century the disagreement with the Grammar-
Translation Method increased gradually. Owing to the imperfect efficiency that
overwhelmed the Grammar-translation Method for communication and the
increasing insight that L2 is acquired orally, new perceptions on creative language
teaching stood out.
Along with the expansion of the Audio-Lingual Method in the United States
for the period of the World War II, a new stimulus-response method appeared
during the course of 1950s and 1960s to contribute to the field of language teaching
(Larsen-Freeman, 2000). In line with the Behaviourist viewpoint of language
learning, the fundamental concept vis-à-vis this method is that habits can be formed
by exposing L2 students to language stimuli accompanied by their appropriate
responses to these stimuli. Consider an illustration, learners were thought echo and
recall the correct structures and patterns of the target language (Hendrickson,
1978). This way is intended to empower L2 students to utilize the target language
precisely and smoothly in conversation-based situations. Accordingly, and to
reflect on written error correction issue, one of the most favored ways for teachers
is correcting every error straightaway after its occurrence in order for fossilization
to be curbed. Previously, the tutorial focus was on the accurate structures of
grammar, so language instructors found that oral error correction was one of their
core roles.
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Even so, by the appearance of the Communicative Language Teaching (CLT),
the performances for providing corrective feedback altered. On the word of Larsen-
Freeman and (Long, 1991), more willingly than letting learners remember the
structures of language, the aim of the communicative approach is to get learners
carry out different tasks concerning the target language. In consequence, the main
focus of the communicative approach is on utilizing the target language efficiently
in different conversational situations in preference to getting them recall precise
grammatical patterns and sentence forms. To put it another way, language
instruction‟s main focus was communication, notwithstanding of errors in written
or spoken language ever since SLA has acknowledged that making errors is
unavoidable and natural part of the second language learning process (Nunan &
Lamb, 1996).
Baleghizadeh and Gordani (2012), emphasize that agreeing upon the right CF
kind, which is a crucial educational issue, necessitates “different amounts of time
and teaching skill.” Various types of CF exist, each with its own appropriate uses.
(Bitchener, Young, & Cameron, 2005) identified three types of CF: direct, indirect,
and metalinguistic. Firstly, in direct CF teacher provides “the correct linguistic
form through the deletion of an unnecessary word, addition of a necessary one, or
substitution of an incorrect word with a correct one” (D. R. Ferris, 2006). Since it
does not need processing, direct CF may be more valuable for low proficiency
learners (Asassfeh, 2013). If the teacher does not offer the correction and just
elaborates to the learner that there is an error, s/he uses the second type, indirect
CF. It can lead to long-term learning contrary to direct CF because it generates
learner reaction and comprehensive processing. The third CF type is metalinguistic
CF which can be utilized in a couple of ways (a)” providing a label or code” (e.g.,
sp for spelling, prep for preposition, etc.) or (b) “providing comments about each
error the learner has made” (Bitchener et al., 2005). Direct CF (just underlining and
tagging errors by type) is less time-consuming for teachers; however, “holding
student teacher conferences on errors will necessarily call for sufficient
metalinguistic knowledge possessed by students as well as teachers” (Baleghizadeh
& Gordani, 2012).
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2.7 The Error Correction Dispute
In spite of the fact that instructors and learners have recognized that written
error correction plays a decisive role in developing L2 writing accuracy (Brown,
2001; D. Ferris & Roberts, 2001; Lee, 2004), an argument concerning its efficiency
has appeared in the previous decade (Chandler, 2003; D. Ferris, 1999; Truscott,
1996). Some of the studies such as (Kepner, 1991; Truscott & Hsu, 2008) revealed
some findings which claim that error correction is not only unproductive, but also
theoretically prejudicial to L2 writing advance. However, outcomes from other
studies (Bitchener, 2008; Bitchener et al., 2005) revealed that error correction is
effectual and supportive in the advance and enhancement of students„ L2 writing
accurateness. This division will debate the negative and positive perceptions of
written error correction.
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grammar correction in particular has injurious influence on the progress of L2
student writing accurateness. He is in line with Krashen's Monitor Hypothesis
relating to SLA. Krashen focused on the sufficiency of comprehensible input for L2
acquisition to occur. Thus, he finalizes that grammar correction ought to fizzle out
in writing instruction and recommends that the students‟ precision will be
accomplished efficiently through the exposure to wide-ranging forms of experience
within the target language. Plus, that could occur through adopting a diversity of
reading and writing tasks. Truscott‟s point of view in this issue is that there are lots
of proofs touching the efficiency of error correction and no motivation to work on
it.
Unlike the previous stated opinions to some investigators like (Kepner, 1991;
Truscott, 1996), a research proof has been presented by the backers of corrective
feedback to prop the worthy advantages that may happen in utilizing written error
correction. D. Ferris (1999), for instance, discorded Truscott‟s pretensions contra
the efficacy of grammar correction. She assessed Truscott‟s debates and
investigated the researches he depended on to present his claims. Ferris recorded
two feeble points in Truscott‟s debate: (1) that there are more less efficient methods
to deal with error correction in L2 composition; and (2) Truscott has under or over
depended on the findings and allegations of last researches to back his own study
program. Ferris‟ defiance steered to extra dispute regarding the domain of the
leverage of error correction and researches were carried out to investigate this topic
thoroughly and find out proofs finish this dispute whether pro or against error
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correction use in L2 writing tutoring (Bitchener, 2008; Chandler, 2003; Fazio,
2001; D. R. Ferris, 2004; Lee, 2004; Truscott, 1999).
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2.9 Approaches and Methods of Written Error Correction
Although the provision of correct forms of grammatical errors is one the most
prevalent modes used by lots of instructors (Hendrickson, 1980), employing a
number of kinds of corrective feedback has been proposed as it is regarded to be
efficacious and felicitous than artlessly depending on an individual strategy. By the
same token, investigators have recognized a couple of wide-ranging approaches
and a couple of particular methods of written error correction, as displayed in
Figure 2.1.
Figure 2.1 General Approaches and Specific Methods of Written Error Correction
Varied expectations have been sorted out concerning the efficacy of the two
approaches. The comprehensive approach could be relevant to Schmidt‟s (1994)
Noticing hypothesis, as formerly debated, in that the correction of all the writing
errors in a learner‟s text may enhance lots of noticing on the learner‟s benefit by
treating a large spectrum of errors. To put it in another way, a comprehensive
approach in written error correction might steer the awareness to of the learner not
only towards errors in the writing, but also to unprecedented aspects of the target
language herewith enhancing more dynamic language learning.
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efficiently learn new aspects of the target language only when they are in a
complete readiness for it. Moreover, Ellis avers that a selective approach in written
error correction may confirm more dynamic as L2 learners are capable of inspect
numerous corrections of a single error. Under those circumstances, L2 learners
might not only get a more affluent comprehension as to why what they wrote
inaccurate, but also opportunities to absorb the accurate form.
Whether one approach is more efficient than the other still requires additional
exploration because so far, there are no researches comparing the particular effects
of comprehensive and selective approaches in written error correction. The
subsequent part will talk over the two particular methods in providing written error
correction.
The use of error correction code is considered another kind of implicit written
error correction. This strategy includes delivering correction codes in the form of
symbols (e.g. _[ ]‟ for a missing word, _( )‟ for extra words) and abbreviations (e.g.
SVA- Subject Verb Agreement, pl/sing – Plural/Singular) to inform the L2 learner
not only that an error has been done, but also the type of error done (Hendrickson,
1984). For further details of error correction codes, see Appendix 1)
In line with Hyland (1990), error correction codes make it easy to language
teachers to give implicit feedback, and minimize undesirable and discouraging
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effects if demonstrating writing errors without decreasing the effects of error
correction. This is pertinent to language instructors, who are very duteous with
accurateness, the output of which is the learners‟ writings are often timed marked
with red ink (Harmer, 1991). Nevertheless, with error correction codes, language
instructors can basically define the kind and place of errors. Moreover, utilizing of
error correction codes permits tutors to signspot pedagogical points that have
actually been taught to the L2 Learners.
Teachers‟ preferences are significant items that affect teacher favored ways for
error correction. In line with (Borg, 2001), teacher beliefs is termed as a set of
consciously and unconsciously saved suggestions that is responded as a reaction
and a plan to the teacher‟s views and performances.
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speaking teachers; (2) the second team included L1 English non-teachers, and (3)
contained L1 English speaking teachers. Altogether were given a text contains 150
words and were required to assess the text entirely, to pin spot and correct all
errors, to choose and grade the most important errors, and to provide the rationale
behind their selection. By having finished the mission, the contributors were
requested to fill in a survey which collected biographical information and their
attitudes on error correction. Findings of the study reveal that although all the
contributors realized error correction as positive teaching technique, they
experienced the task in various ways. Teachers with various backgrounds deal with
error correction in varied ways and this defines their decisions about
appropriateness in L2 writing. This indicates that teachers‟ awareness of
grammatical errors in L2 writing are greatly affected by their attitudes about
language learning, and may have an impact on the kind of written error correction
they support to enhance their students‟ L2 writing accurateness.
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for learners, they have a strong perception that the teacher feedback is the most
desirable way for them to learn to correct and locate their own errors. This shows a
discrepancy between the teachers‟ preferences supposing that teachers‟ written
error correction activities may not permit learners to learn the proper way to correct
and identify their own errors, even though the think that it does.
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2.11 Previous Studies
Lots of allegations relevant to written error correction can be taken from the
various SLA theories that have been put heads together. Plus, it is clear cut that
results from former studies regarding the efficiency of written error correction are
still unsettled down. By brushing up former studies on written error correction, it
can be surmised that further research is necessary to explore and study teachers‟
and students‟ preferences on the subject of written error correction. As a matter of
fact, the current study aims at investigating this gap in the literature by studying
teachers‟ attitudes and inspecting the preferences of the learners regarding the
above-mentioned subject so as to detect the important items of L2 writing more
methodically. Hopefully this study will add to the present studies by supporting a
more inclusive exploration of teachers‟ and students‟ preferences with regard to
written error correction. Moreover, the current study may offer the chance for
teacher to react on and select the most appropriate L2 writing instructions.
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CHAPTER THREE
3.0 Introduction
In this chapter, the researcher will display the research method used in this
study together with the data collection processes besides the instruments of such
data collection. It describes the research population and data analysis methods.
Moreover, this chapter sets forth the scope of the practical side of this study, as it
elucidate the essential items of the methodology, the methods of data collection and
data analysis. Sampling, validation, and reliability will be discussed as well.
3.1 Methodology
The current study is quantitative in nature where the data was collected
through an online questionnaire that was planned to be along the lines of the
research hypotheses. The questionnaire was electronically sent online to the
targeted teachers and students alike to find out which error correction preferences
better to be utilized in their EFL classrooms
3.2 Population
EFL teachers and learners symbolize the population of this study. The
population of this study is the English language teachers and students at
Preparatory Year Deanship (PYD), Majmaah University, Saudi Arabia.
3.3 Sampling
The sample number is 50 EFL teachers and 100 EFL students. The investigator
believes that this number is sufficient to accomplish the objective of the study. The
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students are selected from selected campuses. Teaching in these campuses, the
teachers are from different countries, with several years of experience. They have
different academic qualifications and professional training. The instructors work in
English Department at Preparatory Year Deanship (PYD), at Majmaah University.
EFL students are Saudis who, as they reported, started studying English in middle
schools. Thus, they have similar EFL learning experience, but their proficiency in
English is somehow different. They study at various premises in Majmaah and
Zulfi and all of them are at the Preparatory Year Deanship (PYD).
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the two forms of the questionnaire consist of fifty-one items. Each questionnaire
includes two sections. The results of the questionnaire are interpreted by the
researches using Statistic Package for Social Science (SPSS).
3.5.1 Questionnaire
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population (teachers and students). The EFL teachers‟ questionnaire version
incorporates fifty-one statements; likewise The EFL students‟ inquiry form
includes fifty-one statements. The questionnaire was designed and prepared in
English to achieve the aim of this research, but in order for the students‟ survey to
be efficient and receive growing attention, the researcher presents the survey to a
translation panel to be translated in Arabic. Plus, the written surveys, two online
versions for both surveys have been developed to be on hand for many of PYD
students. Furthermore, the online survey reduces effort and saves time of
distributing and collecting data. The items on the questionnaire were developed on
a three-point Likert scale of agreement that was favored, as it is one of the most
commonly widespread Likert scales in the field of education. The researcher sent
the questionnaire links to EFL teachers via e-mail and various social media sites.
They had enough time to fill in the survey and respond. Although, the
questionnaires were slightly long, the items were direct and clear. As a result, the
participants did not have any trouble responding them. After that, the investigator
checked the electronic assorted data and organized them for analysis.
With the intention of measuring the validity of the questionnaire, a pilot study
has been conducted to make sure that the survey is valid for the participants.
Twenty copies of the questionnaire were sent to EFL teachers and some EFL
students from Majmaah University, Saudi Arabia. Likewise, the EFL teachers
responded electronically to the survey and supported the researcher with their
comments, suggestions, notes, and advice at the end of the inquiry as requested by
the researcher. In line with their recommendations, the number of the statements
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was reduced from fifty-three in the pilot survey to fifty-one statements submitted to
EFL teachers and fifty-one statements submitted to EFL students in the final
version as well. The adapted study version contained two open-ended questions at
the end, which the researcher has been advised to delete those questions in order
not to prolong the questionnaire. The questionnaire is designed from two sections.
The first one includes information about EFL teachers‟ and EFL students‟
qualifications, levels, and years of experience. The second section consists of
statements.
0.831 0.831 51
This table shows a high degree of reliability (0.831).
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This table shows a high figure of reliability (0.831).
0.831 0.831 51
This table shows a high figure of reliability (0.831).
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3.6 Data Analysis Procedures
The questionnaire was electronically sent to the subjects, and they were
required to respond to it during their free time. The EFL teachers and their students
were given a few days to complete the questionnaire. The researcher was
continuously following up the results on Google Drive, where it is possible to see
the subjects‟ responses at once.
Quantitative analysis was used to analyze the data gathered through surveys.
The obtained data was analyzed by using basic the factor analysis, using the (IBM)
Statistic Package for Social Science (SPSS) computer-based application.
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CHAPTER FOUR
4.1 Introduction
This chapter is designed to show the tools of data collection and data
analysis. It makes required data available for the study. It also exhibits illustrated
tables and bar charts, followed by a discussion of the results and summary.
Table: 1
Valid Cumulativ
Frequency Percent
Percent e Percent
Valid 1-5 years 20 40.0 40.0 40.0
6-10 years 13 26.0 26.0 66.0
11 years or
17 34.0 34.0 100.0
above
Total 50 100.0 100.0
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Table (1) represents years of experience of the subjects. By taking a look at
the above table, it is clear that around one third of the teachers are experienced of
more than eleven years. This is a good factor because these instructors can provide
the research with dependable judgment owing to their remarkable years of
experience in ELT.
Table: 2
Valid Cumulative
Frequency Percent
Percent Percent
Valid BA 22 44.0 44.0 44.0
MA 23 46.0 46.0 90.0
PhD 5 10.0 10.0 100.0
Total 50 100.0 100.0
Table (2) shows the qualifications of the teachers. It is noticed that Bachelor degree
holders and Master‟s degree holders are almost equal of (44%) and (46%)
respectively. On the other hand Ph.D. holders just represent about (10%) since
these students just left high school and start tertiary education. Moreover, they
study general English which makes the need of Ph.D. holders is not one of the
priorities. These givens will play a great role in giving reasonable judgments.
Table: 3
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Levels Taught by the Subjects (Teachers‟ survey)
Valid Cumulative
Frequency Percent
Percent Percent
Valid Beginner 8 16.0 16.0 16.0
Elementary 9 18.0 18.0 34.0
Pre-
4 8.0 8.0 42.0
intermediate
Intermediate 29 58.0 58.0 100.0
Total 50 100.0 100.0
Table (3) supports the research with the various levels taught by tutors. It is
obvious that near (60%) of the teachers teach intermediate students and less than
half of the teachers teach beginner, elemntary, and pre-intermediate of (16%),
(18%), and (8%) respectively. This variety shows that the subjects are given
different levels to teach.
Table: 4
Valid Cumulative
Frequency Percent
Percent Percent
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Elementary 17 17.0 17.0 42.0
Pre-
18 18.0 18.0 60.0
intermediate
Intermediate 40 40.0 40.0 100.0
Total 100 100.0 100.0
Table (4) describes that (70%) of the subjects are above elementary level which
means that these students have enough English language knowledge that makes
them able to deal professionally with the questionnaire and give their point of
view without hesitation.
Table: 5
Teachers Students
I prefer to get my feedback
1 % 2 % 3 % 1 % 2 % 3 %
1) at the prewriting stage 21 42 26 52 3 6 51 51 16 16 33 33
In the table above (5), the third and fourth statements show a mild percentage
(84%) of teachers was in line with providing feedback during the revising and
evaluation stages. By comparing that with the previous studies, it can be noticed
that the results are nearly similar to (Salteh & Sadeghi, 2015). The same results
were in conflict with (Hajian, Farahani, & Shirazi, 2014) which recorded a high
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percentage for giving feedback at the prewriting stage, but agreed with providing
feedback at the evaluation stage. Giving feedback at an early stage may inhibit
students to achieve progress in writing since they are still brainstorming and
attempting to write the first draft (Hamouda, 2011). Although, corrections on
written work at the final stage may not be better to enhance students‟ writing
(Stanely, 2003 cited in Hamouda, 2011), a lot of teachers believed that providing
feedback at this stage will be supportive to students and that has been mentioned in
the current study. 42% teachers were in agreement to conduct feedback at both
drafting and pre-writing stage. Although, as stated by previous studies, giving
feedback in above mentioned stages could be better than evaluation stage (Stanely,
2003 cited in Hamouda, 2011). Less than half of the teachers were agreed to give
feedback at the drafting and prewriting stage. The researcher is in the favor of
giving feedback at the early stages, since it will give the opportunity to the leaners
to edit their errors before the final stages, especially if they care about the mark
given.
Students, on the other hand, gave too much importance to giving feedback at the
revising stage (62%) in (statement 3). Statement 2 (get feedback at the drafting
stage) was the less important for students in their ideas (37%). Half of the students
(51%) were in line with getting feedback at the prewriting stage (statement 2). 44%
of the students showed agreement to receive feedback at the evaluation stage
(statement 4).
The results of this study were agreed more or less with (Salteh & Sadeghi, 2015)
while the most preferred choice for the teachers was to give feedback at the
revising stage and the next most liked one in the descending of popularity is to give
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feedback at the evaluation stage. The most preferred option for the students was
giving feedback at the drafting stage.
Table: 6
6) the pencil 14 28 27 54 9 18 42 42 44 44 14 14
Table (6) illustrated that using a red pen has been favored by both teachers (with
84%) and students (with 63%), while using a pencil came in the second rank with
14% by teachers and 42% by students. Using the red pen is useful since it
highlights the places of errors and makes them apparent to the learner. Reflecting
on the previous studies, a lot of learners thought that the lack of using the red pen
by the teacher is a sort of neglecting their responsibilities to learn effectively (Lee,
2005). Therefore, students believed that using a red pen is more effective than
using a pencil and tutors believed that utilizing the red pen makes students learn
well (Hajian et al., 2014). The researcher thinks that using the red pen in error
correction gives the students the chance to realize that something went wrong and
needs to be dealt carefully. The comments given in pencil were desired by readers
and could be debated (Kate, 2010, cited in Hamouda, 2011).
Table: 7
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It would be better if my Teachers Students
teacher 1 % 2 % 3 % 1 % 2 % 3 %
7) corrects all the errors 23 46 24 28 3 6 75 75 17 17 8 8
Table (7) showed 62% of teachers favored to select some errors of their learners
written work, while (46%) of teachers desired to correct all errors. According to the
previous studies, there is an agreement between this study and (Hajian et al., 2014)
on the statements 7 and 8 to correct all errors or select some. By giving students all
the errors corrected, they will lose their self-awareness and they might copy the
teacher‟s correction without paying any attention to the errors committed
(Katayama, 2007). According to Hamouda (2011), teachers believe that it is better
to appoint some errors and leave the remains for students with some guidelines. 6%
of teachers opted to leave the errors without correction. Diab (2005) in her research
mentioned that it was unworkable for the teachers to correct all errors that students
did because of the enormous number of students.
It was surprising that 70% of students thought that they should have all their errors
corrected, 29% of them asserted on the selection of a few errors, and 15% desired
all the errors to be left without correction. In line with the previous researchers
(Diab, 2005; Halimi, 2008; Lee, 2005; Leki, 1991; Oladejo, 1993) 75% of the
students in the current study favored their errors to be corrected as a whole to be
understood to them. The researcher sees that leaving some errors uncorrected for
students will encourage them to work on errors by themselves which create a good
environment for learning.
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Table: 8
Teachers Students
4. Class error correction. Who?
1 % 2 % 3 % 1 % 2 % 3 %
10) the teacher 37 74 12 24 1 2 74 74 20 20 6 6
12)self-correction 36 72 13 26 1 2 44 44 30 30 26 26
By having a look at table 8, it is clear that the statements get high various
percentage of 74% for the errors to be corrected by teachers, 62% to get the errors
corrected by students‟ peers, and 72% for correcting the errors by the students
themselves. Therefore, tutors believed that correcting errors could be distributed
and shared by the all the three elements. A great number of teachers liked the
strategy of peer correction. This result is in compliance with Witbeck (1976), who
observed that peer correction guided to “ a greater concern for achieving accuracy
in written expression in individual students and creates better atmosphere for
teaching the correctional aspects of composition”
Students, on the other hand, gave a great attention (74%) to get the errors corrected
by the teacher. Students thought that correcting errors by teachers is trustworthy
and supportive (statement 10). The findings were similar to (Hajian et al., 2014)
also were in accordance with Radecki and Swales (1988), a lot of students favor to
get their errors corrected by teachers because they thought that it is their teachers‟
responsibilities. The reason behind that is the students feel comfortable when the
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errors are corrected by teachers. 37% agrees to get some correction from their peers
(statement 11). That was in compliance with Oladejo (1993), students could be
terrified to get unpleasant feedback from their peers, so peer correction was
unaccepted by some students. Less than half of the students (44%) liked to correct
the errors themselves, they are pleased to do that (Diab, 2005).
Table: 9
In table 9, statement 13 was selected by 50% of teachers and it was surprising that
also 54% of students opted to correct their errors by getting some questions from
their teachers. By answering these questions, students can easily correct their
errors. In line with previous studies, Hamouda (2011) in his study averred that
writing questions as feedback on the learners composition may lead to
misperception or misinterpretation. In statement 15 an agreement has been noticed,
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82% of teachers and 75% of students agreed to get the errors underlined by
teachers, provided with written comments. 66% of teachers favored utilizing error
correction codes (statement 19). By ways of explaining, teachers thought using
such codes will let students recognize their mistakes and the type of them. Around
half of the teachers agreed to correct the errors by imperatives (statement 16). The
previous findings were in line with (Hajian et al., 2014).
Statement 14 was chosen by 68% of teachers. Therefore, they were for the idea of
correcting errors by writing statements. By comparing the findings with the
previous studies, statements may be difficult for teachers to reflect on the students‟
writing (Hamouda, 2011). Unlike previous studies, 54% of teachers agreed upon
using exclamations (statement 17),. According to Hajian et al. (2014), the
preference to utilize exclamations , teachers may try to assist their students‟
improvement to distinguish between two drafts. While 76% of teachers like to cross
out the error and write the correct word or structure (statement 18) was in contrast
with the finding of previous studies; EFL teachers may not like to cross out the
incorrect errors and write the correct word as the most preferable strategy to mark
errors in the initial draft (Diab, 2005; Hamouda, 2011).
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Statement 13 cultivated about (54%) of students preferred to get some questions on
their written work.
Furthermore, the statements 16 and 19 were favored by 34% and 47% respectively
by students. By ways of explaining, 34% of students liked to use imperatives given
by their teachers to give feedback about their errors. Additionally, 47% of students
desired their errors to be corrected by their teachers via giving them some
correction codes as guides for them. The percentage of 34% of students‟ selection
of using imperative means that: 66% of students showed a great amount of
confusion regarding this topic. Finally, 38% of students desired statement 17.
Table: 10
Focus on feedback
spelling)
22) vocabulary choice 42 84 8 16 0 0 42 42 36 36 22 22
23) content 41 82 6 12 3 6 50 50 26 26 24 24
construction
1= agree, 2= disagree, 3= I do not know.
In table (10), the results of the six statements of this table were almost close to each
other and ranged from 82% to 92%. As a matter of fact, 90% of teachers were in
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line with teacher‟s comments should concentrate on grammar (statement 20).
Hajian et al. (2014), thought that teachers should give a great amount of awareness
and feedback at all stages of correction. 84% of teachers expressed high necessity
for choosing vocabulary items and mechanics (e.g. punctuation, spelling) to be
corrected, but it came less important than correcting grammatical mistakes. 82%
teachers preferred to focus on the content (statement 23). Also, 92% of teachers
believed that organization and paragraph construction is of great importance to be
taken into consideration by students when they give their comments on students‟
writings (statement 24).
Based on the above table, 70% of the students selected to focus on the grammatical
errors (statement 20). Thus, the greatest amount of attention was given to grammar,
compared with other statements on the table. About half of the students (50%)
preferred their teachers to focus on content (statement 23). Reflecting on the
previous studies, Hajian et al. (2014) averred that the reason for selecting the
content is that the students believed that content in writing is crucial and these
types of errors should be handled by the teacher and teachers comments‟ on this
part are indispensable. Statements 21, 22, and 32 were less important for students,
and the percentage were 42%, 42%, and 45% respectively. Previous studies showed
that students favored to get teachers‟ comments on grammatical, lexical, and
mechanics items, more than those on the content and construction (Hajian et al.,
2014; Halimi, 2008). It might cause conflicting findings even if it is conducted by
the same subjects. For example in the finding of (Diab, 2005) inquiring about these
aspects from students by three tables ( 6 items and 18 sub-items) , firstly most of
them agreed to point out errors in grammar by teachers in both first draft and final
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draft (86%) agreed with the first draft and 82% were in line with the final draft),
but in item 6, grammar was given as one of the minimal percentages in students‟
responses and it was just more than spelling and punctuation(Diab, 2005).
Table: 11
Types of feedback
In table (11), it is obvious that 92% liked to offer positive comments (statement
27). Direct feedback (statement 29) has been selected by around two thirds of
teachers. As for (statement 26) a lot of teachers 68% preferred to give detailed and
specific feedback. About half of the teachers 48% were in compliance with giving
indirect feedback (statement 30). Giving end feedback (statement 32) was too much
important to some teachers 68% to conclude their comments on students‟ writing.
Statements 27 and 30 were similar to each other in percentage 44% and 48%
respectively. By ways of explaining, around half of the teacher refused to provide
their students with negative and indirect feedback, believing that might be
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confusing and discouraging for them. Although negative feedback was selected by
22% of teachers, it should be taken into account that it is preferable by some
teachers.
73% of students were attracted to get positive feedback from their teachers more
than the reaming items related to feedback (statement 27). Moreover, positive
feedback may motivate students to better writing. 59% of students preferred to be
given detailed and specific comments (statement 26). Hamouda (2011) thought
that detailed and specific feedback is more efficient than the general feedback to
suggest feedback more clearly. 57% of students liked direct feedback because the
thought it is supportive (statement 29). Wang (2010) asserts that direct comments
my enhance students‟ enthusiasm and self-awareness to correct their errors.
Statements 25, 31, and 32 statements were very close to each other of 54%, 53, and
52 respectively. More than half of the students preferred to get general comments,
margin feedback, and end feedback. Based on the above statements, students were
thought to like general comments to be motivated and encouraged to detect the
errors and correct them; margin feedback might be useful to the students, the
information on the margin will lead the students to fix their errors; the importance
of end feedback stems from the necessity to come to a conclusion and
comprehension of the structure and its application. Statement 28 was selected by
19% of students. This might be acceptable according to the diversity of learners‟
styles. Negative feedback is oftentimes taken seriously by learners, especially when
it is leading to assessment and giving marks.
Table: 12
mark/comment my teacher
wrote on my piece of work
carefully.
34) I am mostly concerned and 42 84 7 14 1 2 68 68 18 18 14 14
for help.
37) I use the Internet to find 30 60 11 22 9 18 57 57 24 24 19 19
more references.
38) I go to the library to 13 26 24 48 13 26 44 44 27 27 29 29
help.
40) I make correction myself. 17 34 20 40 13 26 50 50 32 32 18 18
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Students on the other side, (78%) students agreed to like to read every mark/
comment their teachers wrote on their pieces of work carefully. In other words, less
than a hundred of students preferred to read every mark or comment on their
written work (statement 33). Statement 35 was opted by 60% of students who
agreed to ask their teachers for help. The teacher is for sure a great helper for them
to clarify any difficult issues for them (Hamouda, 2011). Less than half of the
students 44% loved to go to the library to look up on dictionaries and books for any
misunderstood aspects (statement 38). 70% of students wanted to ask their peers for
help (statement 39). It is thought that it was useful for them to ask their classmates
without any hesitation or fear. The given grade / mark influenced most the students
opting for this aspect; 68% of students were interested in knowing the grade given
on their work (statement 34). Therefore, it is evident that, the grade was very
important to learners to enhance their levels. Exactly, half of the students 50%
favored to correct the mistakes by themselves (statement 40). Statement 37 was the
nearest on to the former statement. 57% had the desire to use the internet seeking
more references. Hamouda (2011), asserted that using internet is very helpful and
supportive to search for new resources to enhance their skills. 20% of the students
confessed that they ignore any items they do not know how to deal with because of
the lack of knowledge. Statement 42 showed that more than a third of students
38% didn‟t like to read the whole written work again after it has been marked by
their teachers. Also, 37% sought for other teachers in other groups to ask them
some question concerning their error mistakes. It might happen because the
students feel uncomfortable and ashamed to ask their own teachers in order not for
the teachers to attract bad attentions about them (statement 36).
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Table: 13
general.
45) I enjoy the teacher's comments on 22 44 18 36 10 20 63 63 18 18 19 19
my composition.
46) My teacher‟s comments and 44 88 3 6 3 6 73 73 16 16 11 11
composition is marked.
1= agree, 2= disagree, 3= I do not know.
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In the above table (13), statement 47 presented that 90% of teachers were
completely agreed with the idea that teachers‟ comments and corrections assist
students to know the places of mistakes and correct them. The second rank 88%
was given to statement 46 which refers to the assistance of teachers‟ comments for
students to enable them to know the mistakes and improve / avoid them next time.
Less than half of the teachers 44% of teachers like their comments given to
students (statement45). These results came in contrast with some previous studies
like (Hajian et al., 2014). Statement 84 showed that 84% of teachers approved that
the feedback given makes students enthusiastic to do their best to enhance their
writing. Less than a third of the teachers 28% believed that students feel that their
writing has improved due to the feedback given on their papers. More than a third
of teachers opted statement 51. Thus, they liked the way the composition is
marked. Only 44% of teachers thought that the teachers‟ comments are too general
(statement 44). Around two thirds of teachers believed that the feedback given
makes students feel good about them. Just 10% of teachers felt that teachers‟
comments are too negative and discouraging (statement 43).
The students on the other hand, 74% of them, agreed upon the idea that teachers‟
comments and corrections help students to know what to avoid / improve next time
(statement 46). Referring to the above table, 71% of the students agreed that the
feedback given makes students want to try harder to improve their writing
(statement 48). Statement 49 showed that 66% of students felt good about the
feedback given on their paper. 68% of students felt that their writing enhances
owing to the feedback given on their paper. According to the table, 63% of students
enjoyed teachers‟ comments on their written work (statement 45). More than half
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of the students liked the way their writing has been marked (statement 51). It is a
coincidence that most of the results of this study was too close to the previous study
results like (Hajian et al., 2014). A bit less than half of the students 47% felt that
teachers‟ comments are too general (statement 44). A few number of students 19%
declared that teachers‟ comments are too negative and discouraging (statement 43).
69% of them asserted that teachers‟ comments and corrections help students to
know where mistakes are and correct them (statement 47).
Furthermore, these finding were in line with results of (Diab, 2005; Hajian et al.,
2014; Hamouda, 2011; Lee, 2005). Students were glad to get their teachers‟
feedback on their writing. They might feel comfortable with their teacher.
Therefore, they thought their teachers‟ feedback might be necessary for them to
enhance their writing.
4.3 Discussion
The aim of this study was to explore the EFL teachers‟ and students‟
preferences for error correction in EFL classroom in Saudi context. The findings
have shown that both teachers and students have their own preferences for
correcting errors. The analysis of this study came up with some conflicts between
the teachers and students towards the issue of correcting errors. The students‟
dependence on their teachers‟ was obvious from the responses obtained from both
teachers and students. This will make it time-and effort consuming for teachers
especially they are teaching so many classes. At the end of each assignment, the
students only submit their written waiting the reply from their instructors without
paying any attention for the effort made from the instructors‟ part. Saudi EFL
classes are enormous in number. Additionally, teachers and students have long
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exercises and conversations concerning errors and the possible ways for correcting
these errors. It goes without saying that instructors don‟t have the ability to correct
all errors. Although the increasing necessity from students towards correcting
errors by teachers. It wasn‟t reasonable for teachers to spend their valuable time
just for fixing these errors.
It can be understood from the finding that the time and effort required for
fixing the errors should be shared between the instructors and students. By ways of
explaining, instructors could do their best to lead their learners to the place and type
of mistakes and give their students the opportunities to try to use the possible
strategies to fix these problems by themselves. Students may find it difficult to fix
these problems themselves, so they can evoke one of the ways that have been
discussed in this study. Furthermore, they can consult a peer, dictionary, grammar
book or even internet editing blogs (i.e. grammarely). These procedures should be
tried before conducting the feedback session with the teacher.
4.4 Summary
This chapter has presented the data analysis of this study. The current study
is conducted to investigate the EFL teachers‟ and students‟ preferences for error
correction in writing. This has been achieved via two online questionnaires sent
electronically to EFL teachers and students. Additionally, this chapter provided the
data drawn in figures and tables. Finally, interpretations were made from the data
collected and the researcher has discussed the results of the study.
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CHAPTER FIVE
5.1 Conclusion
This study has explored the EFL teachers‟ and students‟ preferences for error
correction in EFL writing classes in the Saudi context. The data was collected from
two online questionnaires. The first form targeted EFL teachers at (PYD) Majmaah
University in Saudi Arabia, and the second one was responded by EFL Preparatory
Year Deanship (PYD) students in Majmaah University. The targets of the surveys
were to investigate the ways of error correction that meet with their approval.
Plus, it studies the probable common ways that can be used by the teachers and
students alike. However the discrepancies that takes place between the instructors
and learners, for example students need to have every error correction completely
and fully revised by teachers while teachers, conversely, desire to leave the doors
open for students in order for the learning process occurs naturally.
Moreover, it sheds some light on the issue of feedback and focuses on the
appropriate time to provide it rather than who is responsible for this task, whether
the teacher or the peers. The researcher believes that adopting the suitable ways for
error correction and employing them in the EFL writing classes will help enhance
the students‟ language proficiency. The vast majority of EFL teachers agreed that
error correction, in writing classroom, is a cooperative task that compromises the
teacher and the learners. There is no point for error correction to be done
individually by the teacher without any kind of reaction resulting from students.
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To sum up, it must be said that investigating the preferences of error
correction is of great importance for the teachers and students. In fact, the diversity
of these preferences will help the learners and teachers get rid of the boredom of
traditional writing classrooms. Therefore, teacher and student training is essential
in order to have smoother and more efficient implementation of these preferences.
ELT experts have a significant role in supporting, guiding and developing teachers‟
performance.
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5.3 Recommendations
The researcher has suggested some recommendations, which should be
employed by EFL teachers and EFL students:
1. Teachers should have training programs on the various strategies related for
correcting errors.
2. The preferences for error correction for both teachers and students should be
applied.
3. EFL Teachers should make groups of homogeneous students to work with each
other.
4. Other ways for error correction should be followed like visiting libraries for
more resources and online editing blogs.
5. Error correction as a task should be shared between teachers and their students.
6. Feedback sessions should be conducted at the appropriate time for students and
teachers for saving time, effort, and in order for effective learning to take place.
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APPENDICES
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Appendix 2: Teachers‟ questionnaire
https://goo.gl/forms/tRR5zCyt2RVYuwoX2
Nile Valley University
College of Graduate Studies
English Language Department
Dear Lecturer,
This questionnaire is prepared to explore your preferences for error correction in
EFL writing classroom at the Preparatory Year Deanship (PYD) at Majmaah
University. This study is conducted in fulfillment of a master's degree in applied
linguistics at Nile Valley University, Republic of Sudan. Bear in mind that your
responses to the questionnaire will be kept confidential, and used only in this study
for scientific purposes. Your contributions are highly appreciated.
Lecturer: Mahmoud Aboubakr Sayed
The Title of the Study:
“Teachers‟ and Students‟ Preferences for Error Correction in EFL
Writing Classrooms”
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Appendix 3: Students’ questionnaire
https://goo.gl/forms/VVHdmBuLgNPsMeJi2
Students‟ Questionnaire
Dear Student,
Section 2: Please tick (✓) the appropriate number for your opinion.
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