Writing Task 2
Writing Task 2
Essay Structure
Introduction
1 – paraphrase question
2 – explain why
3 – further explain
4 – example
2 – explain why
3 – further explain
4 – example
Conclusion
1 – summary
Two-part question
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important
element of individual wellbeing.
What factor contributes to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction
for all workers?
As most adults spend most of their time at work, being content with your career is a crucial part of
a person’s health and happiness. This essay will first suggest fair pay as a key element leading to job
satisfaction, and it will then state that it is not very likely that everyone can be happy with their job.
The most important thing that satisfies someone at work is being compensated fairly. If those more
senior than you respect you as a person and the job you are doing, then you fell like you are valued.
A fair salary and benefits are important marks of respect, and if you feel you are being underpaid,
you will either resent your bosses or look for another job. These two factors came top of a recent
job satisfaction survey conducted by Monster.com, which found that 72% of people were pleased
with their current role if their superiors regularly told them they were appreciated.
With regard to the question of happiness for all workers, I think this is and always will be highly
unlikely. The vast majority of people fail to reach their goals and end up working in a post they don’t
really care about in return for a salary. This money is just enough to pay their living expenses which
often means they are trapped in a cycle of disenchantment. For example, The Times recently
reported that 89% of office workers would leave their jobs if they did not need the money.
In conclusion, being satisfied with you trade or profession is an important part of one’s well-being,
and respect from one’s colleagues and fair pay can improve your level of happiness; however, job
satisfaction for all workers is an unrealistic prospect.
Essay Structure
Introduction
1 – paraphrase question
4 – example
4 – example
Conclusion
Technology is being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages.
It is argued that technology plays an ever-increasing role in schools and universities. Increased
access to information and student freedom are the main advantages, whereas dependency on
technology and decreasing levels of face-to-face contact are the main disadvantages.
Access to more information and student autonomy are the principal advantages of increasing the
use of electronic devices in education. With the internet, students can access all the information
available about any topic, regardless of what books and other resources are available in the school.
Furthermore, students can focus on whatever topic or subject they want and study it in depth. A
prime example of this is the number of online university courses available to students, covering a
myriad of subjects that, up until recently, were unavailable to most learners. This has resulted in
more people studying third-level degrees than ever before at a pace and schedule that suits them.
The main disadvantages associated with the increasing use of technology in education are the
dependency on this technology and the decrease in face-to-face interaction between students.
With many students now using the internet as their primary source of information, they often
struggle to use other academic resources to find what they’re looking for. As well as this, students
spend more time looking at computer screens by themselves than interacting with each other,
which is thought to lead to lower levels of emotional intelligence. For instance, the recent explosion
in smartphone use has been at the expense of genuine human interaction. This results in soft skills,
such as verbal communication and empathy, being affected.
Essay Structure
Introduction
1 – paraphrase question
2 – outline sentence
1 – state problems
1 – state solutions
Conclusion
1 - summary
Problem and Solution question
Students are becoming more and more reliant on technology. What are some of the problems
associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Learners are becoming increasingly dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile
devices. This essay believes the main problems associated with dependence on computers are the
lack of original thought and copying original work from others and suggests critical thinking classes
and writing analysis software as the most viable solutions.
The principal problems with over-reliance on technology are people being unable to think for
themselves and plagiarism. With access to so much information, students often rely on other
people’s opinions instead of forming their own. As well as this, they often use search engines to
answer a question and copy the text from a website rather than thinking about the question. This
practice is prohibited in schools and universities and stunts students’ intellectual development
because they will never truly think for themselves, which is what university is supposed to be for.
For example, many teachers complain that students copy web pages straight from Wikipedia word
for word rather than giving a reasoned answer to their questions.
Solutions to these worrying problems are special classes to focus on critical thinking and teachers
using anti-plagiarism software to detect copying. If teachers create situations where students have
to infer meaning and express opinions based on a small amount of information, this will ensure that
students have an opportunity to develop these skills. Also, if students know that their assignments
are being checked for plagiarism, this will be enough to deter them from doing so. For instance,
many universities already use this kind of software to scan coursework for plagiarism, and it could
be extended to include all homework by learners in both secondary and tertiary education.
In conclusion, the main problems with the overuse of technology in education are the lack of
original thought and plagiarism. These can be solved through special classes that teach students
analytical skills and plagiarism detection software.
Essay Structure
Introduction
1 – paraphrase question
1 – topic sentence
3 – example
1 – topic sentence
3 – example
Conclusion
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school
programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching
sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that volunteering should be made part of the school curriculum. This essay agrees with
that suggestion completely because it help pupils develop soft skills and helps them gain much-
needed work experience.
Education should not be limited to strictly academic pursuits, and those in education should also
develop life skills, such as teamwork, empathy and self-discipline, and one of the best ways to hone
these aptitudes is through community service. Serving those less fortunate than ourselves teaches
us many lessons, including how to work with people from other backgrounds and the value of hard
work, thus enabling us to hone these skills before becoming and adult. For example, many young
people from wealthier countries take a gap year and help those less fortunate than themselves to
increase their gratitude for what they have and improve their work ethic.
Many colleges and companies are also increasingly looking for this type of experience. Most school
leavers have the same grades, and charitable work can help set you apart from other students
when making college applications. For example, Cambridge and Oxford receive thousands of
applications from straight-A students yearly and can only accept a small percentage of applicants.
What you have done outside the classroom often differentiates you from everyone else and gets
you that coveted spot.
In conclusion, teenagers should be made to partake in unpaid work as part of their schooling
because it will help them learn things they wouldn’t ordinarily learn from their teachers, and it will
also boost their chances of getting into third-level education.
Essay Structure
Introduction
2 – thesis statement
3 – outline sentence
Conclusion
1 – summary
Technology is being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive
trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this
argument and then give your own opinion.
There is an ever-increasing use of technology, such as tablets and laptops, in the classroom. It is
often argued that this is a positive development, whilst others disagree and think it will lead to
adverse ramifications. This essay agrees that an increase in technology is beneficial to students and
teachers.
The Internet has provided students with access to more information that ever before. This has
allowed learners to research and learn about any subject at the touch of a button. It is therefore
agreed that technology is a very worthwhile tool for education. Wikipedia is a prime example, where
students can type in any keyword and gain access to in-depth knowledge quickly and easily.
However, many disagree and feel that technology deprives people of real human interaction.
Human interaction teaches people valuable skills such as discourse, debate and empathy. Without
these soft skills, many people find it difficult to become successful in work and their personal lives.
Despite this, human interaction is still possible through the internet, and this essay disagrees that
technology should be dismissed for this reason. For instance, Skype and Facebook allow people to
interact in ways that were never before possible.
While the benefits of technology, particularly the internet, allow students to tap into limitless
sources of information, some still feel that people should be wary of this new phenomenon and not
allow it to curb face-to-face interaction. However, as long as we carefully consider the importance
of human interaction in education, the educational benefits are clearly positive.