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Brynn
Everything hurts. When I open my eyes, I can see only darkness. I do not
remember anything and my mind is aching. It’s like a pounding migraine, rattling
My back is laying against a cold, concrete wall and my hands are blue as ice.
I cannot feel my legs, everything is numb. Suddenly, a blinding, white light blurs
my vision and I am staring at a girl, who must be at least 16. She is sitting on the
floor. She has dirty blond hair and bruises covering her thin body. The skin
beneath her forest-green eyes, are black as coal. Her body is covered with a white
t-shirt and white pants that are two sizes too big.
All at once, she shatters before me, leaving painful shards of glass piercing
my skin. Standing in the place of the girl, is a tall, brown-haired boy with beautiful
brown eyes. He comes toward me with such grace, but the closer he gets the
more fear I can see in his eyes. He is mumbling something that sounds like, “what
did I just get myself into.” As he approaches, the lights go red and an ear-piercing
water.
“I should not have done this, why would I do this?!” He whispers frantically
I shake my head.
“One, two, three.” The boy pulls me up off the concrete ground. A wave of aching pain
shoots up my body. I cry out as my vision starts to blur. Suddenly, everything goes dark.
Lucas
I knew this was a bad idea. I told myself I was done with helping them, but I
guess when lives are on the line you do what you must do. I scoped out my
building with a heavily guarded entrance. Two guards stand at each corner of the
structure and security cameras line the walls. I was told that I would need to
“Beautiful night, isn’t it?” the guard said to the other guard.
“Indeed, it is.” I interrupted as I rounded the corner. The guards whipped
their heads around violently and pulled their guns out of their holsters.
“Hands where I can see them!” Yelled the guard, pointing the gun in my
direction.
“Don’t shoot! I just want to have a friendly chat.” I say, moving closer ever
so slightly. Each guard carried a shot gun and a taser. This was not going to be
easy.
“Stop moving or I’m going to shoot.” Announced the other guard. He was a
heftier fellow with thinning brown hair. His chubby fore-finger twitched at the
trigger as I moved my head faintly to the left and my eyes peered just past his
instant, I pulled the handgun that was hidden in my back pocket and shot the
large guard in the chest. He fell like a colossal oak tree onto the hard pavement. It
took a moment for the smaller guard to register what had just occurred, but that
was all the time I needed to shoot him directly in the skull.
I pounce onto the large guard and search his limp body in a pool of deep,
warm blood. I immediately grab his gun, walkie-talkie, and building key pass
before running towards the ominous steel doors. Frantically, I tap the key pass
onto a white, blinking key pad. A rush of cool air blows my messy, dark hair as the
I was given a map of where the girl was being held, but in this moment my
brain threw away all previous information. The entrance doors opened to a huge
hallway with at least 100 different rooms. The lights in the building were
uncomfortably bright. Slowly, I walk through the hall, squinting into each room.
The building is completely empty. Finally, I reach a door marked “stairs”, fling it
heavy black boots thunder with each step. I check all the room numbers until I
find 126. There was no window on this door like there was on the others upstairs.
I bust down the door with the hard heel of my foot. The door opens to reveal a
small space with a double sided, glass window and a girl staring directly at me.
entrance to the cell is located is to the right of the window. It has thick metal rods
fastening it closed and I notice the only way to open it is with a specific code.
Powerful boots echo behind me and my heart quickens it pace. I look around the
petite room to see if there is anything to break the glass with and find myself
looking at a metal chair. I pick it up and throw it at the window, glass shatters
everywhere. Sitting on the floor is a girl with yellow-blonde hair cut to her fragile
shoulders and deep set, green eyes staring back at me. As I’m walking toward her
an alarm goes off. I’m running toward her now, her green eyes go wide.
Brynn
I swim in and out of consciousness for what feels like hours. I can feel the
brown eyed boy’s strong arms wrapped around my body, carrying me through the
twisting halls of the building. The echoing sounds are overwhelming. The constant
clattering behind us. The boy swears underneath his breath. He turns down
another hallway, pushes through large steel double doors and starts sprinting. He
abruptly stops at another set of large doors and gently sets my frail body onto the
“Ok, can you hear me?” the boy whispers, crouching down to meet my
and distract them and I need you to run as fast as you possibly can into the woods
beyond the fence.” It takes all my flittering strength to lift my heavy head and
nod.
Frantically, the boy reaches into his pocket and pulls out a keycard. He
carefully takes my hand into his own and places the keycard into my palm.
“This is for the fence. Just go as far into the woods as you can and hide, I’ll
find you when it’s safe.” He stands and leans over to help pull me to my feet. My
His stable arms are still holding onto me when he quietly says, “are you
“Yes” I mouth, the sound barely escaping my hoarse throat. I reach for the
wall and rest my weight against it. The wavy, brown-haired boy gives me one last
questioning look before rushing out the heavy, metal doors into the unknown. I
wait a few precious seconds to find the power to move my weak legs, then
stumble towards the large exit. Finally, I’m outside. The burning sun beats down
onto my pale skin as gun shots sound in the distance. I will my stone-like feet to
move across the everlasting field in a slow run. My eyes are focused on the chain-
link fence only a few meters ahead of me. There are a few different exit and
entrance doors spread out across the fence. I reach for the nearest opening.
Exhausted from the journey through the field, I grasp the tall fence. A sharp
scream emerges in the distance. My hands are trembling as they scan the key
pass into a small black key pad. The doorway clicks open and I hobble outside the
fence. As I make my way into the woods my body begins to shut down. I can hear
my rapid heartbeat pulsing against my chest as my lungs turn on fire. My sore legs
betray me and I fall over the exposed root of a tall oak tree. My breathing
shortens into small painful bursts against the muddy ground and the world starts
to fade.
Lucas
I didn’t expect the blonde-haired girl to be so bruised and weak. Her tiny
body is leaned against the concrete wall fighting to keep herself upright.
- one guard ends up zapping and burning him with there stun stick
- he climbs the fence and finds the girl collapsed in the woods
- he carries her sneakily 3 miles though the woods with helicopters searching overhead
- they reach an abandoned shack which is the meet up point and he contacts his employer
over all: ??
the girl developed a very contagious disease (it doesn’t affect her but it kills others she comes into
If they contract the disease their skin starts to shrivel and their eyes turn black with blood
The disease runs in her blood as a mutation and it releases from her breath, so you have to be in direct
the story is set in the future – dystopian world where governments are at war with one another
she was a child in o a facility where governments take in abandoned children. She was adopted by the
leader of the government (she did it to show that she cares about society/as a PR stunt).
Because of overpopulation every child at a certain age (16) must be tested to see if they are worthy to
society (physically capable, mentally strong, or money/status) if not, they are killed
Since the world is breaking she developed a mutated gene that causes this disease in her to spread. At
16. The government found out she had the disease or mutated gene from the testing and taking her
blood, etc.
Her breath killed the people who were testing her
Because her mother was the leader of the one government, and wants to use her as a symbol of love
and care for future generations, she sends her away to a convert scientific institute to cure her
“daughter”
One promising development is to isolate cells or tissues from the afflicted patient, repair a mutant gene
in the laboratory, and then transplant the repaired cells or tissues back into the patient.
the place she was “rescued” from was really trying to cure her disease because they don’t want her to
kill people or die herself from others and the mom needs a cure because she was exposed to the disease
the medicine she was given throughout her medical procedures gave her some memory loss as a side
the boy was working for the bad guys who want to spread the disease around the world and use her as a
weapon to target people but he doesn’t know that (they don’t know that the mother is already dying.
he is luckily immune
But the bad guys assumed he’d be dead in the meet up spot, but he isn’t. They don’t think much of it
because people she had killed before have slowly died. He is left at the shack to die.
They take the girl away to a “safe” place, which is their headquarters (they were wearing hassmat suits)
The boy is the missing puzzle piece to finding a cure since he is immune
they are using her to weaponize a deadly disease to spread to populations and governments that they
The boy is working for these people because they promised they would give his family money/status
because they are poor and his younger siblings wont pass their tests and will die.
The government offered him a deal because he didn’t pass his test (he’s poor and overpopulation is so
bad that they’ve been killing anyone who live under a certain income). He was randomly chosen.
The bad government weaponizes her through gas bombs and gas rays (they isolate the gene and put the
They don’t tell the soldiers on the warfront what is in the gas bombs the soliders assume they are
normal
The boy gets taken by the good government (they saw him on the security tapes) and they force him to
tell them where she is. The leader (since she is dying) creates a task force to get her daughter back. He
offers to help if they bring his family to safety and ensure they will not have to take the test. The task
force is made to understand that they might die for this cause.
Once the bad government realizes they are also dying from the disease after coming into contact with
her through masks/suits they try to kill her but it doesn’t work.
The break into the headquarters starts just after they try to kill her
They get her out and start to take her back but she doesn’t want to keep killing people so…
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