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The Funniest

V.S
The Most Boring
Vacation
T’S: Giuliana Loaiza R & Jineth Nataly Pérez V
1. Pre-Writing
Task 1: Preparation
Vocabulary
Vacation State of Mind
Sort the following words into the correct category. Add more examples
to complete the list. Remember, it's all vacation related.

mountains fun museum exciting national park relaxing


sunscreen swimming awesome swimsuit camera boring
waterpark zoo terrific passport hotel airport sightseeing
hiking scuba diving suitcase sunglasses terrifying unique
restaurant amusement park shopping art gallery aquarium

Activities Things you need Places Adjectives

● swimming ● camera ● museum ● awesome


1. Pre-Writing
Task 2: Preparation
Vocabulary
Vacation State of Mind
Find the words related to vacation in the word search. Circle the ones
that are new to you.
1. Pre-Writing
Task 3: Modeling
Read the following letter and organize the parts where they belong.
Check with the teacher that everything is correct.

23rd January, 2023

Dear Philip,

I am just writing to tell you what a marvelous holiday


I had. I went on a camping holiday to the South of
France and the weather was wonderful.
The tent we stayed in was very comfortable. It had a
cooker, a fridge, and a TV.
We were in the heart of the French countryside and
some of the views were great. The campsite itself was
impressive. It was well organized, and the staff were
very helpful.
There was lots to do and, although I am not a very
active person, I enjoyed swimming and playing
tennis. All in all, it was a very comfortable holiday. You
should go if you get the chance. I can send you the
brochure if you like.

Well, that’s all for now. Please write soon.


Love, Linda

1. Salutation 2. Signature 3. Closing

4. Body 5. Heading/Date
2. Preparing for writing
Task 1: Planning

Decide the topic for your letter: The Funniest or The Most Boring Vacation.
Once you decided, go back to your brainstorm and circle the vocabulary
that matches your vacation. Write your words in the box below.

My Vacation

Now It’s Time to Talk !


Find a classmate that has the same topic as you and exchange
vocabulary or expressions that may be useful for writing your
text. Write it down.
_______________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
3. Writing
Task 1: Creating Your Topic Sentence

With your topic, now let’s build your topic sentence.

Remember: your topic sentence should not be too


long, and you only have to talk about one idea-NOT
2,3,4,5…

Next step: decide what made your vacation fun or boring. Write
three of those ideas as a complete sentence below.

1.

2.

3.
3. Writing
Task 2: Putting Everything Together

Put all the sentences together, (remember to include the topic


sentence and the supporting ideas). To make your text clearer,
you could organize your ideas in different paragraphs.

Don’t forget linking words.


3. Writing
Task 3: Adding the Parts of the Letter
You already have the body of your letter with everything about your
vacation. Now, add the parts of the letter that are missing (date,
salutation, closing, signature). If you don't remember the order, you
can review task 2: modeling of your booklet.
4. Revising
Task 1: Check your work
Give your letter one last read. Check the following list to make sure
everything is in order:

❏ Good spelling
❏ Capital letters at the beginning of each paragraph or after a
period.
❏ Use of punctuation marks.
❏ Use of vocabulary related to the topic.
❏ Past tense verbs
❏ Connectors (first, second, then, next, so, and, also, etc).
❏ My topic and the supporting ideas make sense.

4. Revising
Task 2: Help someone else to check
Exchange your letter with a classmate. Write the name of your
classmate and check off the items on the list that he or she needs to
improve. At the end share your feedback with him or her.

Name: ________________ you need to pay attention to this:

❏ Good spelling
❏ Capital letters at the beginning of each paragraph or after a
period.
❏ Use of punctuation marks.
❏ Use of vocabulary related to the topic.
❏ Past tense verbs
❏ Connectors (first, second, then, next, so, and, also, etc).
❏ My topic and the supporting ideas make sense.
4. Revising
Task 3: Final draft
Take your partner's feedback into account. If you need help, ask your
teacher. Now write your final draft.

Congrats, you are ready to go!

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