Lecture 5
Lecture 5
Plan
“Stories can take us places of which we can only
dream. An audience will suspend their disbelief in
order to be swept into a story. We have to put
aside the idea that ‘men can’t fly’ to enjoy
Superman.”
The production plan: TheUnscripted
Production Plan
There are some types of program that cannot be scripted. For example, sports
events cannot be controlled; you never know where they are going to go.
However, the director still needs to think through a quasi-script, or what is often
known as a production plan. These production plans are designed to map out
the general flow of the production, with contingency plans taking into
consideration that the event could take many unexpected turns along the way.
The Outline Script: Semi-Scripted
Production
The type of script used will largely depend on the kind of program being made. There will be some production
situations—particularly where talent improvise as they speak or perform—when the “script” simply lists details
of the production group, facilities needed, and scheduling, and shows basic camera positions, and so on.
An outline script usually includes any prepared dialogue, such as the show’s opening and closing. When people
are going to improvise, the script may just list the order of topics to be covered. During the show, the list may be
included on a card held by the talent, a cue card positioned near the camera, or a teleprompter in order to remind
the host.
Semi-Scripted Production Example
When a program is fully scripted, it includes detailed information on all aspects of the
production, as described in the following subsections:
1. Scenes
Most productions are divided into a series of scenes. Each scene covers a complete
continuous action sequence and is identified with a number and location (Scene 3—
office set). A scene can involve anything from an interview to a dance routine, a song, or
a demonstration sequence.
Fully Scripted Shows
2. Shots
When the director has decided how he or she is going to interpret the script, each scene will be
subdivided into a series of shots; each shot shows the action from a specific viewpoint. The shots are then
numbered consecutively for easy reference on the script, in the order in which they will be screened
3. Dialogue
The entire prepared dialogue, spoken to the camera or between people. The talent may memorize the
script or read it off teleprompters or cue cards.
Fully Scripted Shows
4. Equipment
The script usually indicates which camera/microphone is being used for each shot
(Cam. 2 Fishpole).
Details of each shot and camera move (Cam. 1 CU on Joe’s hand; dolly out to long
shot).
Fully Scripted Shows
7. Contributory Sources
Details of where video recordings, graphics, remote feeds, and so on appear in the program.
Basic Script Layout Formats
There is not one standard script layout. Script layout styles can vary widely. Some prefer a
single-column cinematic format, with transitions in a left margin, and all video and audio
information in a single main column. Other versions use two vertical columns, with picture
treatment (cameras, switching) on the left, and action and dialogue on the right, together
with studio instructions and lighting/effects cues.
Directors often mark up their script by hand with their own instructional symbols to indicate
transitions and shots. Software is available that provides multiple script formats.
Two-Column Format
Like the one-column format, there are many variations of the two-
column format. This traditional television format is extremely
flexible and informative. It gives all members of the production
crew shot-by-shot details of what is going on. They can also add
their own specific information (e.g., details of lighting changes) as
needed.
Scriptwriting Basics
Ask Yourself
Who Is the Program For? What Does Your Audience Already Know?
Does it relate to or follow other programs? Do viewers need to be reminded of past information? Does the script
style need to be similar to previous programs? Were there any omissions, weaknesses, or errors in previous
programs that can be corrected in this program?
Is it brief? Must it make an immediate impact? Is it long enough to develop arguments or explanations for a range
of topics?
Scriptwriting Basics
Is the script intended to be complete with dialogue and action (actual visual treatment depends on the director)? Is the script a basis for improvisation (e.g., by
a guide or lecturer)? Is it an ideas sheet, giving an outline for treatment?
Is it for actors to read, or inexperienced performers? For the latter, keep it brief, in short “bites” to be read from a prompter or spoken in their own words. Is
the dialogue to be naturalistic or “character dialogue”?
If the subjects are abstract, or no longer exist, how will you illustrate them?
Scriptwriting Basics
It takes only a few words on the page to suggest a situation, but to reproduce it in pictures and sound may require considerable
time, expense, and effort (e.g., a battle scene). You may have to rely on available stock library video. Does the script pose
obvious problems for the director (e.g., a script involving special effects, stunts, and the like)?
An intercontinental conversation could be covered by an expensive two-way video satellite transmission, or can it be
accomplished by utilizing an online telephone call accompanied by previously acquired footage or still images?
Scriptwriting Basics
The script may depend on what researchers discover while investigating the subject. Do you already have
information that can aid the director (have contacts, know of suitable locations, availability of insert material,
etc.)?
Will the subjects be brought to the studio? This allows maximum control over the program treatment and
presentation. Or will cameras be going on location to the subjects? This may include situations such as
shooting in museums. Script opportunities may depend on what is available when the production is being
shot.
Guidelines
Before embarking on the main script treatment, it can be particularly helpful to rough out a skeleton version,
which usually includes a general outline treatment, covering the various points that need to be included, in the
order in which the director proposes dealing with them.
Visualize
Sometimes pictures alone can convey the information more powerfully than the
spoken word.
The way a commentary is written (and spoken) can influence how the audience
interprets a picture (and vice versa).
Pictures can distract. People may concentrate on looking instead of listening!
Avoid “talking heads” wherever possible. You may want to show the subject being
talked about, rather than the person who is speaking.
Avoid Overloading
Deal with one subject at a time. Generally, avoid cutting between different topics.
Do not have different information on the screen than in the commentary. This can be
very distracting and confusing to the viewer.
Aim to have one subject or sequence lead naturally into the next.
When there are a number of separate different topics, think through how they are
related and the transitions necessary to keep the audience’s interest.
Consider the Pacing
Vary the pace of the program. Avoid a fast pace when imparting facts. It conveys an
overall impression, but facts do not sink in. A slow pace can be boring or restful,
depending on the content.
Remember that the audience cannot refer to the program later (unless it is interactive
or they have a video player). If they miss a point, they may fail to understand the
next—and will probably lose interest.
Watch Your Style
Use an appropriate writing style for the intended viewer. Generally aim for an
informal, relaxed style.
There is a world of difference between the style of the printed page and the way
people normally speak. Reading from a prompter produces an unnatural, stilted
effect.
Be very careful about introducing humor in the script!