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Recording:

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Task 1 - Write a report
● Word: at least 150
● Task: Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant
● Type: Dynamic chart (involve changes over time) >< Static chart / Map /
Process

STRUCTURE 1-2-3-4
1. Introduction (1) - Paraphrase the question
2. Overview (2)
3. Body 1 (3-4)
4. Body 2 (3-4)
The chart below shows the state of dissertations done by students in a UK
university in 1990, 2000, and 2010.

INTRODUCTION (1)
thesis (n) ⇒ Theses (plural)
Given is the bar chart comparing the numbers of theses, across four different
states, done by postgraduates in a particular UK university in three years 1990,
2000 and 2010 / every ten years from 1990 to 2010.

The bar chart compares / illustrates the numbers of theses, across four
different states, done by postgraduates in a particular UK university in three
years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

Given are the pie charts


OVERVIEW (2) - The striking features
(1) Trend (Up or down + Degree)
● Increase: On time / Late / Rewritten [Significantly/ Markedly]
● Decrease: Failed [Constantly/ Dramatically]

- Fluctuate (v)
(2) Order (The highest data)
● On time
NO NO NO: Include any data

Overall, / As can be inferred from the chart, …


Overall, while the number of failed theses decreased dramatically over years,
that of the rest witnessed a marked increase. It is also noticeable that the
majority of students submitted their dissertation on time.

Verb + Adv ⇒ Observe/see/ witness/ experience/ undergo + a/an + Adj + Noun

AS OPPOSED TO
Overall, the number of failed theses decreased dramatically over time, as
opposed to a marked increase recorded in that of the rest. ⇒ The number of
theses >< a marked increase (???)

⇒ Overall, the number of failed theses decreased dramatically over time, as


opposed to that of the rest, which observed a marked increase. It is also
noticeable that the majority of students submitted their dissertation on time,
and the completion rate far surpassed the failure one.
OR
Overall, a significant fall was seen in the number of failed theses, as opposed to
a marked increase recorded in that of the rest.

BODY 1 - Starts with the highest figure


Completed on time - Completed late
1. List: In 1990, 150 dissertations were submitted on time.
There were 150 dissertations submitted on time in 1990. [Mainstream]
● Vary subjects ⇒ GRA + LR
2. Change: Thereafter, this figure increased to reach its peak of
approximately 350 in 2010, a twofold /double increase since the first
year examined.

Thereafter, this figure increased considerably to more than 200 in 2000 and
finally reached its peak of north of 350 in 2010.

● north of ~ more than >< south of / shy of (less than)


● No+fold (adj/ adv)
triple (adj) → threefold [ a threefold increase / increase threefold]
3. Compare: A similar pattern was seen in the group of dissertations
completed late, whose numbers doubled to 50 in the final year.

the number of tourists to Japan = Japan tourist numbers


the level of

In 1990, 150 dissertations were submitted on time, which was


disproportionately higher than the completed late thesis number, at around
25. Thereafter, this former figure increased to reach its peak of approximately
350 in 2010, a twofold increase since the first year examined. A similar pattern
was seen in the category of dissertations completed late, whose numbers
doubled to 50 in the final year

● disproportionately >< marginally


● peak (n) : the highest point >< nadir / trough

BODY 2
Regarding failed-to-write theses, numbers precipitously fell from about 50 to
merely 10 in the last year examined/surveyed. In contrast, the number of
postgraduates having to rewrite their thesis experienced a pronounced rise to
roughly 50 in 2000, followed by a marginal fall.

Regarding failed-to-write theses, numbers precipitously fell, starting the period


with about 50 but ending with merely 10.
● precipitously (adv)
● pronounced (adj) ~ obvious
● The largest rise / The most pronounced rise occurred/ was
seen/observed…
‘failed to write’ theses
Tùng to Everyone (20:23)
Overall, while the number of failed theses written by postgraduate students
decreased dramatically throughout the period in the three given years, that of
ones theses completed late and on time and having to be rewritten witnessed
a marked increase experienced an opposite trend. Additionally, the figure for
dissertations completed on time was the highest in every year.
Khoa Tran to Everyone (20:23)
Overall, there was an constant decrease in the number of postgraduate failed
theses failed to write, whereas the opposite pattern was witnessed in those
completed on time, late, or rewritten from 1990 to 2010. In addition, the
highest figures were seen in the ‘completed on time’ group punctual
dissertations throughout the period.
huongtran to Everyone (20:23)
Overall, the numbers of theses completed on time, late and rewritten
increased decreased markedly, while the figures for failed theses the state of
failing to write increased decreased constantly during the years shown. It is
also noticeable that Also, the completed-on-time numbers of dissertations
completed on time by postgraduates was far surpassed those of other groups.
highest among the four states.
Ý An to Everyone (20:25)
overall, the number of postgraduates in a specific UK university completing
their dissertations completed on time was the highest figure through the
survey. it is also noteworthy that , students who failed to write a thesis had a
downward trend, while the opposite pattern was true for the other factors.
HW: The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary
school types.

A [overtake] B to become … ⇒ HAD OVERTAKEN to become the most popular


school type.

The number of students enrolling in community schools increased over years.


⇒ THE SHARE OF / THE PORTION / PROPORTION / PERCENTAGE
The graph below gives information about consumption of energy in the USA
since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Past ⇒ QKHT ⇒ HTHT ⇒ TL


Overview: [Future]
● TREND: all will increase (-hydro) to varying degrees
● ORDER: P & O
… be predicted/ projected/ forecast(ed)/ anticipated / expected to …
projections/ predictions show that …
will …/ is likely to …
Given is the line graph comparing the levels of consumption of different energy
sources in the US over a 50-year period, commencing in 1980.
Overall, if predictions are correct, all examined types of energy will increase to
varying degrees in popularity, save the case of hydropower. In addition, petrol
and oil are anticipated to remain as the most widely consumed energy in the
future.
Petrol & Oil / Coal / Natural gas
1. List: P&O: 35 QU - was double- Coal 20 - NG 16
2. Change: P&O / despite certain falls, -> have risen significantly + expected
to reach … roughly 50 QU by 2030
3. Compare: Similarly, C and NG will also witness a considerable increase in
consumption, with the respective figures of … and … by 2030.
… roughly similar / 2015
Petrol and oil started the period with 35 quadrillion units (QU) consumed,
which was double the figures for coal and natural gas, at about 20 QU and 16
QU, respectively. Thereafter, despite occasional falls, petrol and oil’s numbers
have risen significantly and are predicted to reach a peak of roughly 50 QU by
2030. Concerning coal and natural gas, they had shared roughly equal
numbers until a divergence in 2015, from which the former has overtaken the
latter to become the second most popular energy. This trend is set to continue
into the future, with the consumption of coal increasing to south of 30 QU
until the last year given while that of natural gas had gone up to about 25 QU
by 2015 and will hover around there.

Body 2
1- have been & continue to be the least preferred energy options, with the
initial consumption being recorded at about 4 QU for all three.
2- While N & SW have been used more up to now, predicted to rise to … , there
have been barely any changes to hydropower consumption, which will remain
around 4 until the last year shown.
18:11 List + Change
Khoa Tran to Everyone (18:12)
In 1980, the amount of Petrol and Oil consumed in the US doubled those of
Coal and Natural Gas, at 35 quadrillion units (QU). => P & O started the period
with 35 quadrillion units (QU) consumed, which was double the figures for …,
at … and …, in order.
Thereafter, this figure, despite certain falls, has risen significantly and is
expected to reach a peak of roughly 5048 QU in 2030.
huongtran to Everyone (18:13)
In the year 1980, about 35 units of Petrol and Oil was consumed, which was
double the figures for Coal and Natural Gas, at approximately 15 and 20,
respectively. In the following years, despite some certain falls, the
consumption levels of the former, having has risen significantly and is , are
expected to reach a peak of roughly 50 units by 2030.
Tùng to Everyone (18:13)
Starting at 35 quadrillion units in 1980, the consumption of petrol and oil was
roughly equal to the sum total figure of for coal and natural gas, at 20 and 16
quadrillion units respectively. Despite occasional falls, After having slightly
fluctuateded in the first two decades, the amount of petrol and oil’s numbers
consumed have risen significantly and are is anticipated to reach a peak of
approximately 47 quadrillion units by in 2030.
Ý An to Everyone (18:15)
Regarding the consumption of Petrol and Oil, there were 35 quadrillion units in
the first year surveyed of the survey, which was doubled the figures for cCoal
and nNatural gGas, atwith about 20 quadrillion units and 16 quadrillion units,
in the same year, respectively. Despite the certain falls ,5 years later then they
have risen significantly, expected to reach a peak at around 50 QU by 2030.

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