C1 Advanced
C1 Advanced
Useful phrases for a formal letter: (use as set phrases in the exam, don´t
experiment with new vocabulary or grammar)
Greetings
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Request for action
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C1 Advanced (CAE) Essay: Writing Structure
1. Introduction
Present and develop the essay question in your introduction
3. Conclusion
A summary of what you have said.
Step 1: Introduction
The first paragraph of an essay provides the introduction. It states what is to be
discussed and why. Your main points are briefly introduced. This paragraph need
not be lengthy.
Step 2: Main content
Paragraph 1
The second paragraph provides your second key point, lying it into the theme of
your essay. Again, bring in opposing points of view and support your second key
point with Information and background.
There are two approaches you can choose to write your essay professionally.
1. For and against
This is the traditional approach where a writer discusses points in favour of their
position and against. Typically this means that one point will be used to contrast
the general position. There are advantages to this method.
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Firstly, candidates are often more familiar with it and find it easier to write.
Secondly, it gives them more scope to use a wider variety of linking words “On the
other hand.. ,In contrast…”.
2. One side only
Writing an essay like this means that all points will be commented on one by one
and the writer takes a single-minded position. This may limit the language you
use somewhat, as it won’t need to convey differences or contrast, but some people
may like it.
Step 3: Conclusion
The final paragraph is used to summarise or conclude your essay. It shows how
the two key points you have presented compare or relate to each other. It also
clearly re-states your initial position from the introductory paragraph.
First Paragraph
Second Paragraph
As I see it,
It seems to me that ………… I would also say that ….
I am convinced that ……………
I am inclined to believe that ………………
There is no doubt in my mind that ………………
One of the drawbacks of ……. is ……….
However, one of the benefits is that …………
Changing topic
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One factor which has led to ………… is …………..
One of the factors which has brought this about is ………
The problem often stems from ………………..
The situation has been exacerbated by …………….
………….. has only made the situation worse.
One consequence of ……………. is …………….
Proposing steps and measures
As regards the most appropriate response to this situation, one suggestion would
be to ………
The first step to be taken would be to ……..
To alleviate the situation people should ………..
In addition they ought to ……………
This can only be dealt with if …………
To overcome this problem, …………..
Were the government to ……………, the situation would doubtless improve.
Individuals can do a great deal to …………
The burden of responsiblity lies in the hands of ……..
It is vitally important that ………
Legislation should be introduced to control ……………..
It would be a grave error if we ……………..
To conclude an essay: Concluding
Example
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Your class has attended a panel discussion on facilities that should receive money from local
authorities. You have made the notes below:
Which facilities should receive money from local authorities?
museums
sports centres
public gardens
Some opinions expressed in the discussion:
In regard of a recent discussion about the facilities, which are financially supported
by local authorities, I would like to write a few of my personal thoughts. Whether
we are talking about sports centres or public gardens, there is no doubt that they are
both a good thing to have in the city and should both be supported somehow. The
only question then is which one of these is more important, what are the pros and
cons of each one?
Let me start with the sport centres as I think these are a bit more problematic.
Obviously, in our times where lots of people spend days sitting in their office
staring at a computer, some sort of physical training is very important. We have to
balance that shift in our lifestyles. The problem I see with supporting the sports
centres is the number of activities that you can do at these days. There is almost
countless list of either individual or team sports that we can think of, and each
centre is usually designed for a specific type or at least a group of sports similar in
its nature. Therefore I think that it is too difficult to support them equally and we
can’t say which activity is better than the others either. Another reason for not
financing sports as much as green parks is their commercial use. What I mean by
that is that we usually pay for everything the centre offers us to do and therefore
they are more able to last from their own money than gardens.
Regarding of the green spaces, the situation is much clearer I think. Every city
needs gardens where people can sit and relax, but nobody is going to pay a tax for
just walking around.
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These factors lead me to my conclusion, that the public gardens are definitely a
facility which should be financed from public money, whereas in the case of sports
centres, the situation is questionable.
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C1 Advanced (CAE) Report: Structure
1.Introduction
The purpose of this report is to….
2.Main content
Paragraph 1 – Subheading
Give the relevant facts
Paragraph 2 – Subheading
Give the relevant facts
3. Conclusion
Make your recommendations
Report on ……. and then you write the topic of what you’re reporting.
or you can write the topic and end it with phrase : a report
Step 3: Introduction
The introduction must contain all the necessary information covered by the report:
Your report should explain what you feel you have achieved in the job so far,
describe an problems you have had, and suggest any future training that would be
suitable.
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use them so as to ensure a consistent experience for our students. Secondly, regular
meetings with a mentor should be mandatory in order to provide guidance and to
help teachers become independent and confident with teaching materials.
Conclusion – add heading
In the final analysis, the situation of the teachers and students at our school is very
likely to improve and overall satisfaction will probably increase due to more
efficient work processes if ideas included in the report are implemented.
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