Lesson 4 Patterns of Development
Lesson 4 Patterns of Development
of
Development
skill
NARRATION
event vivid
narrate
I. Narration
- the most basic pattern of
development
- describes how, when, and where an
event or occurrence actually happened
- used to tell a story or focus on a set of
related events
A. Components of Narrative Text
1. Logical Actions
- are considered the very movements
within the plot or the narrative that
drive the characters forward, be it
during the dialogue, or within a scene
Example
It was late spring the last time we saw Ross. He was
standing at the edge of the hill, and he never so much as
looked up even though we were sure he knew we were
there. There was a bunch of flowers clutched to his fist, but
there really was no reason for him to be standing there. We
knew that Carrie wasn't coming to see him. But he stood
there anyway, waiting, even as the afternoon sunlight
deepened towards the evening. He must have been standing
there for hours.
2. Way of Narration
- refers to how the writer presents the
story
- includes the pace by which scenes
are given out
* Having natural progression of time to the
events of the story makes a good writing.
3. Terminology
- places emphasis on the fact that
concepts are critical to the narration
* Writers must choose how to address
terms and which ones they want to
use in order to create an appropriate
setting.
Concrete Terms
- words that identify things, places,
and events that can be measured and
observed
- terms that have physical
manifestation in our world
Examples:
spoon, dog, house
Abstract Terms
- refer to ideas or concepts that are
intangible
Examples:
love, freedom, feminism
Concrete: “He was shivering violently
from the cold.”
Abstract: “The joy in the air was
palpable.”
General: “He gave her a piece of
jewelry.”
Specific: “Each green stone had fire in
its facets.”
quality
DESCRIPTION
sensory realistic
look
II. Description
- the pattern of development which
goes into details about a specific object,
person, or location, in order to firmly
set its appearance
What does it look like?
What are its characteristics?
A paragraph from Maya Angelou’s “I
Know Why the Caged Bird Sings
The dirt of the girl’s cotton dresses continued on their
legs, feet, arms, and faces to make them all of a piece. Their
greasy uncolored hair hung down, uncombed, with a grim
finality. I knelt to see them better, to remember them for all
time. The tears that had slipped down my dress left
unsurprising dark spots, and made the front yard blurry and
even more unreal. The world had taken a deep breath and
was having doubts about continuing to revolve.
Characteristics of Description
● has a clear focus and sense of
purpose
● uses sensory details and precise
words
● presents details in a logical order
Varieties of Description
1. Objective Description
- looks into factual and scientific
characteristics of what is being
described as objectively as possible
• The writer stays away from
emotional impressions or responses
and instead, describes the scene as it
2. Subjective Description
due to
(the fact that)
Signal Words for Effect
accordingly consequently in consequence so that
• People need to be aware of the effects so that they can make avoid this
problem.
• Parents need to look at their children and help them to become responsible.
granted