Journal Article
Journal Article
Abstract
The research was aimed at investigating the teacher’s and students’
attitudes in the aspect of behavior, cognitive, and emotion toward digital
corrective feedback on students’ writing quality. It was also aimed at finding
out the process of corrective feedback provision through Google Docs as a
digital tool in writing Factual Report, and determining the progress of
students’ writing quality. The method used to conduct this study is a case
study. The data were obtained through questionnaire, interview,
observation, and students’ text of writing, which were processed
quantitatively and qualitatively. The findings of study indicate that both
teacher and students showed positive attitudes toward digital corrective
feedback. Furthermore, the feedback provision through Google Docs was
not only implemented in the end of writing, but also it occured during the
writing process. In addition, the corrective feedback itself was given both
explicitly and implicitly in both written and spoken interaction. Then, the
progress of students’ writing quality in terms of content, language use, text
organization, vocabulary, and mechanics of writing, was examined. From
the three texts of student’s writing it was found that the students’ average
score of writing was progressing. The average score of first writing was 85.
The average score of second writing was 88. While the average score of
third writing was 94. It could be concluded that when the students and
teacher showed positive attitudes toward the digital feedback, the progress
of writing quality would be reflected.
Methodology
1. What Are the Teacher’s and Students’ Attitudes toward the Use of
Google Docs as Digital Corrective Feedback in Writing Factual
Report?
A. Students’ Attitudes toward the Use of Google Docs as Digital
Corrective Feedback in Writing Factual Report
Concerning the first research question, the result of descriptive
statistics shows that the overall mean score of attitude scale among
participants is 3.94 with Standard Deviation (SD) 0.821. This result reveals
that the participants have a positive attitude towards digital corrective
feedback. In addition, the mean scores of the three aspects of attitudes
toward digital corrective feedback among the respondents, are not slightly
different. As seen in Table 4, the mean score of behavioral aspect of attitude
is 3.95 (SD= 0.884). The mean of cognitive aspect of attitude is 3.94 (SD=
0.711). Yet, the mean score of emotional aspect of attitude is 3.91 (SD=
0.884), as seen in Table 1 (Appendix).
The data shown in Table 5 (Appendix) means that the teacher shows
positive attitude. Mostly her answered strongly agree on 18 items (60%) and
agree on 12 items (40%). In details, the descriptive statistics on the
behavioral, cognitive, and emotional aspect of attitude will be elaborated in
the following discussion.
1. First Writing
In the first writing students worked individually in the classroom to
write a Factual Report by choosing one of the following topics:
1. Social Phenomena (Smartphone, Vape, or Instagram ), or
2. Natural Pehomena (Thunder, Landslide, or Eclipse).
2. Second Writing
The second writing was conducted in the same procedure with the
first writing but it was accomplished by students outside the classroom as a
writing task. The stages of writing were also implemented. The topics of
writing they could choose were one of each number below:
3. Third Writing
The third writing was conducted in the same procedure with the first
and second writing but it was accomplished by students outside the
classroom as a writing task. The stages of writing were also implemented.
The topics of writing they could choose were one of each number below:
b. Writing
In writing Factual Report Student A has followed the ideas based on
the draft of writing. However, there were some corrections from his teacher.
Firstly, the teacher edited the sentence that should have adjective clause,
A Smartphone [1] is a mobile phone (also known as cell phone) with an
advanced mobile operating system[2] that combines features of a
personal computer operating system with other features which are
useful for mobile or handheld use.
Secondly, the teacher marked the ‘calls’ and ‘makes’ in sentence with
orange highlight meaning that it is the mistake related to language use
(subject-verb agreement), as follows
For instance, old phones can only do text and calls with credits which
makes it expensive.
Fourthly, on the punctuation issue, The teacher marked the comma with
purple highlight menaing to punctuation error.
Smartphones have struck a big impact on our society, the impact itself
may vary depending on the perspective”.
c. Revising
After Student A revised all the things suggested by the teacher, here
is the final writing text. He revised all mistakes based on teacher’s
suggestions. Finally he got 83 as the score of first writing.
2nd Writing
a. Pre-Writing
b. Writing
In second writing of Factual Report student A has made progress in
paragraphing. Eventhough, he did not include hyperlink he could include
the references into the paragraphs. However, he still received feedback
on the use of conjunctions, plural form, and capitalization.
c. Revising
Student A has revised all mistakes in terms of punctuation and
conjunctions based on the teacher’s feedback. Then he got 85 as the score
of second writing.
3rd Writing
a. Pre-Writing
As the third writing student A chose ‘Hoax’ as the topic discussion of
his writing. In the draft of writing he did not receive any feedback from the
teacher in all areas of writing. It means all components of Factual Report
have been reflected in the draft of writing.
b. Writing
From the text produced by Student A it can be seen that the teacher
focused on giving feedback of writing the language use (grammar), like the
subject-verb agreement, the use of adverb, pronouns, etc., as follows:
People tends to think that hoax only happens and shared because
people already read the whole article, but no.
... nowadays people need everything instantly from instant noodles
to instant news, but not only that but clicks in internet creates money
for the news outlet...
...for example like where does it come from, where did the person
who share this gets its source...
C. Revising
Student A has made all changes on the correction based on
teacher’s feedback. It seems that student A has made progress in term of
ideas or content, because there is no any feedback on content. The
feedback only focuses on the language use. Finally he got 95 as the score
on the third writing text.
In addition to the qualitative analysis above the assessment scoring analysis
was also conducted. It was found that the students’ writing quality showing
progress on the five elements of writing, namely content, text organization,
language use, vocabulary, and mechanics of writing. It is shown in the
following table:
Table 9. Students’ Progress of Writing Quality
References
Appendix
Table 1. Descriptive Statistics of Students' Attitudes toward Digital
Corrective Feedback
Std.
Students' Attitudes N Min Max Mean Deviation
Attitudes on Digital Corrective
Feedback 35 2 5 3.94 0.821
Behavior Aspect of Attitude 35 2 5 3.95 0.884
Cognitive Aspect of Attitude 35 3 5 3.94 0.711
Emotion Aspect of Attitude 35 2 5 3.91 0.884
Valid N 35