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The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. IELTS Life Skills

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Read the model answer for the question. Choose the discourse marker that best fits each space.

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The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the urban developments that took place. .......... , there were a number
of notable changes to the buildings and amenities of this area.

In 1910, the area had a combination of residential and industrial features, but by 1950 the industrial features had largely disappeared. .......... in
1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood, by 1950 this had been removed. .......... , the townhouses which used to dominate the 1910
map had been replaced by blocks of flats by 1950, and the areas of wasteland had gone.

.......... in 1950 was the development of more commercial and recreational features. The demolition of a second row of houses on Sherman
Street and the removal of the railway line made room for a spacious park and children's play area. .......... , to the right of the park some new
stores were built on the aptly named New Lane, replacing the small store of 1910, and the cafe and laundry were relocated.

.......... , the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to its residential accommodation, and its commercial and recreational
facilities were developed.

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These two maps show us the changes between the 1910’s Langley and its counterpart in 1950. Although someOnline of them are relocated,
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we can see that some of the landmarks still exist in 1950, such as the Jordan street, Sherman street, shops, café, and laundry. The
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factory, railway worker’s cottages, and wasteland have been rebuild as mansion, park, and flats.
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In detail, café has been relocated across Sherman street, and the laundry moved behind them. Though store still exist, they appeared in
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3 smaller store and has been relocated to right corner of the map, former place of the railway worker’s cottage. On 1950’s area map, the
Jordan street already connected to Sherman street by abolishing former townhouse between them. Mock Test

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The change also happened as the factory and wasteland in the upper part have been rebuild as Sherman mansion. In addition, The
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Chedel C Mahinay > Fathi Fadlian

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This is actually a more detailed presentation which has some potentials. I would suggest focusing on your subject-verb
agreement since several phrases doesn't quite add up to logic. Furthermore, keep in mind of your verb tense and linking
phrases to improve your overall structure of ideas and interpretations.

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These two maps distinguish the major changes in the Langley town from the years 1910 to 1950.

Overall, there has been a lot of modern progress with development of residential accommodation, fancy park and small-scale
businesses in these 40 years.

Firstly, the factory and small houses lined across Sherman Street in 1910 is replaced by Sherman Mansion in 1950. Previously, the
Badlands located on either the side of the Sharman Street are turned into a beautiful park with children’s playing area. Even other shops
had shifted there in 1950.

Moreover, in 1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood, by 1950 this had been removed. Many stores were opened in that area
along the new lane. Also, in 1950 the town houses built along the Jordan street were rather replaced by large flats that looked more
spacious in the surrounding.

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The main purpose of the maps is to provide information about the change of the town of Langley between 1910 to 1950. In general,
there were a lot of remarkable changes and developments to the buildings and amenities of this area.

In 1910, the town of Langley could be considered an industrial town. There was a factory that was located middle of the north side of
the town behind the townhouses on Jordan street. Moreover, the railway line was throughout the south side of town and there was a
row of railway workers' houses by the line In the middle of the town there was Sherman Street on the street there were a few shops a
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row of railway workers houses by the line. In the middle of the town, there was Sherman Street, on the street, there were a few shops a
grocery store, a laundry and a cafe. Besides these facilities, there were two wastelands one of them was located next to the factory
behind the store and laundry, another one was located near the railway line left side of workers' houses.
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place throughout those forty years. After the factory had been ruined, there was built three high-rise mansions on Sherman street.
Besides, the townhouses on Jordan street had destructured and was built new flats. The railway line, railway workers'
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wasteland all had been completely demolished and there was constructed a spacious park with a lake in the middle and
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playground. The number of stores had been increased and relocated to New lane road, the laundry and cafe replaced to where the
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The maps give us information about the town of Langley in two different years (1910 and 1950).
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In 1910, Langley had streets in both the center and west, which were Sherman and Jordan, which were separated by town
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Jordan Street was surrounded by town houses as well as Sherman. In the end of Sherman Street, in the east there are buildings for
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store, laundry, café. At the top part of the town there is a factory and wasteland. On the opposite, there are houses for rail workers and
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In 1950, townhouses around Jordan Street were removed by big ones, flats to be exact. Sherman Street connected with Jordan one. At
the top side, instead of factory and townhouses, there were Sherman mansions. The café and laundry were moved Tips to
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Overall, in the town of Langley there were a lot of changes that made it more convenient and modern. Speaking Part 1

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The two following pictures show the plan of the town of Langley, in 1910 and 1950. Mock Test

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a railway. In addition,
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only a convenient store, a laundry and a coffee shop were provided to the inhabitants. Vocabulary for IELTS

Secondly, in 1950 houses had been replaced by large housing. The factory and neighbouring wasteland were taken over for
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mansions,
while the town centre gave place to a large park with children's play area instead of the previous houses and wasteland.
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also disappeared by 1950 and I knew street had been build.

In a nutshell, eventhough the two main streets haven't changed and have even joined one another, leisure area, lake and shopping
centre's have transformed the town, in 50 years, from an industriale to a residential one.

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Can you guys have a look at my task 1? I'm trying to improve my writing skills.
Both maps show the town of Langley in two different period of time, one in 1910 and one in 1950. In general, it can be seen that there
were many remarkable changes and development taking place to the buildings and amenities of this area.
By 1950, the factory representing the industrial area had been replaced by Sherman Mansions with a lot of huge houses. The town went
from a combination of residential and industrial to an entire residential area. Besides, the railway which used to ran through the
neighborhood in 1910 had been removed by 1950. Futhermore, by 1950, the appearance of blocks of flats had taken the place of
townhouse which dominated the 1910 map, and there had been no wasteland left by 1950.
Another notable change to the area in 1950 was the development of more commercial and entertaining features The spacious Sherman
park and children's play area were the result of the removal of the railway worker's cottages and the destruction of the second row of
houses on Sherman Street. Commercially, to the right of the park, the small store in 1910 had been replaced by many new stores
named New Lane, and the cafe and laundry had been moved next to the Sherman Mansions.

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this is really good!

note that the new stores aren't named new lane.. the new lane is the name of a new road constructed in the year 1950.

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Oh I see, thanks alot.

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Both plans illustrate Langley in 1910 and forty years later.
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Overall, as is clearly seen from the maps, an industrial city Langley turned into an urban area for citizens; the Wasteland areas
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city were converted into recreational places with a green park and a children’s playground. Moreover, the number of stores has been
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increased and the residential area has been rebuilt.
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Firstly, in the year 1910, the factory, which was located in the north of the map, and a railway line together with the living places of
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railway workers in the south, were totally demolished; however, instead of these locations a new Sherman park and mansions have
been constructed and finally observed in 40 years. Secondly, since the townhouses along Jordan Street have been Practice Tests by
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The two maps depict how the town of Langley developed between 1910 and 1950. Online Course for IELTS

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Overall, the town had experienced a dramatic transformation from a small industrial town into a more modernised one, including the
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During the 1910-1950 interval, multiple houses lining Jordan Street in the westernmost part of the town were replaced with high-rise
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flats. Meanwhile, the factory and the barren land to the north of Sherman Street made way for three Sherman mansions. Similarly, the
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a row of shops and the New Lane Road, separating them from the park. Lastly, the old railway line on the southern side of Langley had
been removed over the period.
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The maps demonstrate the changes and developments that happened in the town of Langley between 1910 and 1950.

Overall, the first map shows an industrial area with many small houses and big sites that were useless, while the second map presents
significant improvements and modifications that occurred in 1950.

In 1910, the town was crowded with houses, and with unpractical uses of spaces, a wide range of areas was empty, two lines of small
houses expanded along with Jordan Street, 8 cottages were in front of the railway line in the south, Sherman Street contained a store, a
laundry, a cafe, and a noticeable number of homes.

In 1950, Jordan Street's houses have renovated and replaced by 3 big flats on the left, the factory and the houses around it were
removed and 3 big buildings in the Sherman Mansions area were constructed, in addition, a cafe and laundry were relocated to become
beside the 3 buildings in Sherman Mansions, while 2 new stores were built and the 3 stores were put along with the new road in the
right, finally, Sherman park in the middle with children's play area, a lake, and trees has replaced the wasteland and railway line.

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ANSWER ( 220 words):

The maps above illustrate some of the changes in the city of Langley over time, from 1910 to 1950.

In general, we can notice that this area had significantly changed into a much more modern town with many new buildings and
convenience.

In detail, in 1910, on the left side of the map, there were various townhouses adjacent to each other, creating a wide road called Jordan
Street. In addition, along Sherman Street in the heart of the city, there were two rows of houses, a store, a laundry, and a cafe shop. In
the North, there was a vast area of wasteland with a massive industrial factory building. Opposite Sherman Street, a block of railway
workers’ cottages in the wasteland in the South with a railway line nearby.
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In the next 40 years, we can see three large flats along Jordan Street, which replaced numerous townhouses in the past. In the North of
Sherman Street, there were three new Sherman Mansions, a laundry, and a Cafe placed nearby each other in a vast piece of green land.
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The maps illustrate the town of Langley from the year 1910 to 1950. Prepare for IELTS Listening

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Overall, the town of Langley in 1910 was previously a residential and a railway site. The townhouses on both Sherman and Jordan
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The 1910 town had various sites. To the north, a factory was established with a wasteland on the right side. In the middle of the town,
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and a café. Along the westside were the two lines of townhouses on Jordan Street. To the south is the Railway Samples
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In 1950, townhouses were demolished and became three buildings of flats in Jordan Street. Moreover, the factory and
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Sherman Street were created into a huge three mansions. Both laundry and the café were moved into the wasteland site on the
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northeast part. Lastly, a new lane was added separating the greenery of Sherman Park with a children’s play area to the three-lane-
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Both maps illustrate the city of Langley. While one map shows the town in 1910, the other in 1950. IELTS Books

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Overall, the infrastructure of that city had drastically changed and had been designed more efficiently throughout Academic
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On the centre of the map presenting Langley in 1910, is shown the Sherman street with a lot of houses on both sides of the street. On
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standing. On that side of the map, we can also find a big space of wasteland. The left side of the illustration shows the Jordan Street
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with plenty of townhouses along it.
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In 1950, the central point of the map is still taken by the Sherman Street, but in the place of the factory, Sherman Mansions had been
built. Next to these stands a store and a building with laundry. The lower part of the map is not taken by railways anymore. They had
been removed and in their place had been built the Sherman park with area for children. Across the street from that area stand 3 shops.
By the Jordan Street, all the townhouses had been replaced with 3 flats.

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The two maps illustrate Langley town in two years (in 1910 and 1950).
Overall, the town over the forty years changed a lot to became more modern and more residential.
The number of townhouses had been decreased and it replaced with three giant building that has many flats which can contain more
families. In the north side, the factory and wasteland had been demolished from the town and replaced with Sherman Mansions
buildings, the Laundry, and the Café. In 1910 there was a store nearby the laundry which is moved to the opposite side of the Café and
with two new stores, they cut out the Railway Workers’ Cottages with the Stores. Between the café and the stores there was Sherman
Street. Furthermore, the wasteland nearby the Railway Workers’ Cottages cut out with Sherman Park, the park has Children’s play area.
Railway line in the south removed from the town and in the edges of the Sherman Street there were houses but they took out form the
town. Also, one of the most striking changes the new street between the stores and the Sherman Park, its name New Lane. Sherman
and Jordan Streets remained the same.

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The two maps illustrate the city of Langley from 1910 to 1950.

Overall, It can be seen from the maps that's many of the wastelands have been built round the years. In addition, it is clear that the town
changed to be a town service-oriented.

Firstly, the factory has removed, and it had transported the laundry and cafe to the wasteland in the northeast of the town. Add on that,
it had been removed the townhouses and dispense with three large flats in the same place. As for the wasteland which is located in the
south of the town, contains the railway worker's cottages, which had been removed the railway line from the town. However, it had been
created a new line in the city and it becomes there now three stores avoid this street. And as the center of the town had been empty, it
had created a big park there with a lake and children's play area.
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The two maps displays the town design in the year 1910 and 1950.There are many noticeable differences which took place in building
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industrial Langley in 1910 to eco-friendly Langley, in 1950.
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In 1910,Langley’s land was majorly considered as the wasteland, on this land they setup factories and railway worker’s
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The two maps illustrate how town of Langley change over forty period from the years 1910 to 1950
Overall, the spectacular development in Langley in 1950 can be seen while addition there were addition of infrastructure and2amenities.
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In 1910 there was factory and waste land to northeast of Langley while, they were completely demolished and Sherman mansion was
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constructed in that place. Residential areas were converted into apartment along the Jordan street in the year 1950.
On the other hand the house of railway workers and wasteland were knockdown and Sherman park and children areas
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The maps demonstrate the town of Langley in 1910 and later in 1950. Preparing for IELTS
Overall, wasteland and working areas were utilized to build larger buildings and turn the space into a housing area with facilities.
In 1910, wasteland took the majority of space with two lands lying opposite to each other, one contained a factory while the other
provided cottages for workers of the railway line facing the wasteland. On Sherman Street there were tiny houses sitting next to each
other on both sides of the street, as well as utilities including a store, laundry place and a café. Heading forward that street, there are
houses in larger numbers in the town, located in both sides of Jordan Street.
Moving forward, in the year 1950, all wasteland was demolished, as well as the railway line and the workers' cottages, proving area for a
park in Sherman's street and a space for children to enjoy. The laundry and the café stayed but in different locations of those in 1910,
while the stores were multiplied from 1 to 3 stores. The street was also expanded into a new lane between the park and the stores.
Factory was turned into fancier Sherman mansions and the houses on Jordan streets were taken down on one side and upgraded to
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The picture presents the comparison between the land progress and improvement of buildings in the town of Langley from 1910 to
1950.
It shows the rise of bigger buildings and removal of wasteland and railway line during this transition.

In detail, the town of Langley started with 2 streets, namely Jordan and Sherman street. Factories and wastelands were abundant
during those times. Smaller houses and townhouses were built for family living. There are also small stores, laundry shops and coffee
shops located in the northeastern part of the map. A train might be used for transportation which can be evidenced by a railway line on
the southern part.

On the other hand, Langley in 1950s was developed into an urban living. An additional street has risen which is named New Lane which
can be seen in the southeastern part of the map. Sherman street and Jordan street are still visible with an improved infrastructure and
architectural buildings. The houses became mansions, while the townhouses were upgraded to Langley flats. The wasteland has been
developed to Sherman Park, which in there stood the Children's play area and pond.

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The two maps provide the information that how the town of Langley used to look in the year and 1910 and 1950 and what changes
occurred between these forty years.

Overall, remarkable changes were seen between these two maps. Town used to have two streets but after timeHome
an additional lane was
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To begin with West, there used to be number of town houses on the both side of Jordan Street which runs North to South,
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The maps given illustrate the development of Langley from 1910 to 1950. In general, the main changes that hadSpeaking Part
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missing of housing areas, factories, wastelands, and railway as well as the construction of several towering buildings
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In 1910, there were numerous houses on both sides of two main roads – Jordan Street and Sherman Street. Also, onLife
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wasteland next to it, while in the southern area, there was a railway, another wasteland, and cottages for railway workers.
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Sherman Park was built with a children’s play zone located in the southern wasteland and the railway area that had been removed.
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Furthermore, a new road was built on the west side of the park and opposite from the park across the road there were new stores,
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The maps represents the composition of Lagley town in 1910 and its development after forty years.
The set up of the town had changed drastically over the years, both in the types of buildings as well as in the streets arrangement,
where have been add a new street and the other two streets have been connected to each other. This was possible due to the transition
of types of house buildings, where single houses have been replaced by flats, which are placed only in the left side of the road.
At the same time Sherman street had a major improvement, where once there was the factory now there are mansions with an easy
access to the new park, placed on the other side of the street, that replaced the westeland and railway workers’ cottage. This space has
not only been used for the park, in addition to that the New lane street has been built along with several stores. In front of them the
caffe and laundry has been shifted in an upper position compared to the one they were in 1910, ending up being in the same side of the
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The maps describe information about the town of Langley in the period of 1910 and 1950.

Overall, Langley in 1910, it mainly had a lot of houses all over the place and more workplaces such as a factory. In contrast, there were
more mansions and flats on both Jordan street and Sherman street as well as a park and more shops instead of a factory in 1950.

Firstly, In 1910, there were a lot of townhouses on Jordan Street and Sherman Street. It had only few shops such as a store, a Laundry
and a Café on Sherman Street. There was a rail way nearby railway worker’s cottages. In addition, a Factory was built in wasteland
outside of Sherman Street behind shops and houses.

On the other hand, in 1950, it got a big park called Sherman park with area of Children’s play. in the middle of the town. The town had
more mansions instead of townhouses compared to 1910. Also, there were more stores instead of the factory in 1910. The railway did
not exist in the town in 1950.

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The picture illustrate the changes which have taken place at the town of langly over period of 1910 to 1950. Home
Firstly significant alteration occurred to buidings of the town.they removed small town houses and made them flats.they also removed
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factory an wasteland and made huge sherman mansions.Moreover substantial chnages happened to other side of sharman street,they
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sherman park.However the number of store were increased in 1950 as compared 1910. Prepare for IELTS Writing
In contrast,the number of caffe and laundry remain same but the cafe and laundry were relocated other side of sherman street .They
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also removed rail way line out side of the town.
overall,As compare to 1910 map they made more buildings, public amenity and made town more greener by removing
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The given map illustrates Langley's town in two different temporal times: 1910 and 1950.
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In 1910, Langley had a lot of independent accommodations for housing, namely the townhouses and those near to Jordan Streets,
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disposed in parallel to each other, and also in Sherman Street, in a vertical position relatively to the other rows of houses. There were
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The maps represent the changes that the town of Langley experienced over the period from 1910 to 1950. Grammar for IELTS

Overall, it can be clearly seen that the biggest changes over the 40-year period include: the factory and the wasteland demolishment
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and the transition from an industrial and working town to quite a welcoming and family area.

In the year 1910, there was a huge factory to the North and both northern and southern sides of the town were occupied by the
wasteland. However, by the year 1950 the southern wasteland and railway workers' cottages had been destroyed to make way for the
Sherman park with a children's play area to the south eastern side of it and stores across the road, which provided the construction of a
new street called New Lane.

Another big change was provided by the factory and north eastern wasteland demolishment, which held to Sherman mansions being
set up and the laundry and the cafe being moved to the previous location of the wasteland.

In addition, townhouses on Jordan street were combined together into three big buildings with flats and replaced to the western side of
the town, therefore connecting the roads of Jordan and Sherman streets.

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The two maps inform about the developments that took place in the town of langley from the year 1910 to 1950.
as seen in the map a couple of major changes have been done and the most significant was in the residential and industrial buildings.
all and all, the townhouses were demolished and turned into flats, while the factory was replaced with Sherman mansion.
another remarkable change was the railway line and its worker's cottages were all removed and a park with a playing ground for
children have been added, the cafe, as well as the laundry, have remained the same, however, the location mildly changed, moreover, the
number of stores has increased and instead of only one store there was three of them by 1950, furthermore the wasteland area have
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The two maps are showing the changes which had made in the years 1910 to 1950 in Langley,

Overall, it can be seen that lots of renovation had been made in Langley, in order to develop city. We can see lots of building were
diminish, and major parts were relocated.

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Let's start with right-side of area, which was dominate by townhouse in 1910, are now converted to Flats. And Jarden Street Road used
to in middle of the Townhouses were now connected with Sherman Street. In addition, new road had introduced at right-side of Langley,
named as New Lane. Home

Furthermore, Upper side from Sherman street had fully changed. Factory, store, and other houses were removed and replaced by
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Sherman Mansions. Also, Laundry had shifted to upper-right corner, and Cafe, which on the side of road was built at Landry’s
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Turning to lower side, Railway line had removed completely, and also Railway worker’s cottages and Wasteland area were used for
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Sherman park, children’s play area. and store establish on lower right-side corner.
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In brief. We can see lots of changes have been made from 1910 to 1950, and many facilities were established.
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The two maps show the town of Langley in the years 1910 and 1950 and the urban developments that took place. Overall,
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In 1910, the area had a combination of residential and industrial features, however, by 1950 the industrial features had largely
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disappeared. Whereas in 1910 a railway line ran through the neighbourhood, by 1950 this had been removed. Furthermore, the
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townhouses which used to dominate the 1910 map had been replaced by blocks of flats by 1950, and the areas of wasteland had gone.
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Another major change to the area in 1950 was the development of more commercial and recreational features. The demolition of the
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second row of houses on Sherman Street and the removal of the railway line made room for a spacious park and children's play area.
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The two diagrams display the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950, illustrating the urban developments that occurred.
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In 1910, Langley was a town packed with close knit houses packed against one another with construction and wasteland occupying a
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large portion of the town. By 1950, a lot of the land had been used more efficiently and urban wastelands were removed. The
townhouses that were once packed tightly together at Jordan Street in 1910 were demolished and replaced with flats, allowing
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accommodation whilst taking up less space. This change exhibits how the improvement in efficiency is evident.Preparing
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street’s townhouses were also renovated into Sherman Mansions, which took over one of the wastelands that once hoarded Langley.
Replacing the row of Sherman townhouses was a central park. The park is saturated with nature and even adopts a lake in the centre-
along with the greenery, a children’s play area was built as well. The park also replaced the other wasteland in Langley.

With more room for accommodation in 1950, more facilities for its citizens were to be set in place. By 1950, the amount of stores
increased by three-fold, and the cafe and laundry were developed in a more spaced environment. Unlike 1910, where all facilities left the
shops with no room to breath, the new and improved design allowed for more room for pedestrians to walk. Another drastic difference
were the new roads and intersections that had been built. This increased efficiency in transportation for the town.

Looking at the big picture, Langley has made major changes ranging from it’s residential accommodation to its environmental
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The given map illustrate the changes same area in Langley from 1910 to 1950.

Overall, we can see a lot of developments in this area over the given time sown. We can see new road and park added and small
households transformed into mansions and apartments.

In 1910, Langley had a factory located in the north. Also there was only two road one is Jordan street directed north to south and other
is Sherman street directed east to west. There was small town houses alongside the roads. In addition railway workers’ cottages
located at the southwest of the town. This small town has one small store laundry and café on the Sherman street to the north west
and south there was to lots named Wasteland. At least we can see the railroad passing through the south end of the town

By year 1950 we can see many changes. Jordan and Sherman streets are the only things those remain same. But the households along
the Sherman transformed into mansions. To the north of the road Factory was demolished. Jordan streets townhouses renovated. A
new road, which named New Lane, was added to the southwest of the Langley. Store ,Café and Laundry was moved to west and new
stores constructed. Wastelands railway workers’ cottages were removed with the railroad.

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The map expresses the view of the town of Langley in 1910 and four decades later, in which there can be seen a great deal of territory's
structure changes.
To begin with the comparison of accommodation, in 1910 there had been many townhouses that were replacedHome with two blocks of flats
forty years later. The store, also, on Sherman Street was demolished in 1950. However, the whole quantity of stores had been raised by
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Sherman park with playing area for children had been built on that place. Furthermore, the area where the factory locaded before had
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Concluding the mentioned information, Although the changes in living conditions had extremely changed in accountPrepareoffor
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The maps illustrate the changes between 1910 and 1950 in the town of Langley.
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It is clear that the number of buildings in Langley had decreased between 1910 and 1950, and the percentage of green Tests
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Furthermore, houses and the factory which were located at both sides of the street had knocked down, then Sherman Mansions had
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built. At the same time cafe was replaced at the other side of the street. And new lane had been built between Sherman park and new
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its workers were pulled down. This area was changed into a park with a playground. Another key change is that the houses which ran
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along Jordan Street were knocked down and replaced by 3 blocks of flats to accommodate more inhabitants. In addition, the buildings
located on Sherman Street were demolished, hence the Sherman Park gained this area. Stores in the town were increased in number
and located along the New Lane street which was also built. Furthermore, the factory which was located in close proximity to Sherman
Street was demolished and replaced by three Sherman Mansions. In contrast, the Laundry and Cafe remained next to each other
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The two maps illustrates the various changes Langley town has undergone through years from 1910 to 1950.
It is evident that the town has drastically changed in the given 40 years. It is marked by various construction of new building in the
wastelands.
Townhouses from 1910 are removed which were located towards the west of the town and across the left of Jordan street. They have
been replaced by 3 tall buildings that has many flat and it is now connected with sherman street. The townhouses that were present on
both the sides of sherman street in 1910 has been deconstructed in 1950 along with the factory. To the north of it, Sherman Manisons
have been built with 3 tall buildings. Café and Laundry which were situated opposite to each other on the sherman street are now
constructed together on the wasteland.
In additon to this, a new lane has been made to the south-east of the map where Railway worker’s cottages were present alongwith the
railway line which are now demolished. It has divided the wasteland situated to the south of sherman street in to two halves. The left
side is turned in to a very beautiful garden which has a lake and children’s play area with some children rides whereas, on the other half,
three new stores has been added in the town.

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The two maps shows what a town named Langley looked like in 1910 and 40 years after in 1950,

In general, we could say the town used to be a mixture of both residential and commercial area in the year 1910 but it has totally been
developed to a full residential area with a new street name New Lane and invention of children's playing ground.

in the year 1910, there were town houses on Jordan street and on Sherman street, with a factory and wasteland at the back of Sherman
street. While we can see a store, cafe, and laundry standing separately with railway workers cottage right behind the cafe and a railway
alongside a wasteland.

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Comparing 1910 to 1950, it is obvious the new Langley has been fully turned to a residential area with flat houses which has replaced
the old town houses on Jordan street and Sharmen Mansions has replaced the old type of houses on Sherman street. Meanwhile both
the laundry and the cafe are now right beside the Sherman mansions while three newly built stores could be seen in a new street called
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It can be seen that Railway line, Railway workers' cottages have completely vanished with no wasteland left in 1950 replaced into
Sherman Park and Stores next to the park. There's a Children's play area in the corner of Sherman Park as well.
The Northern part of Langley has also refurbished with the introduction of Sherman Mansions and Laundry taking place of Factory and
wasteland which was present earlier. Cafe, However, just moved it's location from southern side of Sherman Street to just opposite to
northern side. As well as, Store which was earlier in the northern region, now moved to southeast of the Langley also expanded 2 more
stores in the lane.
Speaking about the western side of Langley, Stack of Townhouses has been renovated to flats by the time 1950.

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This map shows The Langley city between 1910-1950.

Firstly, the New Lane street added in 1950 in Langley and Other streets still there also the railway line there was not, therefore railway
worker's cottages was not in the 1950s in Langley.

There were townhouses, a factory and a few Wasteland in the 1910s in Langley. However the 1950s, there was not in Langley. They
were building Sherman Mansions and flats, also they added 2 new stores and a park in Langley.

Probably, more people lived in the 1950s than 1910s. So, they more made houses, stores and a park for themselves.

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In 1910, assuming the top of the map is north, there were townhouses on the West side. On the contrary, a laundry wasfor
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To sum up, the town of Langley in 1950 was quite different. The townhouses on the West side were replaced byWritingflats. In addition
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In 1910, the area constituted Industrial features such as railway lines and factories. There were townhouses on both sides of Jordan
street. Moreover, the town is not organized, as much of the land is wasted. Speaking Part 1

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However, in 1950, the townhouses were replayed by flats utilizing the space. A new lane was constructed joining Sherman street. In
addition to this, stores have increased three-fold and were constructed in an organized manner. The significant Online
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The two maps clearly depict the changes in langley's town that took place after the year 1910 to 1950. In general, there have been some
significant changes that took place over a period of 40 years. The place developed more as a residential area.

The town houses present in either side of Jordan street to the left of town in 1910 were developed into Flats only on the left side of
street over forty years. To the North of town above Sherman Street, Sherman Mansions were built, where the Factory used to used to be
40 years ago. To the right of Mansions, Laundry and Cafe were opened in the Wasteland and Old Laundry.

A New street named New Lane was created joining Sherman Street from south vertically. The Wasteland below Sherman Street was
replaced by Sherman Park, the park also includes Children's play area in the south-east direction, adjoining New Lane. New Stores were
introduced by 1950 to the south east of Langley, to the right of New Lane, where Railway worker cottages extending towards wasteland
and a Cafe in the lower and upper regions respectively. Finally the railway line, extending from east to west in 1910, was completely
removed by 1950.

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Your answer is not bad, but capitalization mistakes will probably lower your score. Although all of the labels on the maps are
capitalized, you should only cpaitalize proper nouns in your writing. For example, flats and north (line 5), factory (line 6),
laundry, cafe, wasteland, and old laundry (line 7) are common nouns and should not be capitalized. Mansions should not be
capitalized unless you insert Sherman before it; then it becomes a proper noun. Good luck.

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The maps depict the extensive changes that happened in the town of Langley between 1910 and 1950 wherein it can be seen that a
huge change had occurred after the given time frame.

In detail, there were just two streets in the town in 1910 which were Jordan Street to the East and Sherman Street in center which
travels mostly across the town. However, New Lane Street was added on the southwest of the town during 1950 and all these streets
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are now interconnected unlike the past four decades.

Focusing more on the commercial side of the town, in 1910, the café and laundry shops were transferred on the northeast corner of the
town while stores are now lined across the café on the southwest which replaced the railway worker’s cottagesHome
during 1950.
Furthermore, the factory was gone and was replaced by Sherman Mansions in the north while the townhouses Downloads
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named Sherman Park. Also, the Railway line that runs across the town in the south was completely gone in 1950.
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