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Writing Task 1: Static Chart

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of people migrating to and from the UK in the year 2007 for six different reasons. Employment was the most common reason for migration. 30% of immigrants came to the UK for work, while 29% of emigrants left for work. Over a quarter of immigrants came for education while only 4% left for this reason. The proportions moving to accompany someone were similar at 15% and 13% respectively, while 32% of emigrants gave other or no reasons compared to 17% of immigrants.

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Writing Task 1: Static Chart

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of people migrating to and from the UK in the year 2007 for six different reasons. Employment was the most common reason for migration. 30% of immigrants came to the UK for work, while 29% of emigrants left for work. Over a quarter of immigrants came for education while only 4% left for this reason. The proportions moving to accompany someone were similar at 15% and 13% respectively, while 32% of emigrants gave other or no reasons compared to 17% of immigrants.

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WRITING TASK 1

STATIC CHART

HUNG HOANG
PIE
CHART
HUNG HOANG
LANGUAGE FOCUS

Phần trăm/con số của Phân số


- the percentage of 20% = a fifth
- the proportion of 25% = a quarter
- the allocation of 50% = a half
- the number/amount/quantity of 30 % = nearly a third
33%, 29%, 30% = around a third
Con số cho
- the figure for
So sánh
Chiếm A is twice greater/higher than B
- accounted for A is twice as much as B
- made up A doubles B / A is double B
- occupied
- constituted

HUNG HOANG
The charts below show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007

HUNG HOANG
OPENING – Paraphrase

The charts below show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in
2007.

=> The pie charts illustrate the proportion of people migrating to and from the
UK in the year 2007 for six different reasons.

HUNG HOANG
OVERVIEW – Order

Looking at the charts, it is clear that/as can be seen from the charts,
employment was the most common reason for people’s migration decision.

HUNG HOANG
BODY STRUCTURE

Sentence 1 – List Info (highest)

Sentence 2 – Compare with other charts

Sentence 3 – Continue to list + compare

NOTE
Should report from the highest to the lowest figure.
Focus on noticeable comparison (equal, double…)

HUNG
BODY 1 – List + Compare

30% of immigrants to the UK was to have a definite while the figure for
emigration was slightly lower, at 29%. Although merely 12% of immigrants
looked for a job, the proportion of people leaving for this purpose was noticeably
higher, at over a fifth (22%). Over a quarter of people immigrating to the UK
to pursue formal education while only 4% left the UK for this purpose

HUNG HOANG
BODY 2 – List + Compare

The proportions of those moving in and out of the UK to accompany someone


were quite similar, at 15% and 13% respectively. Although a significant
number of people gave other reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated
(32%), this figure accounted for only 17% of immigrants.

HUNG HOANG
HOMEWORK

The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for different age
groups in Canada.

HUNG HOANG
Paraphrase
nhóm tuổi Nguyên nhân chính
 people (those) aged 10-20  the major concern
 people (those) who are 10-20  the most common cause of stress
 people in the 10-20 age group  the main source of anxiety
 10-20 year-old people  the primary cause
 the 10-20 year-olds
 the 10-20s

lo lắng về
 be stressed/ worried/ concerned about
 be under stress/ pressure from
 be affected by stress due to
 suffered from
 experienced stress resulting from
OPENING

The bar chart below shows the most important causes of stress for
different age groups in Canada.

=> The bar chart illustrates major causes of stress among people of four
different age groups in Canada.

HUNG HOANG
OVERVIEW – What are the youngest/olderst group are worried about?

As can be seen from the chart, finances and heavy workload are the major
causes of stress among adults aged 25-54. However, as people age, they are
increasingly less likely to encounter these problems but have a higher tendency
to be worried for no specific reason and about health issues.

HUNG HOANG
BODY 1 – +

The main sourse of anxiety among people aged 25-54 is overwork, causing a
quarter of this group suffer. This is followed by weak financial stability, at
15%. By contrast, these two problems affect only a minority of those aged
over 65 years old (below 7%), while a much higher figure of about 15% of the
55-64s are worried about these issues.

HUNG HOANG
BODY 2 – +

No particular reason is the primary source of worries for individuals over 65


years old, at over 32%. This problem affects lesser and lesser in younger age
groups 55-64 and 25-54, at 17% and 7% respectively.

Health issues are apparently a minor concern among the two youngest groups
aged under 64, being mentioned by less than 10% of each group. In contrast,
this affects a larger percentage of 65-74 year old people (15%) and those over 75
(23%).

HUNG HOANG

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