Narrative Writing
Narrative Writing
BEGINNING.
1. Something bad happened to my friends and I when we were in the forest and I
felt hopeless and accepted the truth.
2. My friends and I went to visit my uncle who leave in love craft county.
3. The place looked strange to the narrator’s point of view.
SETTING.
1. Time-line: In the 19th century.
2. Black people were highly criticised by the white people.
3. A lot of witchcraft.
4. A lot of suspense in the atmosphere.
5. Tough situations.
6. Ends in a scary cliffhanger.
Midday arrived quicker than expected, Simon and Elvis were sleeping as
I drove the car. It was peaceful until I saw a police car ahead of me. They
gave the sinister look as I drove past them. Simon woke up and saw the
police car then looked at me with confused look. Suddenly, we hear a
police car coming from behind us and I had no choice but to pull over.
The two officers came to my car, Simon woke Elvis. One police officer
came to my window and knocked. I drew the window down and the
officer crouched to the level of the window and asked, ‘Kindly, step
outside the car, sir’. I reluctantly got out of the car, Simon and Elvis gave
the officer the look of I-will-hurt-you-if-you-hurt-my-friend look.’So
where are you headed to?’ the officer asked. I replied, ‘My friends and I
are going to Love Craft country to spend time with my uncle, sir.’ The
officer grunted and asked for my Driver’s License. He looked the other
officer and grunted. He gave my Driver’s License back and left us.
The rest of the journey was silent and when we finally arrive at my
uncle’s place, my uncle left the house, with arms spread widely to hug us
all. Uncle Jack told as that we should get settled then we can have dinner
at the camp-fire.
The full moon is out and most of my friends are tired and uncle and I are
catching up with each others life. I told that I got a scholarship to an
expensive university along with his friends, he was pleased. His mood
then suddenly change, he had a pale look on his face. I was waiting for
this awkward silence to disappear. ‘Bad things happen to everyone in the
county including me,’ uncle spoke. He then started talking that there was
a family of white people that moved here, things got bad. People
kidnapped, unusual curfews, strange sounds and weird symbols.
‘If I told you something strange, would you believe me?’ I laughed but
stopped find out that it was serious. He told that when he went to the
forest with his friends to hunt down rabbits, how they went until it was
dark and that’s when the weird things happened. Creepy screams that
terrorized their souls. His friends died that night.
It was silent once again and I felt sick to my stomach, my uncle sighed
but before he could continue the story, the bushed started to shake then at
the corner of my eye, I saw two white dots looking at us. It blinked then
showed its teeth. I woke up my friends up and looked at me with shocked
looks then Simon started to move quickly because the creature was
climbing the trees, reached to the top and leaped towards me. Bang! A
flash of light blinded me, darkness consumed me.