Comment Examples
Comment Examples
Writing
Analytical Skills
Verbal Skills
Other
Needs Improvement
On those occasions when you need to convey less-than-positive information on a report card, use
the following phrases. Note that you can easily convert comments from both groups into positive
or encouraging ones.
Reading
Writing
Analytical Skills
Participation/Other
Science
Positive Comments
In writing comments for elementary student report cards, use the following positive
phrases regarding students' progress in science.
1. Is a leader during in-class science activities.
2. Understands and executes the scientific process in class.
3. Has an analytic mind for science concepts.
4. Takes pride in his science projects.
5. Did a wonderful job on her __ science project.
6. Strongest work is in science.
7. Is drawn to our science corner in all his or her free time.
8. Continues to turn in top-notch science assignments.
9. Continues to conduct top-notch science experiments.
10. Particularly enjoys hands-on science experiments.
11. Has a naturally investigative nature in science.
12. Is quite proficient in all science concepts and vocabulary.
13. Is able to identify and describe all science vocabulary.
14. Demonstrates an understanding of target science content and makes
relevant connections.
15. Demonstrates an enhanced understanding of science content.
16. Meets all learning standards in science.
17. Shows an understanding of systems that are designed to accomplish a task.
18. Uses the appropriate science vocabulary in her oral responses and written
work.
19. Demonstrates a clear understanding of the concepts and skills learned.
20. Makes a great effort in science and is very inquisitive.
21. Is doing a great job in science and always is the first to hand in assignments.
Social Studies
Phrases That Describe Strengths
Try some of the following positive phrases that tell about a student's strength in your
report card comments for social studies. Feel free to mix and match chunks of them
as you see fit. The bracketed phrases can be swapped out for more appropriate
grade-specific learning targets.
Note: Avoid superlatives that aren't all that illustrative of skill such as, "This is their
best subject," or, "The student demonstrates most knowledge about this topic."
These don't help families to really understand what it is that a student can or can't
do. Instead, be specific and use action verbs that precisely name a student's abilities.
The student:
1. Utilizes [maps, globes, and/or atlases] to locate [continents, oceans, and/or
hemispheres].
2. Identifies a variety of social structures in which they live, learn, work and
play and can describe dynamic relationships within these.
3. Explains the significance of [national holidays, people, and symbols] on the
global and individual level.
4. Establishes a sense of their place in history to describe how specific events in
the past have impacted them.
5. Describes how different cultural, economical, political, and geographical
factors influenced a single event or time period in history.
6. Explains their own rights and responsibilities in society and can tell what it
means to them to be a good citizen.
7. Utilizes social studies vocabulary correctly in context.
8. Demonstrates an understanding of the structures and purposes of
government.
9. Displays awareness of how people and institutions promote change and can
provide at least one example of this (either past or present).
10. Applies process skills in social studies such as [drawing conclusions,
sequencing, understanding different points of view, exploring and
investigating problems, etc.] in a variety of scenarios.
11. Analyzes and evaluates the role of [trade] in society and is able to tell a few
factors that influence the [production of goods].
12. Supports reasoning with evidence during discussions and debates.