Textual Evidence
Textual Evidence
A. a lawyer B. a doctor
C. They are brother and sister. D. They are husband and wife.
Guide Questions:
1. What does deferred mean?
2. How was dream compared to a raisin? rotten meat? and
heavy load?
3. What are the authors’ descriptions of a dream deferred?
4. Based on the poem, what happens when you don’t go after
your dreams and you defer them at a later time?
5. If you were the author, how would you feel upon writing the
poem?
6. Do you agree with the author’s idea that a dream deferred
stinks like a rotten meat? Why?
What is the claim of the author based on the text?
Textual
Evidence
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Claim
a statement or series of statements for
something
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Claim
a statement or series of statements for
something
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Counterclaim
a statement or series of statements for
something
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Counterclaim
a statement or series of statements for
something
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Textual
evidence
the details given by the author in order to
support his/her claims
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Textual
evidence
the details given by the author in order to
support his/her claims
Sample essay about the poem:
“Harlem” by Langston Hughes gives me the feeling, or mood of
anger and depression. It feels like the idea of deferring dreams
is hurtful and maybe even causes one to become resentful
before eventually being overcome by anger. I know this
because the poem uses the words “foster like a sore,” which
gives me a feeling of pain. Further, describing deferred dreams
as if they “stink like rotten meat” is an unpleasant image,
giving me the feeling of resentment. Finally, when the poem
end with “Or does it explode?” makes me think of a person who
boils over in anger.
3 ways
how you can present
textual evidence in
your writing
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1. Paraphrasing
-restating the text in your own words
-It is important to acknowledge you’re using
ideas from others, reworded to match your
thinking and argumentation/commentary so
the reader can understand your points.
Example:
In the poem “Harlem”, the authorclaimed that a person may
feel disappointed when dream deferred for he questioned the
reader’s feeling about withholding dreams.
(What happens to a dream deferred?)
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2. Summarizing
-stating in a shorter way the text and other
relevant details to support the idea
-It involves putting the main idea(s) into your
own words, including only the main point(s).
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3. Quoting
-directly restating a part of the text
-It must be identical to the original, using a
narrow segment of the source, and must be
attributed to the original author.
Writing a
Well-
written
Position Paper
3 Major Parts of a Position Paper
Tips for Writing
a Well-Written Position Paper
Textual Evidence:
What were your thoughts or ideas
about the principles of textual evidence
prior to the discussion of this lesson?
I thought…
I learned that…
Thank you!