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Using Metaphor and Simile
Metaphor – describes by comparing something to something else WITHOUT using ‘like’ or
‘as’.
- The sun was an orange ball in the sky.
- The bird is a colourful rainbow.
- He is an accident waiting to happen.
Simile – describes by comparing something to something else BY USING ‘like’ or ‘as’.
- The sun was like an orange ball in the sky.
- The bird was as colourful as a rainbow.
- He is like an accident waiting to happen.
Exercise 1 Finish the similes below.
1 The water is as cold as………………………………………………
2 The coffee was like …………………………………………………..
3 The racing car is as fast as………………………………………….
Now think of some things to write similes about. Brainstorm quickly, and write down 10
possible things below. Then choose 3 of them to write similes about.
1 ……………………………….. 6 ………………………………..
2 ……………………………….. 7 ………………………………..
3 ………………………………… 8 ………………………………..
4 ………………………………… 9 ………………………………..
5 ………………………………… 10 ………………………………..
Now write your three similes.
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3 ………………………………………………………………………………..
Exercise 2 Finish the metaphors below.
1 The star is ……………….………………………………………………
2 The angry boy is…………………………………………………………
3 The exam was……………………………………………………………
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Now look at your list of possible things to write similes about. Then choose 3 of them to write
metaphors about.
Now write your three metaphors. Remember NOT to use ‘like’ or ‘as’.
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2 ………………………………………………………………………………..
3 ………………………………………………………………………………..
Image poems
Exercise 3 Here are some image poems. Some use metaphor and simile. Some are also Haiku
(5-7-5 syllables).
Answer these questions for each poem below:
1 Does the poem describe a single thing? What is it?
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2 Does the poem use a metaphor or simile? Explain your answer.
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3 Check the syllables and mark them under the words. Are they really Haiku?
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A. The sleek silver bird B. Like a silver bird
rumbled down the runway and the huge passenger aircraft
lifted off skywards. commenced its take off.
C. Glorious southern sky; D. Stars shining brightly;
Totally pollution free; just like flickering candles
Brilliantly azure. in the southern sky.
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