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The document is a descriptive paragraph about the author's bedroom written by Irhan Ramadhanie in 2011. It describes the layout of the bedroom including a television, playstation, small wardrobe, bed, window, clock, and large cupboard. The bedroom also contains photos of friends and possessions of the author's family. The author feels warm and comfortable in the bedroom, which they consider the best room in their home. The paragraph received comments from other users providing feedback and suggestions to improve the description.

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Descriptive Paragraph - My Bedroom - WRITING CLASS

The document is a descriptive paragraph about the author's bedroom written by Irhan Ramadhanie in 2011. It describes the layout of the bedroom including a television, playstation, small wardrobe, bed, window, clock, and large cupboard. The bedroom also contains photos of friends and possessions of the author's family. The author feels warm and comfortable in the bedroom, which they consider the best room in their home. The paragraph received comments from other users providing feedback and suggestions to improve the description.

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Descriptive Paragraph "My Bedroom"


MY BEDROOM

My bedroom is comfortable place to take a rest. It is a good place for relax and sleep in the night. I can do
everything that I want in my room. In the right side of my bedroom, next to the door there are my favorite
equipments. It's full with one set of television and playstation. Beside the equipment, there is a small wardrobe that
contains my clothes, books, and other tools to study. I put all my necessary equipment in that small wardrobe.
Above the wardrobe, I hung a kaligrafi picture on the wall. Next to the wardrobe there is a small bed that very
comfortable for me to sleep. At night, my bed feel very cold. In the corner of my bedroom, there is a window and the
sun light in the morning can through into my bedroom. Next to the left wall, I hung a clock, calendar, and a small
photo of my friends. And the last there is a big cupboard that full of my family's possesion. All these things make me
feel warm and comfort everytime. It's a best room in my home.

By : Irhan Ramadhanie

Posted 15th December 2011 by Irhan Ramadhanie

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Irhan Ramadhanie December 15, 2011 at 7:19 AM


hello all i need your comment please
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Irhan Ramadhanie December 15, 2011 at 7:23 AM


hello all i need your comment please
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Irhan Ramadhanie December 15, 2011 at 7:23 AM


hello all i need your comment please
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my story December 15, 2011 at 8:55 AM


It is interesting to read your paragraph. Do some correction here:

Next to the wardrobe there is a small bed that very comfortable for me to sleep. ... a small bed that is very
comfortable etc.

And the last there is a big cupboard that full of my family's possesion. ... describe about your family possession
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oktaliana December 15, 2011 at 2:16 PM


excuse me...

I think your paragraph is good.

but i have another opinion about your sentence "At night, my bed feel very cold"

it's better,if you change it into

"at night,i feel very cold if i lay on the my bed"


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Anonymous May 24, 2014 at 10:39 PM


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Anonymous June 8, 2015 at 5:21 PM


I like your descriptive paragraph. It is very good written and I want you to add more extra things to your beautiful
bedroom.
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Anonymous November 13, 2015 at 12:40 AM


add more descriptions of how things look
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Anonymous January 22, 2016 at 11:44 AM


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Anonymous September 23, 2016 at 7:45 PM


Your paragraph is good. I think your bed room is the same
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Anonymous October 9, 2017 at 4:45 PM


Enter about the furniture
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oumaima lycee pilote de kasserine December 16, 2017 at 12:46 AM


are you tunisian??
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