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Proofreading Exercise Worksheet: Study Development

This document provides a proofreading exercise to identify and correct any mistakes in 6 paragraphs that describe an organization that provides support for older individuals and those with mental health issues. The organization has an open door policy, is run by passionate volunteers who create a peaceful environment, believes in equality and listening to members' views, allows members to develop social skills and growth through talking to volunteers and peers, sees members helping each other on games days to get prizes, and uses case studies to share members' positive experiences.

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Proofreading Exercise Worksheet: Study Development

This document provides a proofreading exercise to identify and correct any mistakes in 6 paragraphs that describe an organization that provides support for older individuals and those with mental health issues. The organization has an open door policy, is run by passionate volunteers who create a peaceful environment, believes in equality and listening to members' views, allows members to develop social skills and growth through talking to volunteers and peers, sees members helping each other on games days to get prizes, and uses case studies to share members' positive experiences.

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Study Development

Proofreading exercise worksheet

 Identify and correct any mistakes


 Rephrase so as to improve clarity and reduce word count

1. This organisation primarily has members who are older in age, but has an open door
policy to those who may have mental health issues, and want to join.

2. The passion of the volunteers that run the organisation, keeps it a place of
peacefulness and support for the members.

3. They believe in equality and are an association that members can be assured their
views and wishes will be listened to and where practicable, acted upon.

4. The opportunity to just talk to the volunteers and peers, develops there social skills
and personal growth.

Study Development
York St John University, 2020
5. I can particularly see this when I volunteered on games day. Where they all
participate and help each other out to get the final outcome which is the prizes.

6. Case studies give the views and opinions of members and there positive experiences
they have had.

Study Development
York St John University, 2020

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