Literary Response Student Workbook
Literary Response Student Workbook
Figurative Language
Authors use figurative language to help the reader visualize (or see) what is happening
in a story or poem. It is language that uses imaginative comparison, rather than literal
statement, to give the reader a feeling about the subject. When you read poetry or
literature, you must be able to recognize figurative language and understand how
it is used. Here are the most common forms of figurative language:
A. Similes
A simile is a figure of speech that compares two unlike things,
using the words “like” or “as.”
Example: Her hands were as cold as ice.
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Exercise: Read the following poem and underline all of the similes.
Then answer the questions that follow.
Eve Merriam
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1. In which stanza does the author contrast the texture,
or feel of the ginkgo and the willow? How does she distinguish them?
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2. In the last stanza, Merriam writes, “My eyes feast upon the willow,
but my heart goes to the ginkgo.” What does she mean by this?
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Your Turn: Make up three similes of your own. Each simile should contain at least one
adjective.
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B. Metaphors
A metaphor is a figure of speech that compares two unlike things.
However, unlike a simile, the words “like” and “as” are not used in a metaphor. A metaphor
states that one thing is something else.
Example: Her skin is velvet. (Note: The author does not state that
her skin is “like” velvet or “as soft as” velvet. She states that it is velvet.)
Example: In the following verse from Shakespeare’s Macbeth,
life is compared to a shadow, a player, and a tale.
Dreams
Hold fast to dreams
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.
Langston Hughes
Practice: Each sentence below contains either a simile or a metaphor.
Beside each sentence, write an “S” for simile or an “M” for metaphor.
2. Stop being such a mother hen and mind your own business!
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C. Personification
Personification means giving human qualities, feelings,
action, or characteristics to non-human objects.
Example: The sun poked its head out from the clouds and shone.
Here, the sun is being compared to a person or animal.
These words create a more colorful picture for the reader
than the words, “The sun appeared through the clouds.”
Fog
The fog comes
on little cat feet.
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
Carl Sandburg
Practice: Explain how personification is used in each sentence and the images created
through its use.
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2. The angry wind blew onto the man on the narrow road.
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Exercise: Underline all examples of personification in the poem,
and answer the questions that follow.
Eugene Field
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Questions based on “Little Boy Blue” by Eugene Field:
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D. Onomatopoeia
Onomatopoeia is the imitation of natural sounds in word form.
These words help us form mental pictures about the things, people,
or places that are described.
Examples: Bong! Hiss! Buzz! Splash! Crackle! Pop! Moo! Crunch!
Eve Merriam
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Review: Read the poem “Corner” by Ralph Pomeroy. Underline all examples of figurative
language and write beside the line “S” for simile, “M” for metaphor, “P” for personification,
or “O” for onomatopoeia. Then answer the question that follows.
Corner
The cop slumps alertly at his motorcycle
supported by one leg like a leather stork
His glance accuses me of loitering
can see his eyes moving like a fish
in the green depths of his green goggles
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Who made him my enemy?
Prince of coolness, King of fear
Why do I lean here waiting?
Why does he lounge there watching?
I am becoming sunlight
My hair is on fire. My boots run like tar.
I am hung up by the bright air.
Something breaks off all of a sudden
And he blasts off, quick as a craven
Snug in his power; watching me watch.
Ralph Pomeroy
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Other Literary Terms to Learn for the CAHSEE:
1. Climax: the highest point of a story, often where great change occurs
Example: In the reality TV show, The Apprentice, the climax occurs when
Donald Trump looks one candidate in the eye and says, “You’re fired!”
2. Conflict: the tension and suspense (A character may be in conflict with himself, another
person, or with natural forces.)
Example: In the play Romeo and Juliet, the conflict arises from the love affair between
two members of rivaling families.
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5. Foil: a character who serves as a contrast to the main character; a character whose traits are
in direct contrast to those of the main character, thereby highlighting or emphasizing the traits
of the main character
Example: Cartoon character Elmer Fudd is the foil for Bugs Bunny. With his baby-like way
of talking and shaky voice, it seems like he is always on the verge of tears. He believes
anything he’s told, thus falling right into Bugs’ trap. Elmer hates being a fool, but Bugs
manages to make a fool out of him every time.
Example: In Shakespeare’s
play “Macbeth,” the
conversation among the
three witches foreshadows
the events that will follow.
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7. Irony: the contrast between what is said and what is meant, or between the appearance
of things and their reality
Examples: The next two poems use irony. Read them and answer the questions that follow.
We Real Cool
We real cool. We
Left school. We
Lurk late. We
Strike straight. We
Sing sin. We
Thin gin. We
Jazz June. We
Die soon.
Gwendolyn Brooks
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Happiness
I asked the professors who teach the meaning of life to tell
me what is happiness.
And I went to famous executives who boss the work of
thousands of men.
They all shook their heads and gave me a smile as though
I was trying to fool with them
And then one Sunday afternoon I wandered out along
the Desplaines river
And I saw a crowd of Hungarians under the trees with
their women and children and a keg of beer and an
accordion.
Carl Sandburg
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8. Monologue: an extended solo speech by a character in a play (Note: Mono means one.)
For an example of a monologue, see the example for soliloquy.
10. Point of view: the angle from which a story is told, most commonly first or third person:
First-person point of view: the narrator is one of the characters in the story
(Note: The pronoun “I” or “me” is used to tell the story.)
Third-person point of view: the narrator is not a character in the story
(Note: The pronoun “he” or “she” is used to tell the story.)
Two People
She reads the paper,
while he turns on TV;
she likes the mountains,
he craves the sea.
He’d rather drive,
she’ll take the plane;
he waits for sunshine;
she walks in the rain.
He gulps down cold drinks,
she sips at hot;
he asks, “Why go?”
She asks, “Why not?”
In just about everything
they disagree,
but they love one another
and they both love me.
Eve Merriam
Who do you think is the narrator of this poem?
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11. Repetition: a technique in which the same word or phrase is repeated throughout a poem
or story in order to highlight or emphasize something.
Example: The following poem contains several examples of repetition. Underline any words
or phrases that are repeated and answer the question that follows.
Carl Sandburg
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12. Setting: the place and time in which a story or play occurs
Example: The setting for the Wizard of Oz is small town in Kansas during the 1940’s.
While the film begins in black and white, it shifts to color when the setting changes
to the Land of Oz.
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13. Soliloquy: a speech that a character makes in a drama in order to show his or her feelings
and inner conflicts (Note: Below is one of the most famous soliloquies in history, from
Shakespeare’s Hamlet.)
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14. Stanza: groups of lines that have been separated from other groups of lines in a poem
(Note: Poems consist of stanzas, just as essays and stories consist of paragraphs.
Stanzas are to poems as paragraphs are to essays and stories.)
Example: The following poem is made up of several stanzas.
My Papa’s Waltz
The whiskey on your breath
Could make a small boy dizzy;
But I hung on like death:
Such waltzing was not easy.
Theodore Roethke
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B. two
C. three
D. four
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15. Tone: The emotion of a piece of writing; a writer shows his attitude toward a subject through
the tone that he uses. Tone can be lighthearted, bitter or gloomy.
Example: Read the next poem and answer the questions that follow.
A Teamster’s Farewell
(Sobs En Route to a Penitentiary)
Good-by now to the streets and the clash of wheels and
locking hubs,
The sun coming on the brass buckles and harness knobs.
The muscles of the horses sliding under their heavy
haunches,
Good-by now to the traffic policeman and his whistle,
The smash of the iron hoof on the stones,
All the crazy wonderful slamming roar of the street--
O God, there’s noises I’m going to be hungry for.
Carl Sandburg
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2. What does the poem’s tone convey about the author’s attitude toward the familiar scenes of
every street life?
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Literary Genres on the CAHSEE
Genre means “type” or “kind.” On the CAHSEE, you must know the major genres that occur
in both fiction and non-fiction.
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Review of Literary Terms
Climax: the highest point of a story, often where great change occurs
Conflict: the tension and suspense in a story
Dialogue: a verbal exchange between two or more people
Flashback: a shifting back to events that took place at an earlier time
Foil: a character who serves as a contrast to the main character
Foreshadowing: a hint, or suggestion, of what’s to come
Genre: type or kind (Literary genres include plays, poems, short stories and
novels)
Irony: the contrast between what is said and what is meant, or between the
appearance of things and their reality
Monologue: an extended solo speech by a character in a play (or sometimes
a poem)
Narrator: the person speaking to us in a story or telling the story
Point of view: the angle from which a story is told (generally 1st or 3rd
person point of view)
Repetition: a technique in which the same word or phrase is repeated
throughout a poem or story in order to highlight or emphasize something
Setting: the place and time in which a story or play occurs
Soliloquy: a speech that a character makes in a drama in order to show his
or her feelings and inner conflicts
Stanza: groups of lines that have been separated from other groups of lines
in a poem
Tone: the emotion of a piece of writing
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Literary Jeopardy: Board
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Review of Question Strategies for the CAHSEE
In the Reading for Information workbook, you learned the five basic strategies for answering
CAHSEE questions. These strategies can also be used in the Literary Response & Analysis strand.
Below is a review of the five basic question types and the strategies that work best for each one.
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No shortcuts!
Read All!
Read the whole text,
end
from beginning to end!
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Review of Question Strategies
(Continued)
Let’s look at each of these question types in greater detail:
1. Right There!
These questions are based on one detail in the passage. You need to locate the
information and find an answer choice that is stated in the same words as those
used in the passage.
Below are examples of question stems for “Right There” questions from the Literary
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2. In Other Words…
These questions are often based on an idea, rather than a specific and isolated
detail. Find the part in the text that talks about this and then look for an answer
that summarizes the idea. The answer will be stated in different words than
those used in the text.
Below are examples of question stems for “In Other Words” questions from
the Literary Response strand
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3. Up Here!
Certain questions test your knowledge of a term or concept and your ability to
recognize an example of that term/concept. Others ask a question that has one
answer choice that would make sense. There is no need to go back to the text.
All the information you need is contained in the question and answer choices. You
can answer the question by using common sense and applying what you have
already learned.
Below are examples of question stems for “Up Here” questions from the Literary
Response strand of the CAHSEE.
How does the reader know that the story is a dramatic monologue?
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4. What’s the Big Idea?
Big Idea questions ask you to identify the theme or purpose of a passage, the
author’s tone, or the point of view. For these questions, you can often find the
answer in the first and last paragraphs, and sometimes in the title.
Below are examples of question stems for “Big Idea” questions from the Literary
Response strand of the CAHSEE.
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5. Read All!
Some questions ask you to analyze a character’s motivations or follow the
development of the story’s plot and characters. For these questions, the answer
is not directly stated in one place. You must read the entire story carefully and
draw conclusions based on a number of clues.
Below are examples of question stems for “Read All” questions from the Literary
Response strand.
How does the character’s attitude about herself change during the story?
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Recognizing “Read All!” Questions
“Read All!” questions will often focus on the feelings or attitudes of a character,
the changes or growth that a single character goes through, on relationships
between characters, and the lessons learned by a character, or on character traits.
Other times, these questions focus on a particular literary technique or device that
reoccurs throughout the passage.
You can usually recognize these types of questions from the beginning. Let’s look at
some “Read All!” questions that appeared in the past. Underline the part of the
sentence that lets you know that this is a “Read All!” question:
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Quiz on Question Types for the CAHSEE
Directions: For each question in the first column, write the “Question Type”
in the second column. (Note: The answer choices are not given, nor are they
needed to identify the type of question.)
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In Other Words...
Up Here!
What’s the Big Idea?
Read All!
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