Sample Materials Guide

for Full-Length Specimen Exam of 2013 New Design

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Table of Contents
Introduction....................................................................... 2

Contents of the Sample Materials.................................. 3

How to Take the Sample Writing & GVR Sections......... 4

How to Take the Sample Speaking Section................... 5

Stage 1......................................................................... 5
Stage 2......................................................................... 5
Stage 3......................................................................... 5
Stage 4......................................................................... 5

Scoring the Sample Sections.......................................... 6

Listening, GVR, and Writing......................................... 6
Speaking...................................................................... 6

Interpreting Your Scores.................................................. 7

Listening Section......................................................... 7
Grammar, Vocabulary, and Reading (GVR) Section..... 7
Writing Section............................................................. 7
Speaking Section......................................................... 7
Passing the ECCE Overall........................................... 8
Important Points to Note............................................. 8

Appendix 1: ECCE Speaking Score Levels.................... 9

Appendix 2: ECCE Writing Score Levels...................... 10

Appendix 3: Writing Section Sample Responses........ 11

Introduction
The main purpose of the ECCE 2013 Sample Test
Materials and this accompanying guide is to familiarize
candidates with the complete design of the Examination
for the Certificate of Competency in English (ECCE)
administered in 2013 and beyond. It also gives
candidates the opportunity to test themselves to
see whether their English is at the level required for
an actual exam.
Some candidates take the ECCE before they have
reached the standard required to pass. We hope that
the sample materials will help candidates judge their
preparedness for the exam. Candidates who intend to
take an ECCE should use this guide to complete the
sample test, mark it themselves, and see whether their
scores are sufficient for them to attempt the exam itself.
It must be noted, however, that the score received
on the sample materials does not guarantee that the
same standard will be reached during an actual ECCE
administration.
This guide includes instructions on how to take the full-
length specimen exam and how to score the sample
listening, GVR, writing, and speaking sections, and how
to interpret ECCE scores.
While the materials show the style of the ECCE for 2013
and beyond, the materials are also useful for candidates
preparing for an earlier administration of the ECCE. The
level of achievement needed for passing the exam has
not been changed.

ECCE 2013 Sample Materials Guide  Introduction  2

Contents of the Sample Materials
Format and Content of the ECCE 2013 administration and subsequent administrations.
Section Time Description Number of Items
Listening 30 minutes Part 1 (multiple choice) 30
A short recorded conversation is followed by a question.
Answer choices are shown as pictures.
Part 2 (multiple choice) 20
Short extended talks on four different topics, each
followed by 4 to 6 questions. The questions are printed
in the test booklet and time is given before each talk to
preview the questions. There are four answer choices
for each question. Answer choices are printed in the test
booklet.
Grammar 90 minutes Grammar (multiple choice) 35
Vocabulary An incomplete sentence is followed by a choice of
Reading words or phrases to complete it. Only one choice is
(GVR) grammatically correct.
Vocabulary (multiple choice) 35
An incomplete sentence is followed by a choice of words
to complete it. Only one word has the correct meaning in
that context.
Reading (multiple choice) 30
A short reading passage on a topic followed by
5 questions (two passages)
Four short texts related to each other by topic, followed
by 10 questions (two texts)
Writing 30 minutes You read a short excerpt from a newspaper article and 1 task
then write a letter or essay giving your opinion on the
situation or issue you read about.
Speaking 15 minutes A structured oral interaction occurs between the 4 stages
candidate and the speaking test examiner. The interaction
involves a visual prompt.

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How to Take the Sample Writing & GVR Sections
It is important to take the sample test under proper test 7. Turn to the grammar, vocabulary, and reading
conditions. You should take the test in a place with a section instructions on page 17 of the test booklet.
table and chair that is quiet and free from distractions. Read the instructions and make sure that you
Please allow about three hours of uninterrupted time. Do understand them.
not take a break between sections. 8. When you are ready, turn to the grammar items on
Additionally, when you take the sample test you should page 18 of the test booklet and begin answering
follow these steps. the questions. Mark your answers on the separate
answer sheet. Continue on to the vocabulary and
1. Gather all the materials:
reading items.
a. the sample test booklet
9. Stop marking your answers after 90 minutes. Do
b. the answer sheet not change any of your answers after 90 minutes.
c. access to the listening section audio 10. Turn to the writing section on page 31 of the test
d. a piece of paper for the writing section booklet. Read the instructions carefully and make
e. pencils sure that you understand them. After you have read
f. a timing device such as a clock or stopwatch the instructions, read the article and the two tasks.
2. Turn to the general instructions on page 1 of the Choose either Task 1 or Task 2, and then write your
test booklet and make sure that you understand letter or essay on a separate piece of paper.
them. Fill out the answer sheet according to the 11. After 30 minutes, stop writing. Do not change your
instructions. letter or essay after the 30 minutes has ended.
3. Turn to the instructions for Part 1 of the listening 12. When you have completed the listening section,
section on page 3 of the test booklet. Listen to the the GVR section, and the writing section of the
instructions and example item. Make sure that you sample materials, you are ready to score those
understand the directions. The listening section will sections.
take 30 minutes. 13. Either before or after you have completed these
4. When you are ready, turn to page 4 of the test sections, you should make arrangements for
booklet and begin listening to Part 1 of the listening someone to administer the sample speaking test to
section. Mark your answers on the separate you. Please refer to the instructions for how to take
answer sheet. the speaking test on page 5.
5. After Part 1 of the listening section, listen to the 14. To score the four sections of the exam, please refer
instructions for Part 2 of the listening section on to Scoring the Sample Test instructions on page 6.
page 11 of the test booklet and make sure you Please note that if you allow yourself longer than the
understand them. time allocated for each section, you will not get a true
6. When instructed, turn to page 12 of the test picture of your ability.
booklet and begin listening to Part 2 of the listening
section. You may take notes in the test booklet.
Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet.

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How to Take the Sample Speaking Section
The sample speaking test prompt included in the ECCE Stage 3
2013 Sample Materials comes from an actual exam. You (1–3 minutes)
can practice the speaking test with a teacher or expert • When you are ready to say how you would solve the
user of English serving as your examiner. You may want problem, explain to the examiner what you think he/
to record your speaking test. she should do.
The examiner should complete all stages of the speaking • You are expected to explain why you think your
test with you. The purpose of the speaking test is to solution is best.
determine how well you communicate your ideas and • You are also expected to explain why you did not
opinions. The speaking test should take about 10 to 15 choose the other possible solution.
minutes.

Stage 4
Stage 1 (2–4 minutes)
(2–3 minutes) • The examiner asks you further questions that are
• The examiner asks you a few general personal related to the topic introduced by the prompt. (There
questions about yourself. are three questions on the examiner’s page that the
• You answer the questions. examiner should ask you.)
• The examiner may ask you additional questions
Stage 2 about the topic.
(3–4 minutes) After you have finished Stage 4, the speaking test is
• The examiner then gives you the candidate prompt finished. You are then ready to score the speaking test.
page to look at. It includes instructions about the
problem task and some pictures.
• The examiner uses the other page that includes
examiner information and the elaboration questions.
The examiner reads aloud the instructions to you.
• Then you should ask the examiner the questions
that are printed on your candidate page.
• The examiner answers your questions using the
information on his/her page.
• You should listen carefully to the answers. You may
ask additional questions.

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Scoring the Sample Sections
Listening, GVR, and Writing Speaking
When you have finished taking the ECCE listening, GVR, When you have been able to take the sample speaking
and writing sections, you should have a completed test, you need to rate your speaking. Please follow the
answer sheet with one answer per question and a instructions below.
completed letter or essay for the writing section. You 1. This guide includes the ECCE Speaking Score
now need to score these sections. Please follow the Levels (Appendix 1). Five levels of ability are
instructions below. described on the chart. The main feature to
consider is your effectiveness at communicating
Listening and GVR
what you want to say. This is determined by your
1. For each listening and GVR item, you should have linguistic range and control and your delivery (rate
only one answer filled in. of speech and pronunciation).
2. Compare your answers with the answer key. If 2. You should read the descriptions of the different
your answer matches the answer key then award levels and decide which level best describes
yourself one point. If your answer does not match your speaking on the ECCE speaking test. If you
the answer key, do not award yourself a point. recorded your test, you should listen to yourself
3. Add up all of your correct answers in the listening speaking. The person who administered the
section. Add up all your correct scores in the GVR speaking test to you may be able to help you
section on the answer sheet. These are your scores decide which level best describes your ability.
on the listening and GVR sections. 3. When deciding on your level, only consider how
4. Read the Interpreting Your Scores section of this well you spoke in stages 2, 3, and 4—particularly
guide for an explanation of what your sample Stage 4. Stage 1 should not be used to determine
listening and GVR scores mean. your score.
4. Read the Interpreting Your Scores section of this
Writing
guide for an explanation of what your speaking
1. This guide includes the ECCE Writing Score
score means.
Levels (Appendix 2) and ten sample responses
(Appendix 3). There are examples of letters and
essays for each level of the ECCE writing scale.
2. Read your response (letter or essay) and then read
each of the example responses and the comments
that accompany them.
3. Compare your letter or essay to the samples and
decide which sample is the closest to yours.
4. The score of the sample which is closest to yours
is your score for the writing section. You should
ask a teacher to review your writing and to confirm
that you have chosen the right score.
5. Read the Interpreting Your Scores section of this
guide for an explanation of what your writing
score means.

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Interpreting Your Scores
When the ECCE is taken under examination conditions, Grammar, Vocabulary,
the listening section and the grammar, vocabulary, and Reading (GVR) Section
reading (GVR) section are scored by computer using Scores 65 and above:  If you have strictly followed the
Item Response Theory (IRT). This method ensures that instructions for taking the sample test, you are likely to
the ability required to pass a section, or to receive a high pass the GVR section of the ECCE under examination
score, remains the same from year to year. IRT scores conditions.
are not the same as number-right scores, but there is
very high correlation between number of correct answers Scores 60 – 64:  You have a chance of passing the GVR
provided and the IRT scores. section of the ECCE under examination conditions but
you may benefit from more lessons or more practice
The ECCE writing section and the speaking section are before you register for the examination.
scored by trained raters using criteria determined by
Cambridge Michigan Language Assessments. Scores 59 and below:  You are unlikely to pass the GVR
section of the ECCE under examination conditions and
should spend more time improving your English before
Listening Section taking the examination.
Scores 38 and above:  If you have strictly followed the
instructions for taking the sample test, you are likely
to pass the listening section of the ECCE under exam Writing Section
conditions. If you have strictly followed the instructions for taking
the sample test and your writing meets the criteria of
Scores 32 – 37:  You have a chance of passing the at least a C on the ECCE Writing Score Levels, then
listening section of the ECCE under examination you have a chance of passing the ECCE writing section
conditions but you may benefit from more lessons or under examination conditions. If your writing meets the
more practice before you register for the examination. criteria of at least a B on the ECCE Writing Score Levels,
Scores 31 and below:  You are unlikely to pass the then you are likely to pass the writing section under
listening section of the ECCE under examination examination conditions.
conditions and should spend more time improving your
English before taking the examination. Speaking Section
The teacher or expert user of English who conducted
your sample speaking test for you may be able to help
you evaluate your competence in spoken English using
the criteria of ECCE Speaking Score Levels. If you have
followed the instructions for taking the sample speaking
test and your speaking meets the criteria of at least a
C on the ECCE Speaking Score Levels, then you have
a chance of passing the ECCE speaking section under
exam conditions. If your speaking meets the criteria of at
least a B, then you are likely to pass the speaking section
of the ECCE under examination conditions.

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Passing the ECCE Overall Important Points to Note
ECCE section scores on actual exams are reported in five 1. Although the sample materials are designed to be
bands or levels ranging from High Pass (HP) to Fail (F). similar in difficulty to the ECCE and will give you a
The following chart shows how these are reported. The reasonable idea of how you should expect to score
writing and speaking column shows the level scores from on the exam, there is no guarantee that your score
A to E. The Listening and GVR column shows the scaled on the sample materials will be the same as the
scores based on IRT scoring ranging from 0–1000. score you receive when you take the ECCE.
2. The writing section and speaking section scores
ECCE Five Levels of Performance
you receive when you take an ECCE under
Listening Writing & examination conditions are determined by raters
& GVR Speaking trained and certified according to standards
High Pass (HP) 840 –1000 A established by Cambridge Michigan Language
Pass (P) 750 –835 B Assessments. It is possible that when you review
Low Pass (LP) 650 –745 C your own writing and speaking performance, the
scores assigned might be different from those that
Borderline Fail (BF) 610 –645 D
would have been assigned by certified raters and
Fail (F) 0 –605 E
examiners.
Candidates who pass three sections with a Low Pass
(LP) or higher and receive no less than a Borderline Fail
(BF) in one section are awarded an ECCE certificate.
Look at all your scores on the sample test sections.
• If your score is B or higher on the speaking and
writing sections and 38 or above on the listening
section and 65 or above on the GVR section, you
are likely to pass the ECCE under exam conditions.
• If your score is C or higher on the speaking and
writing sections and 32 or higher on the listening
section and 60 or higher on the GVR section, you
have a chance at passing the ECCE under exam
conditions.
If you are able to meet the passing standards on the
sample test, then you are probably ready to take
the ECCE.

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Appendix 1: ECCE Speaking Score Levels
ECCE Speaking Score Levels
• Communicates ideas and viewpoint comprehensibly and is able to include details (including
complex ones) to support those ideas.
• Is an independent speaker in interactions, not relying on the other person to clarify or support
him/her; can understand speech at a normal pace.
A
• Is a highly interactive participant who may still have minor errors in grammar, but these do not
interfere with effective communication; has enough vocabulary to convey ideas even though
there may still be some imprecision in the way the words are used; expresses ideas smoothly.
• Speaks at a reasonable rate; pronunciation rarely creates misunderstandings.
• Communicates ideas and viewpoint comprehensibly and includes supporting details for ideas.
• Is an independent speaker in interactions who usually does not need clarification or support;
can understand speech at a normal pace.
B
• Is an active participant who has errors in grammar or misuse of vocabulary, and while these
create awkwardness, they often don’t lead to misunderstandings.
• Speaks at a reasonable rate; usually pronunciation does not create misunderstandings.
• Communicates ideas and viewpoint comprehensibly, though may struggle a bit to
communicate these ideas, and the ideas shared may not have many supporting details.
• Is an independent speaker in interactions, though the other person may occasionally have
to summarize or clarify ideas that are expressed at length; is able to understand speech at a
C normal pace but may need to clarify the details of ideas shared.
• Is an active participant who remains generally comprehensible, in spite of errors in grammar
and vocabulary and awkwardness of expression.
• Speaks at a reasonable rate; usually pronunciation does not create misunderstandings.
• Generally communicates ideas, but details are difficult to express clearly.
• Is often not independent in an interaction and relies on the other person for interpretation,
restatement of ideas, and clarification; may have difficulty at times understanding speech.
D • Is a somewhat interactive participant who is able to use basic grammar and vocabulary to
communicate.
• Sometimes speaks at a reasonable rate, but sometimes speaks much more slowly;
pronunciation may need to be clarified.
• Communicating ideas can take time; often has difficulty in expressing his/her ideas.
• Is rarely independent in an interaction, relying on the other person to provide clarification and
support; has difficulty understanding speech even when it is slowed or simplified.
E
• Is not an interactive participant and has such a high number of errors in grammar and
vocabulary that s/he is difficult to understand.
• Speaks slowly and pronunciation can interfere in being understood.

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Appendix 2: ECCE Writing Score Levels
ECCE Writing Score Levels
• Writes an essay or letter that is richly developed with original supporting details.
• Organizes ideas smoothly and effectively, using a variety of cohesive devices.
A • Uses a broad range of grammatical structures and vocabulary appropriately and accurately; any errors
are infrequent and not distracting.
• Writes appropriately for audience, purpose, and task, creating a very positive effect on the reader.

• Writes an essay or letter that is well developed with appropriate supporting details.
• Organizes ideas clearly and appropriately, using transition markers effectively.
B • Uses a good range of simple and complex structures and shows control of vocabulary; occasional
errors may be present.
• Writes appropriately for audience, purpose, and task, creating a positive effect on the reader.

• Writes an essay or letter that is adequately developed with supporting details, though may rely on the
prompt for content.
• Organizes ideas adequately, using standard connectors appropriately though perhaps mechanically.
C
• Uses an adequate range of grammatical structures and vocabulary; errors do not interfere with
comprehension.
• Writes adequately for audience, purpose, and task, accomplishing communicative goals.

• Writes an essay or letter that is inadequately developed; content may be limited, irrelevant, or copied
from the prompt.
• Organizes ideas simply with minimal or unsuccessful connection.
D
• Makes frequent grammar and vocabulary errors that interfere with comprehension.
• Writes with inconsistent appropriacy for audience, purpose, and task, possibly creating a negative
effect on the reader.

• Writes an essay or letter that is poorly developed; content may be irrelevant or copied from the
prompt.
• Does not order or connect ideas clearly.
E
• Uses very limited structures and vocabulary, with frequent and basic errors that cause
significant confusion.
• Has inadequate language to fulfill the communicative task.

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Appendix 3: Writing Section Sample Responses
On the following pages are ten sample ECCE writing section essays and their scores. Each sample
includes examiner comments about the score.

The City Times

Teenage Actor Quits

Fourteen-year-old movie star Jane Maine announced yesterday that she has decided not to continue her
acting career. She has appeared in ten movies since she began acting at age seven. She wants to return
to her hometown and be just a normal teenager. Many of her fans are shocked at her decision.

Samples 1 through 5 are responses to the Samples 6 through 10 are responses to the
letter-writing task: essay-writing task:

Letter Essay
Write a letter to Jane explaining what you think Do you think that parents should allow their children
of her decision. Do you think she is making the to become child actors? Why or why not? Explain
right choice? Why or why not? Begin your letter, your opinion, giving specific reasons to support
“Dear Jane.” your view.

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Sample 1 Score: A

Dear Jane,
I’m writing with regards to the short article about your decision to quit the
showbusiness witch was published in The City Times.
I must say that I got a little bit shock. I considered that your career was so
great and that you also enjoyed it. Of course I’ve seen all of your movies.
In fact thay had a big influane on me.
These are moments that I feel like we have grown up togather.
However, I really respect your decision. It must have been dificult for you
to lead a life of a moviestar which probably means not having real friends not
having time and oportunity to play or going to normal school and generely
being an ordinary child.
On the other hand you must have a great benefit of such a life too. I can see
many adventages of being famous and rich. You had the oportunity to travel,
to meet famous peole and to see how the glamorous way of life is. All the other
children, including me, we could have let such a life only in our imagination.
On the contrary, as I’m thinking about it now, it must be very tiering and
annoying for a long time.
Anaway, as I said at the beginnig of this letter, I respet and support your
dicision even if it upset me a little.
Maybe you will come back some day.
I’m looking forward to hearing news for you some day.
With love, x

Examiner Comments on Sample 1

The topic is richly developed and the letter is composed there are some grammar and spelling errors, but the
in a very personal and communicative way. There is a errors are infrequent and not distracting.
clear sense of audience and the register of the writing
Overall, this letter deserves a score of A because of the
is appropriate to a personal letter (There are moments
sophisticated development and generally appropriate
that I feel like we have grown up together). The letter
language used by the writer. Although there are some
addresses both sides of the prompt topic with the thesis
spelling mistakes, these do not interfere with reader
remaining cohesive. The language used is not perfect;
understanding.

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Sample 2 Score: B

Dear Jane,
I’m a 15-year-old girl and I decided to express my opinion
about your last decision. I really believe that it was a good
choice.
First of all, I believe that every girl in our age wants
to be a normal teenager and not to take care only of her
publicity. I can understand you because you wanted to act
as a normal teenager. Moreover, I think that you will be a
better student at school because you will have more time to
study your homeworks.
Secondly, I think that you will have more time to be with
your friends, have walks and maybe you want to start a
hobby. You won’t need to go to the movies all the time. I’m
sure that you will feel like a normal teenager.
Finally, I believe that these were things and actions that
you wanted to do as a teenager and if you want you could
start a new carreer as an actor if you are an adult. I’m sure
that you will have a great future.

Your faithfully,
x

Examiner Comments on Sample 2

This is an example of a relatively weak B-level response. Overall, this response was awarded a B because of the
The thesis of the letter is clearly stated and consistently clear thesis, consistent and relevant support, and strong
supported. The content is not as richly developed as control over syntax. The response is not an A because
it could be, but the response is directly relevant to the there are several minor language errors and there is not
prompt. The letter is well organized and very easy to a broad range of vocabulary displayed. Although the
follow. Although there are quite a few minor language content is all relevant to the prompt, it is not as richly
errors (every girl in our age; study your homeworks), they developed as in responses scored a level higher.
are not distracting and do not interfere with meaning.
Syntax control is strong, even in complex sentences.

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Sample 3 Score: C

Dear Jane,
I am writing to express my opinion about your decision which you have taken.
Fist of all, all the people know that you are a great actor and that you have started
your career at age seven. You have a lot of fans in all over the world and when they
learned about your decision they were disappointed. We all know you from the
movies which you have done.
Secondly, many people unterstand you for your decision, because you are only a
fourteen-year-old child and you want to live your life without photographs magazines
and paparatzis. Well, my opinion is that you did the right for your life to finish your
career in this age, we all need to live like a normal teenager without being famous in
the school and everyone saying you to give him an autograph. You must do the right
for your life.
In conclusion, anyone can tell what to do about you best. And if you grow up for
some years more and to be an adult, then you will contineue your career with actor.
And you will maybe take an oscar when you be a greate actor.

Examiner Comments on Sample 3

The letter is adequately developed and relevant to the Overall, this is not a D because meaning is
prompt. It is comprehensible after a first reading, which comprehensible after a single reading, the topic
is typical of a response that is awarded a C. However, is adequately developed, and it accomplishes its
the response takes a while to develop a clear thesis and communicative goals. However, it is not a B because
there are several distracting language errors (my opinion of the inconsistent linguistic control and the increasing
is that you did the right for your life to finish your career number of distracting errors later in the response.
in this age; anyone can tell what to do about you best).
The response loses syntactic control in the second
half, making the reader work a little harder to follow the
development of ideas.

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Sample 4 Score: D

Dear Jane:
How are you? Probably you are happy in this moment, but
it is the correct desicion? OK we don’t know what it’s the
fact for your chose, we don’t know if your pasion it’s the
movie or the medicine.
When you was a child all the world fall down, because
your friends were playing in their houses and you... making a
commercial or a movie, later when the money start to change
you mind about this world, was the right moment to decide,
what was more important your family, your friends, your
pets, the school, your parents? or the good life. When you
have the idea to do something with conviction this attempt
it’s a great chance for check if this desicion will change
your life forever: But now you are a Teenager and maybe you
don’t know what do you want.
You are the prospect of a lot of people, they want to be
exactly like you, in your acting career and later of 10 movies
it’s normal that you want to quit, because you can’t see
your friends or maybe go to the school as a comun teenager.
We want you near us, but if you think that it’s the best
way for you and your family, do it;
We will wait you with our arms open when you were ready
and fulling us of smiles our faces again. We will miss you
come back soon. Your fans.

Examiner Comments on Sample 4

While the letter is reasonably long, frequent vocabulary only a minimal sense of structure or organization to the
and grammar errors limit the effective communication writing. It is not an E because most basic ideas can be
of the ideas of the writer. Although the general ideas are identified, and it is not a C because the grammar and
apparent, more specific details are often conveyed rather vocabulary errors cause confusion for the reader.
unsuccessfully (all the world fall down; the prospect of
a lot of people; full of smiles our faces again). There is

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Sample 5 Score: E

Dear Jane
I am writing to you after I saw the letter was
published in the local newspaper the other day about
she wants to return to her hometown and be just a
normal teenager, as I would really like to express my
opinion about it.
First of all, I would to say the stop career, and
continue career what she had many fans and want
the peoples. And for she had fans will very beautiful
the working.
Finally, I would have been I hope in advance into
consideration for taking about it.

Yoursfaifully
x

Examiner Comments on Sample 5

The language in the opening paragraph is generally and vocabulary cause considerable confusion for the
accurate, but it is not original. It is a combination of reader, which is typical of a response receiving an E.
rehearsed sentences and language copied directly
Overall, this is an E because the only original language
from the prompt topic. In the second paragraph, which
in the response is very confusing. The writer has
appears to be original language produced by the writer,
inadequate language to fulfill the communicative task.
there is no clear connection of ideas or evidence of
control of basic English syntax. Limitations in structure

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Sample 6 Score: A

Nowadays, the number of child actors is rapidly increasing. This happens

because in today’s society people care only about how to make money. Some
people believe that parents should let their children decide what to do. In my
opinion, parents should prevent young children from acting.
First of all, a child between 6-16 years old isn’t old enough to make the
right desicion. Of course, an adolescent would like to appear in television or
in magazines but he isn’t aware of the difficulties and the dangers that he may
face in the future. Furthermore, if a child acted for a living, he wouldn’t be
able to keep up with his studies... Consequently he might not take a degree.
Moreover, when the child grows up he would probably change his mind or he
would lose his popularity. However, he won’t be able to find another job.
Although parents shouldn’t let their children act for a living they can
encourage them to join a group. A talented child who has tremendous potential
can take part in the drama club at school or at theater. In this way, he would
be able to fulfil his ambition when he is old enough to decide what is best for
him.
Therefore, we should all follow our dreams but there’s no point in being in
hurry. We should be patient and careful because life is full of dangers. That’s
why we shouldn’t be in favor of child actors.

Examiner Comments on Sample 6

This essay is very well developed with extensive might not take a degree . . . would probably change his
supporting detail. The writing is almost error free. mind). A broad range of vocabulary words and phrases
Communicative goals are particularly well achieved are appropriately used to convey precise meaning (old
with this response as the writer is able to incorporate a enough; for a living; tremendous potential).
hypothetical person’s opinion into the essay (Of course,
Overall this has been awarded an A because of its
an adolescent would like to . . .) and to use modals to
sophisticated development and accurate use of grammar
indicate that some points are not universally true (he
and vocabulary.

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Sample 7 Score: B

First of all, children deserve to live their age. When

children work, they lose a lot of options that they have
living as normal children.
I think parents should realize that when children become
child actors, they are not allowed to do different activities
like going to schools, or more simple than that, to have some
fun with them in a park or public places. On the other hand,
their life becomes a little difficult having a lot of unknown
people surrounding them, asking them questions, taking
some photographs, so I definately disagree.
As a conclusion, children need to be children and they
need to grow up in a normal enviroment without all those
responsibilities that actors have and without all the pressure
that this job implies. Let them enjoy their childhood, let them
share with other children of their same age and assume just
the responsibilities that correspond to their age.

Examiner Comments on Sample 7

Although topic development and organization are just is particularly impressive. Only a few errors are present
adequate, the language used is strong grammatically. It in the essay, and although the opening sentence is
is both complex and quite accurate. For example, the distracting, the errors are not sufficiently serious to bring
first sentence of the second paragraph contains a main this response below a B rating.
clause (I think . . .) with two dependent clauses (parents
This response is rated as a B because of the complexity
should realize that and when children become child
of the language. It is not an A because there is
actors . . .) nested inside one another. Similarly, in the
insufficient topic development and ideas are not very
second to last sentence, without . . . implies is a complex
effectively organized, and it is not a C because the
prepositional phrase that modifies a normal environment.
complexity and accuracy of the language is quite good.
The writer’s ability to control these types of sentences

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Sample 8 Score: C

Many people believe that parent should not allow to their children to become
actors from very young age. Some other people believe the oppossing idea. There are
many reasons for both.
On the one hand, children lose their friends because they have to live to another
city like Hollywood. In addition, they have not enough time to play sport or
something else because they must go to the play the role on the film. Additionally,
they do not have enough time for studying because they must go for photographing
like little actor magazine. Furthermore, they have not enough time for sleep or see
their parents because they must go to parties for promotion of film.
On the other hand, parents like the fact that their children play on TV because
in this way become famous and popular family. In addition, if parents need money,
permit them to play on a film. Additionally, parents like to see reporters in their
house because they believe that they are famous.
In conclusion, it is better to leave the children to do anything they want because
somethings are better for them. In my opinion, children should not play on film
because it should better play with their friends.

Examiner Comments on Sample 8

This essay is adequately developed. While some salient Although this response is not a strong C linguistically, it
errors are present, none cause significant confusion is better organized than a D-level response. After a single
for the reader. Although organization is simple (i.e., reading the thesis is comprehensible and shows use of
disadvantages followed by advantages, introduced with supporting examples, which allows the essay to achieve
on the one hand/on the other hand) the content itself is its communicative goals.
relatively strong. The essay provides concrete examples
of how being a movie star could be challenging for a
child, as well as a couple of reasons why parents might
want their child to be a star.

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Sample 9 Score: D

The parents are the most important part in a family

thats why they help to form the future of their children.
Nowadays we can see a lot of child actors but in some
cases ones of them wan’t to work on this kind of job.
I consider that is a good idea that the parents help
their children to work on TV but only if the children want,
because is a very difficult job, but if its the dream of their
is amazing that they can do it. Some parents only want that
their sons work on TV because they can received a lot of
money or they can be famous, but who work a lot is the
child. I think that if the child want to be an actor the
parents should help him, because he can continue with the
school and at the same time work on TV, when the child
want to do that he works more, I listened a lot of casses
about child actors, that they work on TV but with some
conditions from their parents, like they need to continue
with the school and a normal life. If we can help that our
children come true their dreams we should do it. Because
in the future they can get more skills on TV or only see the
real life about famous people, is not easy be an actrees or
actor, they need to work a lot of hours.
The most important thing is respect the decisions of the
children, if the want to be a famous actors or not.

Examiner Comments on Sample 9

This essay which was scored D is longer than an Overall, this is a D because of the unsuccessful
average D-level response but it is not well organized. connection of ideas in the response. A reader has to
The response does not take a clear position on the topic. work to reformulate what the writer wanted to say. A
The thesis is vague and the supporting examples have C-level essay is comprehensible after an initial reading.
minimal connection. Therefore, the essay is difficult to
follow. There are several lengthy sentences, which are
ambitious, but do not communicate effectively. The
result is a response that needs reading more than once
before an understanding of the writer’s intentions can be
achieved.

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Sample 10 Score: E

Every child from young you have dreams, and she

have to became realy. The parent must leave child to
become actor because is else where to love and with
this will very happy.
So child do they have talent. She will too taken a
lot of money, it will comes opportunity to travel the
foreigh countries and espesially if it like the travel.
That are the good a job.
There are and bad in the jobs for example that he
is when the older and they do family will to leave
only for he goes the work.
And the end noe that is young she must finish in
the school, and after she gone a Dramatically schole
and to follow her dreams to become a good actor, a
new star in TV and cinema.

Examiner Comments on Sample 10

This essay is an E. The sentences in the response do
not really make sense. It is almost impossible for the
reader to understand what the writer is saying. This is
probably due to the writer’s limited linguistic resources.
The response does not indicate adequate knowledge or
control over English syntax or sufficient vocabulary to
complete the task.

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