Final Draft of Review

by Andrea Richardson

FILE A_RICHARDSON_REVIEW_FINAL_DRAFT1-2.DOCX (42.65K)

TIME SUBMITTED 15-OCT-2020 10:05PM (UTC-0500) WORD COUNT 1100
SUBMISSION ID 1416711361 CHARACTER COUNT 6462
Final Draft of Review
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

55
Instructor

/100
PAGE 1

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the format that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

Comment 1
Andrea Richardson

Focus/Organization (25 points) 18

Logic/Content (25 points) 21

Style/Correctness (25 points) 21

Research/Format (25 points) 15

late Deductions -20

QM Review Essay Word Count

Your word count:

Minimum required: 850

Maximum: 1200

Additional Comment

1044

QM late paper
This paper was submitted late, so there is a penalty.

Additional Comment

-20
 QM incorrect
incorrect

QM source?
You must document where you get your ideas.

QM plag
plagiarized

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

QM //3
lack of parallel structure, see Grammar Unit III in Blackboard

QM marg
Use 1-inch margins on all sides.

PAGE 2

QM d2
faulty diction, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I flashcards on Blackboard

QM pr3
pronoun reference, Section S-6, Pronouns, pp. 277-282 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM See me.
I need to explain what you are doing wrong.

QM V3
shift in voice, Section S-9, Shifts, p. 288 and Grammar Unit III on Blackboard

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations
QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue card 1.

See thesis.

QM sp2
spelling error, dictionary

QM d2
faulty diction, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I flashcards on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM pcol2
colons, pp. Section P-6, Other Punctuation, pp. 341-344

QM //3
lack of parallel structure, see Grammar Unit III in Blackboard

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form
 QM focus
You have drifted away from the assigned focus.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue card 2.

weak focus

QM not on works cited

Everything you cite in your paper must be on the works cited page.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM pc2
commas, Section P-4, Commas, pp. 324-330 and Grammar Unit II on Blackboard

PAGE 3

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM d2
faulty diction, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I flashcards on Blackboard

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM ts
The topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.
Additional Comment

See blue card 3.

 weak focus

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM 7
Incorrect citation form

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM plag
plagiarized

PAGE 4

QM focus
You have drifted away from the assigned focus.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction format--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is in the
Research folder in the Information & Books area of the Blackboard class.

QM plag
plagiarized

QM 33
Explain.

Comment 2
Please work with a tutor in upcoming papers to get rid of the errors listed below. (I have marked a
couple of examples in this paper. I have marked some other errors that you need to work on
eliminating as well.)

QM ss5
faulty sentence structure (rephrase & Section S-1, Elements of a Sentence, pp. 252-255)

QM cs5
comma splice, Section S-3, Comma Splices, Fused Sentences, pp. 258-259 and Grammar Unit III
on Blackboard

QM wcp--separate
The works cited must be on a separate page.
 The works cited must be on a separate page.

QM wcp
Your works cited page is not in the correct format.

QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to fix the problem.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

PAGE 5

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.

QM not cited in paper

You cannot include references on your works cited page that are not cited in the paper.