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Neighbourly (Draft 2) : Stage 1: Data Collection

Neighborly is a fictional service presented in an infomercial format that aims to destroy a neighbor's happiness and peace through customized harassment packages. An uncle and aunty detail their investigation and data collection of neighbors' personal lives. They then demonstrate different packages that involve comparison, gossip, embarrassment, and creating minor troubles. Their goal is to instill jealousy and fuel arguments between families. The infomercial humorously promotes making the world a worse place through enabling petty neighborly disputes.

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Neighbourly (Draft 2) : Stage 1: Data Collection

Neighborly is a fictional service presented in an infomercial format that aims to destroy a neighbor's happiness and peace through customized harassment packages. An uncle and aunty detail their investigation and data collection of neighbors' personal lives. They then demonstrate different packages that involve comparison, gossip, embarrassment, and creating minor troubles. Their goal is to instill jealousy and fuel arguments between families. The infomercial humorously promotes making the world a worse place through enabling petty neighborly disputes.

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NEIGHBOURLY (DRAFT 2)

[Let’s try and show it in an infomercial format, the tone of this is similar to
teleshopping ads... There will be one background voice explaining what is
happening, a enthusiastic voice]

Intro [Voiceover is asking this questions and a person on screen reacting to this]
1. Does your neighbours PUC percentage trouble you...?
Person on screen: Haan
2. Does he buying a new car or he getting a promotion trigger a range of
emotions like anger, anxiety in your household...?
Person on screen: Haan
3. Has his happiness become a pain in your ass...?
Person on screen: Haan bhai haan...
Voiceover: Not anymore introducing Neighbourly... A customised family
service destined to destroy your neighbours peace and happiness...
[A person sharing his personal stories like a feedback or success story]
A random guy: we stay next to my cousins... It was all nice at the beginning ...
we did engineering together got placed together but (sad tone for this section)he
got a promotion, new car and new wife and they were happy It was very testing
time for my family ... then one of my other cousin who is also jealous of them
suggested me neighbourly ... Now things are broken, heated arguments what not
our families also don’t talk never been so happy thanks neighbourly ...

[We show both uncle and aunty with title neighbourly on the Screen]
[Now we show uncle and aunty smiling and doing namskara and the voiceover
explaining]
Voiceover: They are your neighbours, your family friends Ur relatives or your
enemies... anybody with an eye contact
Uncle: Normally I’m a retired bank manager or a settled businessman with a lot
of free time...
A: I’m always a house wife so we have special hatred towards working women
U: Our kids are over achievers settled in US... In your parents story of sharmaji
ka beta I’m your sharmaji...

Voiceover: How does this work???


Stage 1: Data collection
Uncle: We do thorough investigation for proper service
[Scenes of data collection...]
[Uncle sitting near window with a diary and he writes down whatever he says]
1. Time 7 45pm rajkumars daughter going alone... 11 40pm rajkumars
daughter did not come back alone... [with expressions]
2. Murthy’s have bought new car (calls up murthy) haan yen murthy avre
promotion irbeku [While talking only he writes down the info]
3. Yenu morning walkaa... new shoes ... bought one last week only
[Aunty is talking to camera we should show it as like she is talking to third
person]
1. Swalpa sakre idiya... yenu maga kanistilla?
2. Your daughter won that competitionaa? Ya that only the one with spoon n
lemon in mouth

Voice over: Stage 2: Setting up a plan


Uncle: Based on the level of damage you want for your neighbours we offer
different packages
1. Comparison Pack: [Dialogues/scenes demonstrating how does that
work]
[Uncle only]
a. Oh u got creta nice... Ur colleague hedge took Audi wonderful
vehicle... creta is also nice small car.
b. Oh going out for dinner? Where Taj? No Ur neighbour Mr.Venktesh
family was in Taj I thought u r meeting them ... he spends so much on
his family... U guys carryon food is Ok in Udupi also

2. Drusti pack: [Dialogues/scenes demonstrating how does that work]


[Aunty only]
a. Oh manegeno hosa sofaset togondangide chennagide...
b. Oh yestu mai ildide nimdu chennagi kanistidiraaaa ...
c. Oh yella trippige hogtairohaagide... ushharagi hogbanni...

3. Embarrassment pack: [Uncle and Aunty]

a. Kanninadi yestu kappagide ... yen chinte inda nidene madtilva...


nodakagtilla
b. Oh u have put on so much weight... Only eating and sleepingaa (fake
smile)
c. U lost so much of weight .. any big diseases I can help
d. All hairs goneaa?? Papa so early?

4. Troubling pack: (mild and strong) [Uncle and Aunty]


a. Ur dog shouts too much very disturbing
b. Ur water from ur dive way flowing into ours just take care
c. Nim gida beleddu nam mane olage bartaide cut madbidi pls
d. All your coconuts falling on our tiles... so much damage
e. Too much of noise from your party... can u stop?
f. Your walls are stopping sun rays to enter our house... Bilisbidi
5. Result pack: (special services)
a. How much percentage your son?
b. Did he pass?
c. Engineering seat sigutto ilvo paapa
d. Science is not for everybody its ok ...
e. My son got IIT ... ur son is doing BSC??

Uncle: Since the pandemic its been difficult for the business no one is going
out, no one is running away , everyone is passing... we are relying on company
sacking season...
Voiceover: DO YOU HAVE A NEIGHBOUR AND U HAVE JEALOUSY IN
UR BELLY THEN U HAVE REACHED THE RIGHT PLACE...
COME JOIN US AND LETS MAKE A THE WORLD SHITTIER THAN IT IS
IN BUSINESS SINCE HUMAN KIND...

NOTE: TRY WATCHING SOME TELESHOPPING VIDEO OF SAUNA


BELT OR SOMETHING ... I WANT TO KEEP THE TONE SIMILAR
TO THAT

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