Effective Paragraphing: Figure 1 - The Body Paragraph of A Typical Academic Essay
Effective Paragraphing: Figure 1 - The Body Paragraph of A Typical Academic Essay
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Note: This is only a rough guide to the structure of a body paragraph in an academic essay. The
lengths of each section are somewhat flexible, but in general they should look similar to the lines
above. See the next page for an explanation of each section.
EXPLANATION AND TRANSITION: Sometimes (ok – almost always) it is a good idea to write a line or
two linking the claim in the topic sentence to the evidence that you’ll present to
support that claim. Use this space to clarify your claim, to explain your reasons
for making it, and to transition into the evidence.
INTRODUCTION OF EVIDENCE: If introducing an article or an author for the first time, give their full
name and the full title of the work that you’re drawing from. Often the
introduction can be linked with the evidence in the same sentence.
EVIDENCE: The reason we get out of bed in the morning (well, some of us…). The job of any
piece of evidence is to support the claim in the topic sentence (and thus the thesis
as well). Evidence may take the form of a quotation, a summary, a paraphrase, a
fact or statistic, a personal experience (in certain contexts), or a piece of common
knowledge. The more specific the evidence, the more persuasive it will be.
LINK/EXPLANATION: Evidence cannot speak for itself. Even if you find the perfect quotation to support
your claim, you still must explicitly state for your reader how it supports your
claim. This is also called the warrant, and it is usually – if not always – as long as
or longer than the evidence itself.
INTRODUCTION OF FURTHER EVIDENCE: After explaining the first piece of evidence, you now have
the option of introducing further evidence (remember not to overburden the
reader with evidence – sometimes less is more). There are several ways of
ordering evidence within a paragraph, but generally speaking it is best to save the
better example for last. If the second piece of evidence is coming from a different
source than the first one, be sure to introduce the second source here.
LINK /EXPLANATION: Same as above. With the second piece of evidence, however, it is also necessary
to show how it relates to the first piece of evidence (if the connection isn’t
immediately obvious).
CLAIM: The last step: here you need to restate your topic sentence claim in a new way so
that you can drive home the main point of the paragraph and prepare your reader
for the next paragraph. These sentences can be tricky, but the main point to bear
in mind is that you never want to end a paragraph with a quotation, which can
confuse your reader. Instead, use this space to summarize the main point of your
paragraph before you transition into the next claim (the topic sentence of the next
paragraph). One strategy for smooth transitions: when revising, make sure that
the first sentence of each paragraph repeats keywords or synonyms from the last
sentence of the previous one.