Writing An Essay
Writing An Essay
Here’s a sample topic that has been divided into paragraphs and each of the sections explained.
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Part 1
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 140- 190 words in an appropriate style on
the separate answer sheet.
You have recently had a class project on animal welfare and vegetarianism. Now your teacher
has asked you to write a composition, giving your opinions on the following statement:
Some people believe that humans should not eat meat. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
– meat as a main ingredient of our diet
– vegetarians
– ………………(your own idea)
Sample answer:
Most people think, myself included, that since animals eat other animals, it is natural for
humans to eat meat. However, some disagree, and a growing number of people are
choosing to become vegetarians. So what rationalism stays behind these two beliefs.
You start with Paragraph 1- Introduction
Here you include:
A general statement/rhetorical question (it’s already given on the topic, your task is to
paraphrase it- use different words or grammar structures). In the sample answer we’ve used
‘most’ instead of ‘some’, ‘believe’ was changed to ‘think’ etc.
Qualify the argument
Explain further and maybe try to show several sides of the issue, consider it from different
angles, thinking, “This part is right if… This is true, except when… This might work if… The
reason this happens is because… The underlying issues are…”
First of all I would like to say that humans have always hunted and eaten animals. Maybe
it is our natural instinct inherited by ancestors that forces us to seek this type of food,
however, it is undeniable, that meat is rich in vitamins and protein, which help to build
muscles and bones.
Paragraph 2:
Introduction = topic sentence – which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph
Advantage 1 —– Reason Advantage 1 ——- Specific example 1
Your Advantage 1- is the point mentioned in the task. In our sample answer includes the point
about meat being the main source of energy
Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 2:
Introducing the topic
First of all I would like to say that …
The first point I would like to make is …
I would like to begin by …
Many people think that …
Some people say/claim …
Why do some people believe ?
However, if that is the case, then why ?
Advantages
In the first place …
The main advantage is that you are free to …
There is no one else to …
Then there is …
What’s more …
Another advantage is that …
Another point worth mentioning is the fact it is difficult to have a balanced diet without
this crucial ingredient. In order to avoid some health problems such as lack of energy or
splitting nails we should make lean meat a part of our meal.
Paragraph 3:
Introduction = topic sentence – which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph
Advantage 2 —– Reason Advantage 2 ——- Specific example 2
Your Advantage 2- is actually the point that hasn’t been given in the task. However, it’s the last
point- your own idea. and because I believe that meat is good for you, I included this point just
after the 2nd paragraph- which is also in favour of eating meat.
Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 3:
Introducing the topic
Second of all I would like to say that …
The next point I would like to make is …
I would like to add …
Many people think that …
Some people say/claim …
Why do some people believe ?
However, if that is the case, then why ?
Advantages
In the second place …
The other advantage is that you are free to …
There is no one else to …
Then there is …
What’s more …
Another advantage is that …
On the other hand, many vegetarians believe that eating meat is not only unnecessary but
also unhealthy. We can easily grow plants that give us all we need in our diet, moreover
there are numerous shops which provide supplements that substitute meat.
Paragraph 4:
Introduction -use topic sentence
Disadvantage 1 —– Reason Disadvantage 1 ——- Specific example 1
Make sure you include the other point mentioned in the topic and add your own idea + the
following phrases when writing paragraph 3:
Disadvantages
On the other hand …
Secondly, …
Another disadvantage is …
Last but not least, . .
Linking words- essential practice when writing an essay
In my view, there are strong health reasons for not eating meat. However, if we become
vegetarians for moral reasons, I think we should also not wear fur or leather.
Paragraph 5- Conclusion
Summarise your view using different words from the introduction. You might want to add some
further comment.
Summarising phrases you have to use:
In conclusion (I believe that)…
To sum up, there are arguments …
However, in my view … .