CEPA fol 192 Writing introduction In Paper 2 you have to complete two different writing tasks in 1 hour 30 minutes; the compulsory Part I task and another from a choice of five in Part 2. In Part 1 you are expected to write between 180 and 220 words, and in Part 2 between 220 and 260 words. In Part 1 you will write either an article, a letter, a proposal or a report, You are given up to 150 words of input material, such as advertisements, extracts from letters, emails, postcards, diaries and articles. Read this material carefully, as you are required to use the information contained in it to complete the task. In Part 2 you will write one of the following: an article, an essay, an information sheet, a contribution to a longer piece such as a guidebook or a brochure, a proposal, a report, a letter, a review, a character reference or a competition entry (for this task type, see Unit 1, pages 14 and 15). There are four questions to choose from in Part 2: the last of these, question 5, offers you the chance to write either an article, an essay, a report or a review ‘on one of the two set reading texts. There are two options for this question, one for each set text. Marking The categories in the box are those used by examiners when marking Paper 2 answers. Match each category to the general advice in a-i below. The first one has been done for you. Content Target reader Accuracy Range Organization and cohesion Use a variety of language appropriate to this level, Avoid repetition of vocabulary wherever possible, 1 Range oe Ensure that your answer addresses all the points in the task, In Part 1 you do not always need to use all the information you are given. Re 3 © Write in clear paragraphs of a suitable length. f Points need to be appropriately ordered and connected. 4 ______|_ g Write your answer in a register which is appropriate to the task and the intended audience. hh Adopt a suitable tone for your piece of writing to produce the desired effect. 5 ______ | i. Avoid making t00 many mistakes, particularly basic ones or ‘ones which prevent understanding.Ready for Writing g and checking The sentences below show the stages to follow when planning and checking your written work. Match each stage 1-9 to the piece of general advice in ai above to which it corresponds. Example: 1c UNS Read the task at least twice, underlining key information and requirements. Select appropriately from the information in the input materi Decide whether you should use more formal or informal English. Check whether the task requires you to achieve a specific aim such as persuading, reassuring, apologizing or justifying. 5. Make a list of ideas for your answer, then select the best ones and arrange them into logical groupings. 6 Note down words and expressions which might be suitable for linking your ideas. 7 Write down relevant words, collocations and structures which you might be able to include in your answer. 8 Think of synonyms for key words which are likely to occur more than once in your answer 9 When you have written your answer, check spelling, punctuation and grammar. Register 1 Below are two versions of the same letter, each one written in a different register. Use th formation in the informal letter to complete the numbered gaps in the formal version. The words you need do not occur in the informal letter, Write one word in each gap. The exercise begins with an example (0). INFORMAL LETTER Dear Jily Thanks @ lot for your letter — and congratulations on passing your exams! You dd really well to get Such a high grade. You said you'd be interested in tryng to get a |b here with us in the Family business. Beteve ‘re, we'd love to tale you on. But because OF the way the econony's been recently, Ln sory to Say we just can't offer you any work at the moment. Well certainly Keep you in mind for when things gptbettar - wel be in touch as soon as they do. Unta then, good bk with the jb search! Al the best, Bob FORMAL LETTER Dear Ms Holden lam writing with (0) reference _toyourletterof April 184. T would like to congratulate you on your recent . in your examinations, and particularly on @) such a high grade. Inyour letter you @) an interest in applying for a (4) here at Graves, Snipe and Wesley. Tesstre you we would be delighted to offer you cc) However, (6) to the current economic climate, we are unfortunately a tomake any new appointments at the present time. ‘We shall ofcourse keep your leter on our files in anticipation ofan (8) in the situation. When this occurs, we shall (9) you immediately. Inthe (10) would like to wish you luck in your atiempts to find work. ‘Yours sincerely Robert Snipe 2 Use the two letters to identify some of the differences between formal and informal language. Example: The informal letter contains contractions such as ‘you'd’, ' n'and ‘we'll’ whereas the formal version does not. 193Ready for Wri Models and tasks On the following pages you will find a model for cach of the main task types, together with an additional task. You should answer the Part | task on page 195, and at least one of the Part 2 tasks. Read the relevant model, then follow stages 1-9 in the Planning, and checking section on page 193. In order to help you demonstrate a good range of vocabulary you should select appropriately from the Useful Language section. Part 1: Formal letter You are the social secretary at Lambert College. The local newspaper has commented negatively on relations between students at the college and local people. Read the extract from the article and your notes, and write letter to the newspaper responding to the article and asking them to publish the school's version of the facts. Host families in the dark ‘With summer here, the sight of foreign language students in and around ‘Easton is a very familiar one. Itseems, however, that relations between. ——~ not our case ‘host families and their puests are not as warm as they could be. Mrs Gwyneth Jones told us: “We hardly ever see our student. I don’t know what he gets up to during the day — “They just seem to stand areca round and talk all day. The school docsn’t organize anything? tell about ———_ = things ee Tewould also appear that nothing is dans to encourage contact between eerie students and the residents of Easton. orien Open Day Write your letter in 180-220 words. You do not need to include postal addresses. 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Tits means we have more technology tire to wateh « DVD or one of the £00 or so dtl V enamels we have access to, bt it also hobs to cut us off from henan contact ad tum us into anti-soca, verweteht couch potatocs Avof tis ads eto te conclusion that che phones are Tenvinatia compers shoul cary @ gplernment health warning tectroloy |g ee cam sere demase your beth ad your personality to think about Task ‘You see this announcement in an English language magazine. Sporting Life We are planning to publish a series of articles on the importance of sport in people’s lives. We would like you, the readers, to write us an article, addressing, the following questions: * How important is sport in your own life? * Istoo much emphasis placed on sport nowadays? Write your article in 220-260 words. 196Essay Ready for Writing Your class has recently been doing a project on people who ate currently famous. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay, giving your opinion on the following statement. Many young people wrongly believe that fame brings happiness. Write your essay. Model answer ‘This udebtedy the case that we Ne i an age when many pepe are ‘Appropriately dadrred Kor Sly bing fross, ater tan forthe way wich they fesrnel anita pam ecticved that fame. Furthermore, so mich meda coverage is gen to _ te Wes of eclrtics that we sccm to Know them as well as cry other topicand Ca ge ie ogee oe ea describe wel as famous is open te debate. tendencies Few odd depte the fact that fame attracts both poste and neyatite blz te med may choote to praise a star one week, and then attack them the next wth ertcal articles and unflattering photospephs Clearly Hereover wrk uc to Sy bat gre crn nk oy se separate they can rely on as a spnine Wend, ard who is Rey to expt thom rie paragraphs te own gin. Les la the case that rand chscurity Ge helps with smut be citroly hard to dl witht ys he boon used Lo te sol ee eee nthe other hand being famous ean open vp Some marvclous Gyportrits. One can ibe oncsel€ with aur hemes end travel to ‘totic destinations or do others some good through cheity werk er Legy by ledny one's name to a project. Adio, you are Famous For bing a heart Surgeon or eM rifts activist, fr nstanec, then hopefly the ea rie you tale in your Work must equate to Some form of happiness. ise lreeneral devices Tn conctson, young pcp whe bekeve Ut fame bongs hens eight language in rot be entirely wrong. Tecan nattaina depos obpeey on preference to ifrespect crdholl onto a busbeerthy Gr offends, bey fanaa first person tit be an occupation worth pang pronouns Task Yau have recently had a class discussion on the role that money plays in people's lives. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay, giving your opi statement: n on the following Making money has become too important to many people in our modern society. Write your essay in 220-260 words. Useful language for essays Expressing an opinion Saying what other people think Itis probably true (o say that ... There are those who argue that... There can be no doubt that ... Ithas been suggested that ... Itis simply not the case that .. Itis often claimed that ... (see page 69 for further expressions) Opponents/Supporters/Proponents of (hunting) argue that ... Commonly held views tis widely believed that ... Referring to sources No one would dispute the fact that ... All the evidence suggests that . Few people would contest/dispute (the fact) that... Arecent survey proved that, It is generally agreed that ... Judging by the comments made by ... Interviews with (students) have revealed that ... 197Ready for Writing Information sheet You have been asked by the manager at the music and DVD store where you work to produce an information sheet in English for foreign employces, explaining the company’s policy on sickness and staff absence. You should: + explain how employees should go about informing the store when they are ill. + say what employees should do if they necd to attend a medical appointment. * give gencral advice about preventing work-related health problems. Write your information sheet. Model answer ‘Sounds’ Music and DVD Stores relevanttitle + Sickness and staff absence The company strongly believes in the health and well-being of all its employees and brief ——>t aims to provide a positive working environment. However, we understand that illness introduction does occur, so please familiarize yourself with the following guide! J avoid repetition Sick days ; - — Should Prevent you from coming to work, it isesserfial that you ee fairer anal phone and inform James Curtis (021 560 8111) before You will also need to Ree informative\ | fing James again before the store closes at 6, 1 say whether or not you will be faaes ees returning to work on the following day. If fou are absent due to sickness for three or c. eae more days, you are required to provide a doctor’ note. Medical appointments For routine check-ups with the doctor or dentist, itis standard procedure to give at least two days’ notice so we can arrange for someone to cover your hours fOP Yau. Wewould appreciate it if you could make your appointments in the morning as th store tends not to be so buty at this Ume. P= appropriately Avoiding work-related health problems ae, appropriate — « Do not try to mave large boxes of DVDs by yourself as this could cause serious re aa use of bullet back injury. Be sure to ask another member of staff for assistance. asa naee Fomts) ‘* We would recommend keeping the volume of in-store music at a reasonable level reed since constant loud music can cause permanent damage to your hearing. + Smoking is not permitted anywhere on the premises. There isa sheltered area of the car park behind the store which smokers can use during bad weather, polite ending —> We appreciate your cooperation. Task Useful language for information sheets = Saying what must be suggest/advise + gerund illic manager at the hotel where) done It is well worthwhile + gerund you work has asked you to write an information sheet in English for foreign kitchen staff about health and safety procedures. You should: + stuggest ways to prevent work- related accidents. * provide information about what to do if an accident occurs. + describe what to do in the event of a fire. Write your information sheet in 220-260 words. 198 Ttis (absolutely) vitaly essential/crucial that you + infinitive You are required to ... Itis standard policy/ procedure to . Your first step should be to.. Do not) try to... Advising ‘We would recommend/advise you (not) to + infinitive ‘We (would) recommend/ or infinitive Besureto... Itis (not) advisable to ... Expressing conditions: Inthe (unlikely) event of an accident/firelillness/injury .. Should an accident oceur/fire break out, etc .. Ifan accident were to occur... (See also pages 33 and 37 in Unit 3.)Ready for Writing Contributions: brochure and guidebook entries ‘An international guidebook is being produced for students Tanguage in the country or countries where it i write the entry on your first language, gi ing to study a foreign spoken. You have been asked to ing advice to students on choosing a school in your country. You should include information on the types of schools where the language can be studied, and a general idea of prices and types of course. Write your contribution. Model answer brief ———>] | otc casing cha 20 uy. Each ga toon borate havea of tng eee tio of ch there ore atuertaly tm man types Pate language academia | phase renga Sram smal, convartacl Sots nith tuo or three cettroant, to lrge tinking \ teppsent Scop hae dogs Olagacotame cue a ened ch co obsoys wise to chock (setae aceon eater between paragraphs ceuthority Sor language oceania’ Nghe schon belongs to ABC the regatery | J— title would normally give name of country advice on aoa P* oeavar,trgar schoo lo wtuahy oar 2 sepcenrrmign | choosing a ar tinatables, « paint wrth bearing ia inal S you think your eincamttoncns school might change curing tha pariod of Study. Ba, wornad, thought o one-month Sami- Ceamiva, course mith forty hours of tultion can cout o& much a@ HOD Eure, x0 Bf prinm em wep Senter whan choosing goer ake ype ight wat 1a camila a (preriment Gnanced stitution or Tigpy a8 thay on abectionstaly lrown, Gavarmant Snancacl Astitutions st undiac 200 Ears \ fethar crowded, nith up to thirty five atucante in nach, but tha quality of linking of eee aera chee TT eee a eee ce ete ideas within = a peragraph Da courts one eight-month artartva, bus &f you intend to stay in the: country Sor Sone, Uma, the igo! 8 cartoiay on option worth lon int You ha receive on olfiinl cartificata at the andl of tha course, uhich might wall be useful for your curicutin vitow: Ramittadly, closter can bacome | |= general idea cof prices and course types Task Useful language for brochures and guidebook entries A guidebook aimed at readers aged Heoween IS endo beta eee Commenting on positive (The quality of service) leaves for your town. You have been asked o —««#8Pects Eleeaa esis ene Cwriteancntny ov one ofthe following (TheschoolhoteVsports Be warned, though: (delays a centre) boasts (a large indoor are not uncommon). swimming pool/a wide ee + museums range offacilitiesfive tennis rine vc. ‘ cs always wise to check... ee oe This is a point worth beari © parks No trip to (Paris) wouldbe ng FO ne Your entry should include specific complete ee viel Cpe geste information on at least two examples (a mre mp major factor when choosing of museums, restaurants or parks, (The restaurant) is noted for (your school), you might want giving advice (o visitors on what tose, _{itS excellent cuisine). toconsider eat or do in each. Commenting on negative _... iscertainly an option ae aspects worth looking into. raat aceome, Admittedly, (this isa rather expensive option.) but... 199Ready for Writing Proposal Your town has been short-listed (0 host a major international festival of folk music and dance next year. You have been asked to write a proposal for the festival organizers, stating why your town should be chosen from the list. You should include relevant information about accommodation, transport, concert venues and other leisure and entertainment possibilities. Write your proposal. Model answer relevant title ———] brief paragraph. ——} headings appropriately formal remark posers conrkudng) ~{ Sidburyhas a reputation for making ts guests feel at home, and we feel sure Le | lntradvetion Ze a popular seaside resor, Sidbury is wel equipped to deal ith thelarge a] influcof peoplewhich a musi festival of hie type woul artract. > Accommodation Within-the town itself there is a wide eelection of hotels, and no shortage of guesthouses offering bed and breakfast accommodation and awarm, fiienaly welcome In addition, the campsite has space for G00 people andis } «}— ‘ltyetlentv located onthe edge of Sdbury with eaey access to the town ‘centre and main concert venues, Transport iinterms of transport, the town Is Ideally situated for overeeso vieitors arrving by sea or alr The ferry port of Oidhavenis a short bus ride away and the tow Is wellconnected to the capital's main airport with regular train and coach services, Theres aloo an extensive local bus network and it would be no problem ‘toprovide extra services for the duration ofthe feetval. venues Major festival events could beheld in the newly-built Arena Hall which has a ‘seating capacity of 5000, but there are a number of other smaller venues ‘square and seafront area ae prtecthy cuted for outdoor dancin events. Sidbury can ofr the vitor all the facile one mould expect rom a busting holiday resort. tt also boaste a fine municipal health spa with al steam baths, idel for dancers with aching lego end sore fest. ‘that if the feetWal were hosted here, it would be a resounding success. Task ‘Your town has been sho host a two-day regional conference for students preparing for the CAB examination, You have been asked to Useful language for proposals isted to general comment regarding the town’s suitability showing the town ina Positive light > relating the answer to the planned event Suitability ‘The (town/conference centre/ The (town/centre/stadium) is school) boasts an impré well equipped to deal with/ —_ range of (amenities/facilities).. ive Pale presen nena perfectly suited for (such Few (cities/schools) can offer organizers, stating why your school GR ray ee acnelamecholeee should be chosen from the list. Your oe Travel and transport proposal should include relevant information about the facilities within your school, accommodation, transport and other} entertainment possibilities. Write your proposal in 220-260 words. 200 It is within easy reach/ connected to (the capital). sun : es walking distance/driving prrsre i Mean that distance of the (centre/hotel). leisure and panei Pe aes ouncing: It is just a short walk/drive/ successiof great benefit tothe is iust a short walkidrivel te oa (coast/station). Amenities The (town) has easy access to There is noshortagela wide _ (the motorway network), selection of (hotels/cinemas) to choose from.Ready for Writing Report An international research group is carrying out an investigation into the housing situation for young people around the world. You have been asked by the group to write a report about your country, including the following poin + the different housing options available in your country for young people in their carly twenties + the problems faced by young people with each option *+ possible future changes in the housing situation for young people in your country ‘Write your report. Model answer relevant title and Paragraph headings i for leis TF Un ret be ett im of the report to to examine te warlaus fowlng tions open » Hele early tuentes tn my country aed th dffeales exountaral uth each ene mae evening paeorh 7 Ha cur takes toa cai pee] — oflanguage outlining the irre bao rae purpose of the anion a prope instructions report Property speculation and soaring inflation have put house prices beyond the reach oF the majority of First-time buyers. The few who do mandge to race the roney for the deposit on a emall Fat, are likely to experience problerss obtaining a mortgage. Banks are urilling to lend enoney to anyore without a permanent ontrack, eavething which weet spurg waar can only dear of. appropriately formal Renting register Bhs obvious alternative te to rent « property, Howser, rents, tke house prices, fa raon daraically, fering lowceamart to care. For many tuenkyemetbions, ‘this can prove an enjoyable experience, but some soon discover that they are rok ited to hing with otlrs. Local ashore projle sme Iw-cet rented a 5 sccommedation specifically for yang tingle people, but this tenda to be in very range linking eecmenel ae vocabulary pear) wit items to avoid Tete fad urpricina, then, that a sigificant proportion of geheol and colle #~] _ repetition of lesera ept to contima livin in the parental borne until they have sed encgh “young people’ troney to buy a plice of their oun. Thi may tate tome Line, Fase, nd ‘Fiction bebunen parenls and chien can reat, clusion Pe long as house prices continue to increase, the outlock for young people here Sones wl erin sk. Only 2 abctatal all property vcs wil ingroe the} qf addressing situation and this seams unlikely in the wear future. the final point of the Task cS An international research group is Useful language for reports carrying out an investigation into ‘ Introducing the report The future looks bleakire! employment prospects for young people The sim/purpose ofthis report uncertainis promising, around the world. You have been asked ig to examine! This seems unlikely in the by the group to writea report about evaluate/describe/ outline... __ near/foreseeable future. (See your local area, including the following It will also include/consider/ —_also vocabulary of Possibility points: j Iablofor subfes¥tecommmend on page 209 of the Wordlist.) * the types of employment available for The report is based on a survey A young people in your area conducted among (college faking tecommendations + the dffculties faced by young people _ students). Bhat (he school Lornnony) searching for work Predicting the future should... * possible future developmentsinthe ‘The outlook for young people/ In the light of the results of employment situation for young jobsithe country is the survey, I would (strongly) people in your area (far from) brightoptimistic/ advise against... a depressing. Tfeel it would be to our advantage if... 201Ready for Writing Informal letter You recently took part in an activity which you enjoyed very much. A friend of yours has written to you expressing an interest in the activity and asking how it went. Write a letter telling your friend about the positive and negative aspects of your experience, encouraging him/her to take part in a similar event. Model answer referencetoa previous letter ed relevant J zhanks fr the etter, What coincidence hat we've ot taken up bird } a fac watching! le was fascinating to read about how you got inte it. aa an Afro dg Spiraling nig e eome mpl mtainesic ‘hooked so mach sin fit that Pe akendy signed up frmext years trp eid ee be great ifyou came along toe, as | know youd get just as nich out of it ast did from one or tu leaders who were a bitunhelpf, everyone there wasso qed sand really keen to share their knowledge, There must have been about [fcc diferent nationalities nour campsite, with everyone giving out open encouraging mit bea use of phrasal —_| verbs space of time! The hadon Alex ‘imitations to go birdurttching with them in their own countries. and ofcourse, fri English was the main language of communication, so ify did deci J Yeu alse he able to show-off your cooking skills, an pickup a fw tips from others ve never eaten sich a huge variety of nternational dishes in sich a short _many for mn to mention ere. The thing is there would lure been even more if a] td had a more powerful pair of binoculars Stil kon for ext year ow. And so doyou! I've enclesed an sand as you can see, itsiu Turkey, which Vous your've been dying to visit... Wate ack so ond fete ker what ya decided. appropriate a =a Allthe best id to take 4 part throughout the letter opportunity for you to practise thelanguage, | __ negative aspects offset by Positive aspects than made pa! ssAsof course did the munber of new binds I sow ~ fr too application form Task Bither: awrite your own answer to the task above; or banswer the following question. You recently went on holiday toa place which you enjoyed very much. A friend of yours has written to you expressing an interest in the place and asking what it was like there. Write a letter in 220-260 words, telling your friend about the positive and negative aspects of the place, encouraging him/her to go there next year. 202 Useful language for informal letters Beginning the letter Advising Great/Lovely to hear from you Whatever you do, make sure (after so long). you... Thanks (alot) for theletter. _It’s (not) worth/There'’s no! Sorry tohear about your... little point + gerund SorryT haven't written/been d/l wouldnt... if were you. in touch for so long. You'd be much better off + Persuading ce You'd get so much out ofit. Ending the ki E g the letter Id beawonderful Write back soon and let me marvellous opportunity for rows how it aoes you te , ; Just think ofall the people eoKins forward 10 hearing you'd meet). RI : Just imagine how itwould Can't walt fo see you again, (im; ‘your cv), not to (Give my) love/regards to mention (the money you ‘Signing off could earn). Eriends: All the best/Best wishes/Bye for now Close friends or relatives: Lots of Love/All my love/LoveReady for Writing feview ‘The magazine published by your school's English club is asking students to ‘exchange information about non-fiction books they have enjoyed reading in English. Write a review of a non-fiction book you have read, saying what you learnt from it and encouraging others to read it. Write your review. Model answer uestions to ara the La : Hl PEEVE id you realize that there were na horses or cows nthe Aniricas until Colnibus introduced ‘ht his return vist in 1494 Or thet the fist cowboys were not thas of Nvth America, but pee sennen ‘the gaches, uss ers au qu of Argentina, Chile Venencla and Mexico? ak-— CF the book's cetiny dit, tl rend Hank Wrights revealing study of cocboy clearer earenat pba eer noise Anca eA its 7 “ book pa: is fll of interesting facts ries about, phoroes who ws ust twibwurn to mi One such mart ns Martin Miguel de Gdns, who i 1806 rode with thirty other gauchas into the waiters ofthe River Plate cud captured « British ship which had wn ayo ther Thess mate ath Wnts cts se fon hue encouraging ax you aging ct fw the very ging of ek, ae others toread ° the book ‘Andi gute at great coy i, dat et othe i Lst Couns dees more than spy trace the history oF cattemen on horse it reves fscinting insight nto thecustns fd wns geagraphy av wld ofa wl connent. Th’ someting ir ‘exryone in the bok, fom cathsiastic and vid descriptions ofthe scenery, to infermation on final dances nd singing tations, such as the gucho‘payedas' ~ had wo deg you could howe g recommendation lc with he ice as gry capt N "Lost Cobnys' is an exellent red. iis both entertinng and educational ant highly recommend itt aayone who is interest in tat books. antl . Useful language for reviews Either: a write your own answer to the iaehebans Commenting critically Encouraging others (not) to .- provides a fascinating/ read/watch/listen or banswer the following question. valuable/revealing insight Don't be put off by the title/ into... critics/cover, n i i Tfound the plot rather Itwill have you roaring wit de neeaie ee eaby sour predictableisappotneing. _aughlerinthing out tobuy lish club is asking z z studenlnte ehvsohtsions.ontthe Sais ee Be em ae llioe beer using) She gives a compelling! Iwould definitely give ita 5 Series memorable performance as... miss. giving your views on the following One particular strength’ Iwould highly recommend it points: weakness of the film/bool/CD to anyone interested in... jy iecontent is... I would strongly advise you p)iisdesken The desigwcharacterization’ (not) to go out and buy/scc it. + how well it prepares students for prcauclicn wissecrd (o nonet the exam isnot its best feature. * how much it has helped you improve your English Write your review in 220-260 words. (For a list of adjectives used in reviews and the vocabulary of Comparisons, see page 212.) 203Ready for Writing writer's relationship with ——[_ Character reference An English-speaking friend of yours has applied for a job as a guide in a history museum and you have been asked to provide a character reference for him/her. The reference should indicate how long you have known the person, It must also include a description of the person’s character and the reasons why he or she would bbe suitable for the job. Write your reference. Model answer Character Reference: Andee Medleish, Tirot uct Andre in 3001 whist he vas shud kotor at wy uiersiy a pat oF the {crag ieee gc our respectite countries. applicant aig har! kin epeking onset oteasions about kis subj, bot for ond a ik able Toa into doubt Hat Aude has the waking oF ox applicant ot on i he een roredgnl,bt le aloo kas a et fo bg Kston ; suai forthe —T ) wk on cxttsiokiseanbation of exerting otro, dosage od er = eon I explanations. “Tradition to his obtous passion for He pas Andre has ate, warn, fenly uawwer ad aeays shove goat patience and seit towards otters. These qualities enable Jar kin to cousunscte easly and cecil with people of al ages, ad he would be uot as at houe falling toa party of yougsehoolkidren as he woud be to a group of history relevant qualities ehudents. and aspects of Heo loo ex aclent lotr and vomsicus ee, xp o lage cunts personality rn of ex inomation wh great ease. This vould wdoubtely hp ki fo aoe the let toakyoud lowe about eth eb inthe mee ia ey short opace ftv. recommendation ——] For ese easons T an nore Han confident that Ande las He Sess, fe-4 His job ad he would be a great asset to your museu. He has abays Jrashvortly friend to ue, and T on sure he vould make an equally yal and reliable enplogee, ualtzs for bee. afl ard Task A friend of yours has applied to work onan international summer camp for children aged six to sixteen, and you have been asked to provide a character reference for him/her. The job involves planning and running a variety of activities, including games, sports and other outdoor pursuits. The reference should indicate how Jong you have known the person. It must also include a description of the person's character and the reasons why he or she would be suitable for the job Write your reference in 220-260 words. 204 Useful language for character references Relationship .. and since then we have remained firm friends. During the (five) years he has worked for me, (Peter)... Asa former colleague of (Susans), I... Overall suitability She has the makings of an excellent (teacher). He would be a great asset to ‘your (company). ‘She would make a valuable contribution to your (school). Abilities Not only is she a highly talented (actress) but she is also an exceptionally gifted (musician). He isa skilled craftsman/a proficient typist/an expert cook/a promising athlete/an accomplished singer. He has a talent for bringing history alivela flair for Janguages/a gift for music. ‘Qualities (Paul) has a warm friendly manner/a determined nature/ all the necessary personal qualities. (Celia) shows great patience! sensitivity towards others! enthusiasm/potential. These qualities enable (her) to... (See also pages 56 and 57 in Unit 4.)reason for writing relevant = ———>| experience separate paragraphs. for each issue expressing ___, suitability and desire for the job Ready for Writing Letter of application ‘You have seen this advertisement in an international magazine. WRITERS REQUIRED We are looking for people to write for this magazine about environmental issues in their local area that would be of interest to readers in other countries. We would like to hear from anyone who has: * an interest in environmental concerns + an awareness of environmental isues affecting their local area + some experience of writing, Send usa letter of application, explaining why you think you are suitable and describing two environmental issues currently affecting your local area. Write your letter of application. 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Readers wh are uraare of his etusion might ea a erat deal rom an ation seca er lin a ea { ceraaal esters eee eae or oot forvard to hearing rom jo, “Yours aly ss Pharco Task Either: a write your own answer to the task above; or answer the following question. WRITERS REQUIRED We are looking for people to write for this magazine about people in their local area whose work, achievements or lifestyle would be of interest to an international readership. Send us.a letter of application, explaining why you think you are suitable and giving examples of two local people, living or dead, that you would write about. Write your letter of application in 220-260 words. (For useful language, see page 49 in Unit 4.) 205