The document provides instructions to correct the order of adjectives in two descriptive writing extracts. The first extract describes the author's aunt being found unconscious on the floor after the author hears her cat making a terrible noise. The second extract recounts a childhood memory of the author's first picnic at the beach, where they built a sandcastle that was walked on by another child. The document asks the reader to check or correct the order of adjectives in the extracts.
The document provides instructions to correct the order of adjectives in two descriptive writing extracts. The first extract describes the author's aunt being found unconscious on the floor after the author hears her cat making a terrible noise. The second extract recounts a childhood memory of the author's first picnic at the beach, where they built a sandcastle that was walked on by another child. The document asks the reader to check or correct the order of adjectives in the extracts.
1 a belt leather new wonderful 2 a German fascina6ng movie old 3 an intelligent legal new secretary In the extracts from learners descrip,ve wri,ng below there are some mistakes with the order of adjec,ves. Correct the mistakes, or ,ck the order if it is correct. A LUCKY ESCAPE My aunt was a overweight, plain woman, with grey short hair and a pair of brown sparkling eyes. I loved her very much. She lived alone with her cats. One of her cats, Farid, who was a ginger very small cat, always liked to sit on me when I visited. One day when I visited my aunt I knocked on the door but there was no answer. Suddenly I heard a horrible loud scream from inside the house. I found that the door was open. I went inside and up the stairs, in the bedroom I found Farid making the terrible noise siDng next to my aunt. She was unconscious and lying on the wooden dark oor. I managed to phone for an ambulance and get her to hospital. She recovered, but if I hadn't heard the cat I wouldn't have gone into the house. A CHILDHOOD MEMORY It was a bright Sunday beau6ful morning. Birds were singing and dogs were barking. It was the day of my rst picnic on the beach. As soon as we parked the car, I ran down to the lovely golden long beach. I could feel the refreshing gentle breeze on my skin. My family found a tree to eat under for our picnic, and my mother unpacked all the delicious fresh food she had prepared. I played in the sand for a while. I built a sandcastle, but unfortunately a liLle nasty girl came and walked on it. This upset me, but I decided to build another one aNer lunch.