How to write a Commentary

Approaches to Literary Criticism

IB A1 Paper 1
Your task is not so much to discuss what is being said,
rather it is to discuss how it is being said.
Theme (The) also Topic & Subject
What is the subject and concern of the text?
o Within this there may be more than one theme. Try to identify a key
theme or themes.
What information do you have, eg the writers name/date? Does this provide any
indication as to what is the main concern and focus of the text?
Voice (very)
Whose voice do you hear in the text?
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Narrative Perspective: 1 or 3 person (omniscient)? If 1 person, is it the voice of
the author (authorial) or are they playing a role (persona)?
Ascertain to whom the text is addressed: the reader; another?
Establish the situation in which the text is set: the setting
o Does the setting reinforce the meaning, message or tone in any way?
o Does the writer have a particular attitude towards the environment presented?
Form/Structure (fortunate)
Identify the form of this piece of writing: fiction/non-fiction, essay, journalism, travel
writing, etc.
What is the overall structure of the piece (ie: circular or retrospective narrative)?
Are there any obvious ways in which it could be divided into sections, ie its layout, its
meaning or by changes the language and shifts in pace and focus?
Does the structure reinforce the meaning or the message of the text in any way?
Messages/Purpose (master)
Think about the authors aims and purposes what is he/she trying to say?
o What type of text is it? Informative/descriptive/persuasive?
Look for ideas which are embedded below the surface of the text (subtext).
Are there any signs of irony or satire?
Tone/Atmosphere (teaches)
How would you describe the writers attitude or tone of voice?
Does this create a mood, atmosphere or feeling which permeates the text, such as
gloom/joy? This often relates to language & lexical field (word motif).
If so, what it is about the writing that creates this effect (ie: archaic or technical
language; note syntax and cadence as well)?
Look at the use of setting in time and place how is this presented and how does
this influence the tone and mood?

Imagery (incompetent)
What kind of visual images does the text present?
How does the author use simile and metaphor, for example?
Comment on both individual examples and on patterns of images.
Always explain and analyse these examples in terms of their contribution to the
overall meaning of the text.
How does the text involve and engage the reader/audience by appealing to THE
SENSES (see extended notes on next page for more on the senses)
Diction (deficient)
What is the lexical field? Is there more than one lexical field? Which is dominant? Are
there types of words that recur? (ie different words relating to death/childhood etc)
What do you notice about individual words and phrases chosen?
Are there words that seem unexpected/out of place? What effect do they create?
Rhyme/Rhythm/Sound effects (rich)
In poetry, what effect does the rhyming have (if there is any)?
Rhythm can be important in prose too: are the sentences flowing or jerky (long, clausal
sentences or short and perfunctory)? This can relate to the structure of the text.
Does the rhythm change at any point? Why?
Other sound effects are created by devices such as alliteration.
Remember to comment on the effect of these.
If you cannot see any particular effect it is better not to mention these features at all!
Conclusion (children)
Finally, return to an overview of the text. Sum up how the effects and details of style
you have analysed come together to create a whole piece or writing.
Do content and style compliment each other?
What has your reading of it contributed to your understanding of the subject?
Does it offer a way of looking at things that you had not considered before?
A good conclusion is not simply a summary of what has been said but a synthesis of
your argument and the understanding this has inspired.
Remember: Point (Statement) ! Quotation ! Comment (Analysis)

Information
Paper 1 of the IB AI course will contain 2 unseen texts, one of which WILL be a
poem, the other may be fiction - from a novel or short story or a piece of non-fiction
such as essay, biography or journalism
The texts may be extracts or complete pieces
At Higher Level there will be no accompanying questions or guidelines. At Standard
Level there will be guiding questions intended as prompts to help you structure your
commentary. You do not have to respond directly to these questions, neither must
you simply answer them as individual questions; they should be integrated into your
overall response.

Senses
You should examine the text to see if there are any examples of the senses that
appeal to the reader & are used to draw them further into the text.
o Olfactory (smell)
o Auditory (hearing)
o Gustatory (taste)
o Visual/Ocular (sight)
o Tactile (touch)
Poetry
In poetry analysis refer to the voice as the speaker or persona not the author or
narrator (the author presumptuously implies there is an autobiographical content
and the narrator is a term used when analysing narrative). The speaker or persona
is the voice of the poem, which may not necessarily be that of the poet.
A poem is directed at an audience, not at a reader.
Prose

In analysis of prose, focus on understanding the writers style. To establish their style
examine their individual combination of literary devices, structure, vocabulary etc that
go together to form their style.
It is by examining how the texts are written that we can identify individual style
Use the diagram below to help you see the many ingredients that make up style and
use it in your analysis of prose.

Top Tips
The mnemonic written to help you in remembering all key aspects of the commentary
is to be used as a means of recalling the features needing to be addressed, rather
than the order in which to organise your commentary. It is not designed as a strict
formula that you must follow!
o Having read the text through a couple of times you should have ascertained
which are the key features and they should be addressed first. Colour coding
may help you to organise and structure your response in a logical and focused
manner.
Do not be daunted by a poem or prose extract.
There will be good reason why a particular piece has been chosen, you will discover
them with close reading - texts about which there is nothing to say are not usually
chosen!
As you begin writing your answer, begin with an overview or general point (eg theme
and content) and then go on to study it in detail.
Read the text through thoroughly at least twice, preferably more like four times!
Underline key words and phrases. These underlined words represent the ideas that
you will need to keep in mind as you plan and write your answer.
Annotate the text. Annotation helps you remember details and enables you to find
them quickly again.
Note down your initial responses to the effects created by specific words/phrases and
then incorporate them into your commentary.
List the key points that you need to cover in your commentary. Try to arrange them
in a logical order so that your answer flows.
As you analyse ensure that you include referenced quotations to back up your
arguments Point (Statement), Quotation, Comment (Analysis)
Try avoiding using first person (with the possible exception of your conclusion, where
to reinforce an important point, it can be rather effective) since this maintain a
critically objective stance rather than a subjective bias.
Avoid slang!
Try to be aware of dialect and local usage and avoid using it.
Avoid the use of abbreviations, eg did not is preferable to didnt and avoid etc.
Unless the number is very large try to avoid writing numbers in numerical format.
Try to use the present tense, but more importantly be consistent in your tense use.

Adapted from English for the IB Diploma by Croft & Cross