Language Features
Language Features
The following is a list of techniques that students should be encouraged to use in their persuasive
writing.
Verbs to indicate actions and feelings
present tense for most of the argument e.g. Smoking is , I hate
past tense for some evidence or past happenings e.g. For years, people smoked
future tense for suggesting solutions to problems, predictions for the future or calls for action
e.g. We will be a healthier society if , Society can change
Adjectives and phrases descriptive, emphatic, feeling words that appeal to the emotions
Wonderful, beneficial, amazing, excellent, terrible, horrible, cruel, unjust, endangered, unwise,
attractive, frightening, perfect, highly recommended, practical, only course of action, sensible,
the best way, useful, the only path, the obvious solution
Personal voice (first, second person) with action verbs
I like, I think, I believe, I do not believe, I urge you, you should, shouldnt, we should, could,
must, must not, we need to, we will
Formal voice (more authoritative, more power of persuasion)
Progress writing from I think computer games are good to Computer games are good
Nominalise information turn verbs, adverbs or clauses into nouns for more authority
Instead of You should not pollute write Pollution should be stopped It
Greedy to greed; violent to violence; cruel to cruelty
Rhetorical questions and thought-provoking questions for effect
Where do we go from here? What is the point of ?
Emphatic language, hyperbole or exaggeration for effect
We need to, Society has no other choice, it must, There are a countless ways to
Alliteration or rhyme, especially in the title or the last statement or sentence
Exercise is exhilarating. Plastic will never ever go away.
Figurative language, metaphor and simile to enhance your argument
is driving me up the wall, Littering is a sickness, Eating junk food is like jumping off a cliff.
Repetition of words, phrases and concepts to push your point of view
We can stop the use of illegal drugs. We will stop the use of illegal drugs.
Quotes or humour that pack a punch and help your case
Tomorrow is the first day of the rest of our lives so lets begin right now!
Anecdotes, examples, facts and statistics as evidence to enhance your argument
Last year , An example of this can be seen
Temporal Connectives
Causal Connectives
sequence ideas
first
second
firstly
secondly
because
so
as
for
for example
for instance
now
at once
then
when
in fact
instead
meanwhile
soon
moreover
since
consequently
accordingly
despite this
moreover
hence
though
however
nevertheless
as a result of
therefore
stemmed from
surely
next
previously
afterwards
before
here
until
while
whenever
finally
lastly
in conclusion
in summary
Comparative Connectives
Additive Connectives
however
whereas
also
besides
although
moreover
on the contrary
in spite of this
in addition
additionally
different from
differs from
furthermore
as well as
compared to
in other respects
but
or
alternatively
in contrast
nor
and
of course
obviously
as well
likewise
rather
instead
while
overall
similarly
specifically
then
clearly
also
elsewhere
everywhere
nevertheless
concurrently
[Begin a class wall chart or hanging mobile and add new words that the students find.]
References: Genre, Text, Grammar Technologies for Teaching and Assessing Writing by Peter Knapp and Megan Watkins;
Write Ways Modelling Writing Forms by Lesley Wing Jan; First Steps Writing Resource Book by WA Dept of Education & Training