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FCE - Essay

The document provides guidance for writing essays, including tips for planning, structuring paragraphs, using an appropriate tone and register, and linking ideas. It suggests introducing the topic and stating an opinion in the conclusion, not the introduction. Each new paragraph should have a main idea supported by relevant details. Linking words and phrases are also defined to help organize ideas. Sample questions, notes, and model essay answers are included to demonstrate the guidance.

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FCE - Essay

The document provides guidance for writing essays, including tips for planning, structuring paragraphs, using an appropriate tone and register, and linking ideas. It suggests introducing the topic and stating an opinion in the conclusion, not the introduction. Each new paragraph should have a main idea supported by relevant details. Linking words and phrases are also defined to help organize ideas. Sample questions, notes, and model essay answers are included to demonstrate the guidance.

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Hints

[PLANNING]
- Use the task input to help you plan but try to avoid copying phrases from the input in
Part 1. Use your own words.

[INTRODUCTION and CONCLUSION]


- Effective introductory and concluding paragraphs - In the introduction, state the topic
clearly, give a brief outline of the issue, saying why it is important or why people have
different opinions about it.
- DO NOT express your opinion at the beginning of your essay (develop you essay in such
a way that it guides the reader to the conclusion you draw).
- DO give your opinion in the final paragraph.

[SECOND and THIRD PARAGRAPHS]


- Structure your argument. - Each new paragraph has one main idea, stated in a topic
sentence.
- Include relevant details to support the main idea: these might include examples, rhetorical
questions (do no overdo it), controversial or surprising statements... If you include a
drawback, give a possible solution, too.

[GENERAL]
- DO use a relatively formal register and an objective tone. Do not be too emotional.
- Remember to use linking adverbials to organise your ideas and to make it easy for the
reader to follow your argument.
- In the exam, allow yourself time to check your grammar, spelling and punctuation
thoroughly.

Linking words and phrases


Present your ideas clearly. Use connectors to link your ideas
Make sure you know how to use connectors appropriately (register, punctuation...). If you have any
doubts, you should use a good dictionary to check.

To express personal opinions: In my opinion, I believe (that) / I feel (that) / it seems to me /


in my view /as I see it / I think / personally

To show purpose: to / in order to / so as to / so that

To list ideas: Firstly / secondly / finally / In the first place / Lastly

To contrast ideas: However / although / in contrast / whereas / but / nevertheless / in spite


of / despite

To describe a cause: Because / since / as / due to

To show a sequence: First of all / then / after that / eventually / in the end / finally

To add information: In addition / moreover / what is more / besides / too / furthermore / and

To describe a consequence: Consequently / as a result / therefore / so / thus / for this


reason / that is why

To conclude the topic: In conclusion / to sum up / in short / all in all

Model questions and answers


Essay 1 - Model question
TASK
In your English class, you have been talking about the subject of cultural heritage. Now your English
teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Is is a good thing that countries spend a lot of money on their heritage?
Notes
Write about:
1. preserving the past
2. investing in the future
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 1 - Model answer


Most countries spend large sums of money protecting their national heritage. However, there is
strong argument that we should look forwards and not backwards, spending less money on
preserving the past and more on securing our future.
On the one hand, it is important that we remember our heritage. Once it is lost, it is lost forever.
Caring for important monuments helps with this. It also attracts tourists, which has an economic
benefit for everyone.

On the other hand, governments spend a lot of money on museums and keeping historic sites in
good condition when poor people need houses to live in and businesses need better roads for
transporting their goods.
Another argument is that by making heritage sites attractive for tourists -for example, by putting on
entertainment - we give a very untrue picture of the past and sometimes damage the local
environment.
To conclude, while there are strong arguments for not spending too much on preserving the past, I
believe it is important to protect the most famous sites for the future generations but it is not realistic
to try and save everything. We need to invest in the future too.
(+/- 190 words)

Essay 2 - Model question


TASK
In your English class, you have recently had a discussion about science and young people. Now
your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Science is very important in the 21st century. How do you think it could be made more
appealing to young people?
Notes
Write about:
1. television programmes
2. interactive museums
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 2 - Model answer


Although young people love gadgets and technology, some see science as uninteresting and
'uncool'. Over time, the number of young people, particularly girls, pursuing science and technology
studies and careers has dropped.

One way in which science could be made more attractive would be to have lively television
programmes presented by celebrities, with subjects which were relevant to the experience of the
young. We live in a celebrity culture and children identify with well-known young people.
Another idea would be to set up interactive science museums in every town, where parents could
take their children. It is much better to teach children the principles of science through hands-on
experiments than to lecture them in a classroom.
Of course, there would be more incentives if the average scientit were better paid and young people
were made aware of the range of jobs available. A lot of people are put off a scientific career
because they think it means working in a badly paid job in a boring laboratory.
Whichever way we choose, it is vital that more young people are attracted to science, since society's
prosperity depends largely on continuous scientific progress.
(+/- 190 words)

Essay 3 - Model question


TASK
In your English class, you have recently had a discussion about relationships. Now your teacher has
asked you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Is it better to live alone or with someone else?
Notes
Write about:
1. independence
2. money
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 3 - Model answer


Nowadays more people are deciding to live by themselves. Some people claim this is more
enjoyable and in young people it develops a sense of responsibility, whereas others disagree.

The main advantage of living alone is that there is nobody to tell you what to do, so you can live your
life in your own way. What is more, you can organise or decorate your house as you want. There is
no one else to disagree with.
On the other hand, it can be quite lonely for some people. By nature, we are social animals.
Secondly, it is more expensive because you have to pay all the rent and bills yourself, so you have
less money to enjoy yourself. Last but not least, it can be quite hard to find a nice flat for one person,
so you might not be able to live in the best area.
To sum up, there are strong arguments on both sides. In conclusion, I believe that living alone is
better for older people who have more money and like privacy but not for young people who need to
share the costs.
(+/- 180 words)

Essay 4 - Model question


TASK
In your English class you have been talking about happiness. Now your English teacher has asked
you to write an essay.
Write an essay using all the notes and give reasons for your point of view.
Whether you are happy or not depends on the personality you are born with. Do you agree?
Notes
Write about:
1. money
2. health
3. ________ (your own idea)
Write your essay in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Essay 4 - Model answer


Some people claim they are naturally cheerful. However, in my view, how we lead our lives is the
main reason we are either happy or unhappy.

Take money, for example. Money doesn't automatically make us happy. In fact, it makes some
people very unhappy because they are frightened of losing what they've got. On the other hand, if
we're not greedy and don't spend it foolishly, it can reduce stress and give us security.
Then consider health. If we eat badly, get too little sleep and don't exercise, our health will decline
and make us miserable. Eating well and going for lovely long walks in the countryside can make us
feel better generally.
The third thing I think is important is to have a positive outlook on life. We should all enluy things like
music and being with our friends. At the same time, it's important to spend time alone and live as
simply as possible, which is not easy in the 21st century!
All these make a big difference to our happiness, no matter what our natural temperament.
(+/- 170 words)

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