Intro Log Conclusion Extracts
Intro Log Conclusion Extracts
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Introduction
The introduction requires a brief description (no
more than 500 words) of what the topic is about,
why this topic was chosen and in what ways it
contributes to a better understanding of Society and
Culture. The choice of methodologies should be
explained and justified.
Log
The log should be based on the students Personal
Interest Project diary and will be a summary (no
more than 500 words) of the development of the
final product, outlining the procedures undertaken in
researching the topic.
Conclusion
The conclusion requires a statement (no more than
Examples of Introductions
Topic choice
Sample 1
Examples of Introductions
Methodologies
Sample 2
Examples of Introductions
Methodologies
Sample 2 (cont)
Examples of Introductions
Cross-cultural component
Sample 3
Examples of Logs
Sample 1
Examples of Logs
Sample 1 (cont)
Examples of Logs
Sample 2
Examples of Logs
Sample 2 (cont)
I expected the questionnaire to yield the least
useful results due to the challenge the questions
posed to respondents. However, I was surprised by
the range of responses I received, and also by their
depth and honesty.
Examples of Logs
Sample 3
November: Brainstormed my topic
Christmas holidays: Found it difficult to motivate myself because of
my social life
March: Starting to panic because I went to the PIP day and I realised I
havent done much, so I did a survey.
April /May: My teacher asked me for a progress report and my diary
and told me ways to improve.
June: The deadline is near and I need to interview some people. Got
some info from the internet and printed it off.
Holidays: Started writing up my PIP
July: Handed a draft to my teacher
Examples of Conclusions
Sample 1
During my primary research I got involved with
people in my home town. Since moving to the city I
had lost touch, but this interaction changed my
view of country life from being slow and
unstimulating to seeing all the positives. The
infrastructure, facilities, education, job opportunities
and strength of community I investigated were
refreshing, however the reconnection with
relatives far outweighed any tangible
benefits.
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Examples of Conclusions
Sample 1 (cont)
I have learned to share the passion and loyalty my
interviewees expressed towards their country town,
and as a result I feel as though I have achieved
my aim of overcoming superficial prejudices of
both the town and its people.
Although I understand the desire to gain more
diverse life experiences that Sydney has to offer,
the PIP has opened my eyes to the enriching
experiences of a close and supportive community
that is my home town. As such, I would happily
move and raise a family in the place where my
values and my attitudes were established.
Examples of Conclusions
Sample 2
While media mythology continues to depict the
homeless as a single homogenous group, negative
stereotypes will continue to develop. Perhaps
volunteers can seek to dispel this myth.
So, is volunteering a big issue? The analysis and
synthesis of primary and secondary research
enabled me to gain a deeper understanding of
homelessness as a social issue.
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Examples of Conclusions
Sample 2 (cont)
I also have insight into the processes of
motivation for volunteerism and how this forms part
of the volunteers own socialisation process.
The personal experience of volunteering has
been invaluable. I started volunteering as a means
to an end for my PIP but the unmatched insight
provided me with more empathy than any other
methodology could have ever revealed. It is for this
reason I will continue to volunteer to work with
disenfranchised groups in need of help, in the
search for self actualisation.
Examples of Conclusions
Sample 3
The trauma caused by the Khmer Rouge has left
many survivors with life-lasting effects that I was
not aware of until I completed my interviews. I
was so surprised by the extent to which it impacted
them psychologically. I noticed that these
psychological impacts were symptoms of posttraumatic stress disorder, that many were not
diagnosed with, due to traditional cultural practises.
The tyranny of time and life in refugee camps
means a few of my interviewees are still
suffering severely from their trauma.
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Examples of Conclusions
Sample 3 (cont)
The journey that I have travelled over the past year
has been very cathartic but equally as
remarkable. Over the last few months in particular,
I have grown to sympathise with Cambodian
refugees to a greater degree because of the PIP
process. Research undertaken, the people Ive met
and the knowledge Ive gained has made this PIP a
unique experience.
This is my heritage, my family and my identity.