Helpful Teacher Reports From The UK Handout
Helpful Teacher Reports From The UK Handout
We have prepared this handout of actual Teacher Recommendations from secondary schools in the UK (with names changed for anonymity) in order to provide some guidance to teachers and administrators. Because the university admissions processes in the US and the UK are markedly different, we have received requests for some sample letters and tips for writing them and hope they will be helpful. In the admissions process at selective US universities like Harvard, we seek to learn more about the student than just his or her scores and grades. Academic accomplishment is important, but the Admissions Committee also considers many other criteria such as community involvement, leadership and distinction in extracurricular activities, and work experience. We rely on teachers, counselors, headmasters, and alumni/ae to share information with us about each applicants strength of character, ability to overcome adversity, and other personal qualities all of which play a part in the Admissions Committees decisions. Your insights into the students academic and personal strengths and weaknesses can be very helpful to us in making those decisions. Some additional tips: * Rather than completing each universitys individual recommendation form, feel free to write one overall letter for the student and send it to all of the universities, although you should attach it to the individual universitys form, if available, and check any appropriate boxes on the form. It may also be a good idea to pen in a line or two at the bottom of your letter, addressing yourself to the candidacy of the student to that particular university. * The strength of your written evaluation should be consistent with the boxes you have marked to rate the students overall academic, extracurricular, and personal promise. Does the actual impact of your letter equal your intended impact? * It can be helpful if you provide a context within which the students performance in your class can be evaluated. Give us an idea of the demands of your course, your standards, and how the student compares to others. * Be as specific as possible. For example, dont just write, Sally shows a perceptive understanding of sophisticated literature, but rather tell what her perceptions are about the literature and why that strikes you as noteworthy. * Feel free to provide your personal insight into a students academic performance, level of motivation, innate curiosity, and personal qualities. Again, the more specific you can be, the better. Dont hesitate to be anecdotal. * Write enough to provide a clear picture of the student, but dont overwrite. Quantity doesnt necessarily mean quality.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #3 - Sophia I have taught Sophia for both the AS and A2 components of the post-16 Chemistry course and she has proved to be an outstanding all-round scholar. She is an intellectually curious pupil who very carefully thinks through new ideas before asking highly perceptive and nuanced questions which cut to the very heart of the subject matter being discussed. She is a very rewarding person to teach, particularly for the look of delight on her face when she links a new concept into her already impressive framework of knowledge. Her written work is distinctive for its logical presentation of ideas. Practical work is undertaken with calm efficiency and her mathematical skills are equal to any challenge posed. As a scientist, Sophia offers that rare combination of bringing a rational, highly analytical approach coupled with a refreshingly creative streak. Her interest in her subjects extends far beyond the examination of syllabuses; we often have chats before and after lessons about the latest science book or article she is reading. One of these conversations particularly sticks in mind. Sophia had been reading some works of Steven Pinker on evolutionary psychology and I was extremely impressed by the insight she gained into this subject and the sophistication of the questions she was asking. Ultimately, she went on to write an extended essay on the evolution of the brain, mirror neurons and development of the human mind which won one of the schools prestigious prizes for intellectual excellence. Sophia will prove a most valuable asset in aspects of university life while rising to, indeed relishing, the academic challenges offered. I can recommend her to you without reservation.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #5 - Harry It gives me great pleasure to write to you about Harry. He is an extraordinary young man in many ways who has performed at a very high level in his varied activities for as long as I have known him a period of five years. But there is much more to Harry than just achievement; he is a real giver who supports the community in the boarding house in a selfless and caring manner. Harry is an intelligent young man who enjoys the cut and thrust of lively classroom discussion and writes confidently. He is also blessed with high levels of motivation and determination: this potent mix of attributes resulted in his excellent GCSE results and enables us confidently to predict him top grades for his A levels. Harry has always maintained a hectic extracurricular programme, but I have never known this to get in the way of his academic work, or his duties in the boarding house. His coach has written about his rowing, which has clearly been a major factor in his life, but the time this takes out has never prevented him looking for new avenues to explore. As an editor of the school monthly newspaper he has been an important part of the team, working to tight deadlines and often providing copy at the last minute. He has a fine speaking voice, which he used well in reaching the finals of our Declamations competition for three years in a row. He is a valued member of the school debating team. On one memorable occasion he made a speech in Chinese (a language that he has only recently started learning) to hundreds of people when on a visit to a school in Beijing. He has participated fully in the Duke of Edinburghs award scheme, attaining his silver and gold medals. These awards involve both challenging expeditions over four days and a large amount of charitable work. He received a Millennium award for undertaking more than 200 hours of community service. In the last holiday, Harry took part in a five week expedition to Costa Rica with a humanitarian organization. Most of the men and women on the trip were two or three years older than him, but he showed maturity beyond his years in leading his group on several occasions and learning to cope with some difficult, and sometimes treacherous, conditions. He recently gave an excellent power-point presentation of the trip in front of the boarding house. Harrys role in the House has mainly revolved around his prefectorial duties where he sets the highest standards. He is also a Mentor to two of the younger boys and here he has shown his warmth and understanding in helping them settle in during their first term or two. He helped to direct our junior play, which involved taking rehearsals on his own and organising the costumes, lighting and sound: something he did very efficiently and with clear artistic understanding. Therefore, Harry can be seen as a man of many parts and a master of many. He is totally reliable, always enthusiastic and has an outward looking and mature attitude to life. He is a young man with an outstanding future and I recommend him to you in the warmest possible terms.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #8 - Cameron Cameron is without question an absolutely outstanding student. Having moved from America to England at the beginning of Year 10, he gained A* in all nine subjects he took at GCSE, and took five subjects at AS Level, all of which he is taking on to A2. In conversation with him it very quickly becomes apparent how intelligent he is, but he is also very well read, and socially mature and responsible a natural leader. Cameron is highly unusual in that he studied at AS Level five subjects (instead of four, namely Economics, Mathematics, Physics, English Literature, and Further Mathematics (this last subject he is doing virtually independently as there is a timetable clash with English Literature). The key descriptor here is independently: Cameron is extraordinarily self-motivated, full of initiative, and entirely his own man, while being alert to and interested in others. In the summer after GCSEs, he won a place on a Harvard Summer School (where he gained 2 As in the Economics courses). He is considered here to be outstanding in Economics, and is already thinking independently (he reads the Economist in Form Registration!). His tutors agree that at AS he was way beyond the level of understanding for the course, and was already keen to understand the derivation of theories. They write that he challenges the assumptions on which theories are built, and can apply his knowledge to different contexts with ease. Because his analytical and evaluative skills are already well honed, he can differentiate the key factors that cause differing results. He is a problem-solver; he is able to see a solution very quickly and communicate it effectively. His written work is extremely fluent and coherent and always shows evidence of wider reading. He will flourish at A2 where the greater use of intricate theory in a far more applied manner will suit his curiosity and enjoyment of debate. Cameron is an excellent mathematician and is exhorted by his tutors to attain near perfection in his examinations. He has studied Further Mathematics virtually on his own, and regularly asks thought-provoking questions. He is very well motivated and freely gave of his time mentoring local Year 3 Primary School children gifted in Mathematics. Our Head of Mathematics describes Cameron as thoughtful, well rounded, interested, and well organized. In Physics, his tutors describe him as strong and well motivated in all aspects of the subject, a creative thinker with very high academic potential. In addition to his very high ability in these scientific and technical subjects, Cameron has a distinct flair for English Literature and the study of language generally. He is very quick to appreciate linguistic subtlety, and has delighted the class with his original and perceptive interpretations. He has very highly developed powers of analysis and rational synthesis; and his written work, while having a firm backbone of argument very well supported with cogent evidence, also shows the rarer qualities of sheer independence of mind, a sensitive sense of proportion, and a succinct elegance of style and diction. His behaviour in class is very impressive; he has a palpable effect on the rest of the (able) group because of the seriousness of his commitment to the subject; he combines intense concentration with a ready sense of humour; he contributes only when he has something which he think is worth saying, so that everything he offers is interesting and often highly
original. He initiates and leads discussion on key points, generously sharing his insights with the rest of the class; and because he listens carefully to others he can often build on their views and so make others feel that their contributions are useful. While he is exceptionally quick to spot flaws in an argument, he often manages to make his point with a deft touch of humour so that it easily commands consent. In summary, Cameron is an outstanding student on many fronts in this selective Grammar School. He has immense academic potential, but in addition he is a strong character who is admired by his peers and liked by most. He has developed very fine leadership qualities. He was voted Form Representative, a role which he carries out conscientiously, and he is a Peer Mentor. He exercises a stimulating and vibrant influence both in class and in the form group, who enjoy his sense of humour, and respect and want to emulate his abilities. It would be impossible for Cameron to be unaware of his gifts, but he behaves with a quiet modesty of demeanour, and while being very self-confident and intellectually sophisticated and challenging, is without intellectual arrogance and has a sense of fairness. His gravitas has been noted a word which exactly captures his poise and maturity though I would also wish to mention his urbanity (among other things he is widely traveled) and social ease. He has a close-knit group of friends of similar intellect. Cameron has said that he hopes that his main accomplishment here has been to make love of learning a more socially acceptable trait and he has certainly done that. He is very highly gifted across the sciences and the humanities a very energetic, ambitious, but also well-balanced individual. He won a place on the highly competitive and prestigious US Telluride Association Summer Programs. We expect him to apply to his native American Universities where he is ideally suited to appreciate the best opportunities that can be offered to him there. He will relish the freedom to study at his own pace, and in areas that challenge him. He will participate in his chosen program to the full, both to his own credit, and to that of the Institution, and to the benefit of his fellows. As his English Literature and Form Tutor, I consider him to be the most gifted student I have ever taught; he is better than an otherwise comparably outstanding student whom I once taught at the University of Oxford where I was a College Lecturer in the early 1980s a student who took a First Class Degree.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #9 - Martha I have taught Martha since she began Latin in year 8 and almost immediately she stood out as a very competent linguist. She grasped the finer points of Latin grammar with enviable alacrity. Her memory for vocabulary too has always been impressive. A quiet girl in her early years, the quietness could never have been ascribed to lack of confidence but rather to a circumspection which has served her well. Martha listens before she speaks and, as a consequence, when she does speak it is because she has something to say. As she has matured, Martha has emerged, even among the academic elite of this school, as a very special character. She is erudite beyond her years. She is well and widely read. She is witty. She has charisma in the most classical sense of grace. She is also, as was blindingly evident in her recent performance as the drummer in the band of the school play, very cool. Perhaps her most endearing characteristic, however, is that she seems as yet quite innocent of most of these qualities, remaining level headed and even modest about her achievements and abilities. Here at our school, a most traditional establishment, it is not easy to break out of a fairly narrow mould. Martha is doing this in the same quiet but utterly determined way that in my opinion she will do everything she sets his mind to do. I have predicted that she would gain a Grade A Latin A level since she took the subject as a GCSE. Her hard work and commitment to the subject combine with her natural abilities virtually to guarantee this. It is with the greatest pleasure and the utmost confidence that I recommend Martha to whichever of the worlds establishments of higher learning to which she applies.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #10 - Joseph Joseph is a quite exceptional student, one of the most talented students to have attended this very academic school in the last fifteen years. He is extremely able academically, literate, immensely well organized and highly motivated. He excels both academically and in extra-curricular activities, having recently won a gold medal in the Junior World rowing Championships in Beijing. Having achieved five very good A grades at AS Level, he is now predicted to gain high A grades in all his A Level subjects of Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry and Politics. Joseph achieved a very high A grade in his AS Level Maths exam in June (290/300) with full marks in his Mechanics paper. A highly talented mathematician, Joseph relishes a fast learning pace, quickly assimilating new ideas and applying them often flawlessly on paper. He combines a mature, positive approach with a close attention to detail and always makes a full contribution to the work of the group. Joseph brings his organized, thorough approach to Physics where he reads and studies beyond the specification. Logical and systematic, he performs practical work conscientiously and accurately and can bridge between different areas of the subject to synthesise knowledge. He shows pinpoint understanding of key principles. In Chemistry Joseph has developed into an incisive thinker, demonstrating considerable analytical ability. He has the critical ability to become a researcher. He questions keenly and incisively and a real strength is his ability to analyse critically his results and discard erroneous data. Joseph again brings a sharp, analytical mind to Government and Politics where he combines excellent subject knowledge with a desire to be well informed about current affairs, contributing thoughtfully and with good political judgment to class discussions. His Parties and Pressure Groups paper at AS Level scored 96/100 marks. Joseph achieved a High A in his AS Level Critical Thinking (271/300). In addition to his heavy rowing commitment this year he is Captain of Boats Joseph has been an excellent school prefect. He has regularly attended meetings of two of the Schools academic societies at which prominent speakers address students. Joseph is a thoroughly likeable, out-going young man who possesses enormous intellectual talent and who would certainly make the most of a place in higher education, contributing considerably to university life. He is unusually mature for his age and is hugely respected by his peers for his feats as an international oarsman and his sharp intellect. He has the resilience, stamina and independence that would be needed in a university abroad. I do not hesitate to give him my very strongest recommendation.
Helpful Teacher Recommendation #11 - Sean Sean joined our school five years ago having been awarded an academic scholarship. Since then he has excelled in every area of school life, and leaves us in a very strong position. Academically he is one of our strongest candidates in a Year Group of some 150 students, within a school which is highly academically selective. If he is unsuccessful in his application to Harvard, we are hopeful that he will be offered a place to read Philosophy and Theology at Oxford University. Further information on Seans academic profile can be found in the academic references submitted by his teachers. Away from his studies, too, Sean has enjoyed five immensely successful years at our school. His greatest achievements have been in rowing, a sport in which he is showing considerable promise for the future. We are currently the leading rowing school in the UK, and Sean has been one of our leading oarsmen throughout his time here, rowing in the 1st VIII for the last three years. Over and above this he has also rowed for Great Britain at Under 16 and Under 18 level, and also for Wales, and will be a strong candidate for selection to National Senior Rowing in due course. Sean has also taken part in a very wide variety of other activities, both athletic and other, and is impressive in that he manages to combine top-level rowing with strong academic performance and a healthy breadth of interest and involvement. He has sung in interhouse singing competitions, acted on the stage, played soccer and cricket. In this his final year, Sean was appointed a School Prefect, one of the top twenty students of the 150 in his year, with collective responsibility for helping with the day to day running of the school, and, importantly, meeting with the Headmaster and Senior Management Team on a weekly basis, to discuss school issues, advise with policy decisions and represent the views of fellow students. Over and above this, Sean is also Head of House in a boarding house of 60 students ranging in age form 13 to 18. In this role he is my key advisor and sounding board, and plays a leading role in the day to day running of the house and care of the students. It is a role he has fulfilled with exceptional maturity and dedication. He is seen by me and by my colleagues as an entirely reliable and helpful leader within the student body, and by fellow students as a role model, a caring advisor, and kind hearted elder brother figure. Modest, humorous, good fun and a very easy person to get on with, Sean is impressive also in his even temper and equanimity. I have never known him to lose his cool, to get carried away, or even to be anything less than his usual cheerful, cool, calm and collected self. His disciplinary record is squeaky clean: he has not put a foot wrong. Sean is an impressive all rounder, and all indications are that he still has not reached his ceiling. He will thrive at whatever university he ends up at, and will contribute vastly both academically and as an athlete. I am delighted to be able to recommend him to you.