Writingreference
Writingreference
Quick tip
Singular subjects need singular verbs, and plural subjects need plural verbs. (He runs. They run) Fragments are incomplete sentences. Usually correct them by removing the period and adding or connecting the main clause. Run-ons are two independent clauses which are joined together with no connecting word or punctuation to separate the clauses. Usually correct by adding in punctuation. Use the same pattern of words. Errors occur most often in a series. Check that all words are the same tense, have the same ending, or follow the same pattern. Active voice is preferred. In active voice the subject performs the action. (The dog bit the man.) In passive voice the action is performed on the subject. (The man was bit by the dog.) Do not change tense forms. Modifiers should come next to the word they modify ( refer to) (INCORRECT: Screaming all the way, the roller coaster thrilled us.) Reads as if the roller coaster is screaming. For possession, add s or just an apostrophe if the word ends in s (That is Jims bag. That is Ross bag) Pronouns (she, yourself, her, he, it, they, who, etc.) need to be clear about the word or words they are replacing. (INCORRECT:The restaurant prohibitted smoking, which many customers resented.) Do the customers resent the restaurant or smoking? Use a comma after an introductory phrase. (Determined to pass the test, we studied all night.) Compound sentences have two or more parts that can stand as their own sentences. If they are joined by a conjunction (FANBOYS: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) the use a comma before the conjunction. A nonrestrictive element is one that is not necessary to make basic meaning in a sentence. When these appear, use commas before and after. (John, who was a culinary student, prepared us a meal.)
Parrallel structure Active and passive voice Tense Shifts Misplaced/ dangling modifier Missing or misplaced possessive apostrophe Vague pronoun reference
Comma after introductory element Comma in a compound sentence Comma with a nonrestrictive element Comma splice Comma in a series
REMOVE
In my personal opinion As far as Im concerned In this paper I intend to I would like to say that I think I believe I suppose On the subject of In regards to As far as It should be noted that
TRY TO AVOID (add your own words to this list) There are (is, were, was) Very A lot So
Its = it is Its = possessive Whos = who is Whose =possessive To = preposition Too = also, excessive Youre = you are Your = possessive Theyre = they are Their = possessive There =place,abstract Then = time Than = comparison
Correct
Would have Could have Should have Used to All right A lot
allusion illusion bad badly between among breath breathe capital capitol compare to compare with complement compliment further farther good well lay lie less fewer much many principle principal real really whether if who whom
etc. e.g. i.e.
referencing something else a false vision or fantasy adjective (We own a bad dog) adverb (He plays tennis badly) shared by only two people or things shared by more than two people of things Noun (I can hold my breath.) Verb (I breathe in the smoke.) uppercase letters legislative body building similarity between the things compared similarity or difference to go well with a flattering statement (or act of making one) time or degree physical distance adjective- describes a noun adverb describes a verb when the subject acts on a direct object used when there is no direct object quantities that cannot be counted quantities that can be counted quantities that cannot be counted quantities that can be counted An idea, moral precept High rank,importance (the schools principal
is your pal)
QUICK TIPS for Improving STYLE Avoid cliches TAKE RISKS Provide details
Add imagery (use the senses) Replace abstract nouns with concrete nouns Focus on active verbs and precise nouns Avoid adjectives as much as possibleuse nouns that imply the description Avoid adverbs as much as possible o played loudly (use blared)
Specifically In fiction
CONFLICT CONFLICT CONFLICT Many new writers do not provide a conflict or their conflict is weak. Use the Somebody-Wanted-But-So formula to help develop a plot. Ex. Cinderella (somebody) wanted to go to the ball (wanted) but her jealous step-sisters and evil step-mother prevented her from going (so) her fairy godmother helped (but) she only had until midnightetc.