I was discussing with a friend at midnight trying to fix an art piece and a notification popped up which was your game lol, kinda wanted to play it right after but got tired so I decided to wake up early and play it in the morning instead, but then I ate breakfast while watching Clock's stream on accident and... It was quite an experience (if you know you know).
I can see some improvements on the artstyle in this new game, characters facial expressions has more details now, experimental or not, I think it'd turn out even better in later episodes. My only complaint would be Oliver's sprite needs to be slightly bigger during common dialogues (or maybe that's just his fluffy hair covering his face that makes me thing he's somehow smaller). Everything else is good (cuz well nothing bad happens yet lol).
And as usual here's my playthrough of the episode, I already played some other submissions for NanoReno this year but I think yours is the best! Good luck with the gamejam!