欣赏＋翻译《大地》欲与天高试比翼！

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《大地》
The Land
词 : 苏日塔拉图  (Lyrics : Suri Talatu)
曲 : 田明  (Music : Tian Ming)
唱 : 萨仁  (Singer : Saren)
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Lyrics：
(Translation with singability in mind.)
•————[ Stanzas 1, 3 ]  (Rhyme : aabb)————•
悠悠牧歌 深情把你唤起
Melodious idylls lovingly waken you,
滔滔江河 为你奔腾不息
Roaring rivers flow on non-stop for you.
辽远的天际 听风起云起
Winds and clouds roll on your broad horizon,
高原山林万里 全都是你
At vast forests and highlands, you are present.
•———————[ Stanzas 2, 4, 5 ]————————•
哎... / Eh...
雄鹰飞得再高 , 影子还在大地
Eagle may soar to great height, shadow's still on the land,
你用你的神奇 , 试与天高比翼
You dazzle the lofty sky, with your wonders so grand.
都说草原 是你的胎记
It's said the steppes are your birthmarks,
愿生命中 所有的情意..
Let all the love in life turn into rain,
化作雨 , 亲吻着你
Shower you with kisses from heart.
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Translated by
ck  2024-12-05
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Suggested English syllable allocation in the sentence corresponding to the Chinese version is noted below. Number at the end of a sentence denotes syllable count. I keep it close to the original such that it may be sung in the translated verse.
Lyrics：
•————————[ Stanzas 1, 3 ]————————•
悠悠 - 牧歌 - 深情把 - 你唤起 (10)
Melodious - idylls - lovingly - waken you, (11)
滔滔江河 - 为你 - 奔腾不息 (10)
Roaring rivers - flow on - non-stop for you. (10)
辽远的天际 - 听风起云起 (10)
Winds and clouds roll on - your broad horizon, (10)
高原山 - 林万里 - 全都是你 (10)
At vast forests - and highlands, - you are present. (11)
•———————[ Stanzas 2, 4, 5 ]————————•
哎... / Eh...
雄鹰飞得 - 再高 ,- 影子还在 - 大地 (12)
Eagle may soar to - great height, - shadow's still on - the land, (13)
你用你的 - 神奇 ,- 试与天高 - 比翼 (12)
You dazzle the - lofty sky, - with your wonders - so grand. (13)
都说草原 - 是你的 - 胎记 (9)
It's said the steppes - are your - birthmarks, (8)
愿生命中 - 所有的 - 情意.. (9)
Let all the love - in life turn - into rain, (10)
化作雨 ,- 亲吻 - 着你 (7)
Shower you - with kisses - from heart. (8)
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