欣赏＋翻译《巴拉格宗》神仙居住的地方

齐旦布, 兰卡措, 根呷, 多哇才吉, 扎西尼玛：


地理 : 巴拉格宗

《巴拉格宗》
 Balagezong*
词 : 昂旺文章  (Lyrics : Angwang Wenzhang)
曲 : 秋加措  (Music : Qiujiacuo)
唱 : 齐旦布, 兰卡措, 根呷, 多哇才吉, 扎西尼玛
      (Singers : Jinthan Po, Namkha Tso, 
       Kunga, Dowa Tsekyi, Tashi Nyima)
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Lyrics ：
(Translation with singability in mind.)
•————[ Stanzas 1, 4 ]  (Rhyme : abab)————•
远远的巴拉格宗
The far-off Balagezong,
在高高的雪山顶上
is high on the summits of snow.
近近的巴拉格宗
The near-by Balagezong,
在我心灵深处
is deep in my heart and soul.
•————[ Stanzas 2, 5 ]  (Rhyme : aaaa)————•
当我轻轻地走进你
When I walk into you softly,
就怕打破你的寂静
I'm afraid to disturb your peace.
当我轻轻地触摸你
When I touch you gently,
就怕碰碎你深藏的秀丽
I'm afraid to break your hidden beauty.
•——[ Stanza 3 • Interlude ]  (Rhyme : abcc)——•
噢 , 静静的巴拉格宗
Oh, the serene Balagezong,
我心中的圣地
The holy place in my heart.
在不知不觉中
Without me being aware,
已把我紧紧拥抱
You have me tightly embraced.
•—————[ Stanza 6 ]  (Rhyme : abcab)————•
噢 , 静静的巴拉格宗
Oh, the serene Balagezong,
我心中的圣地
The holy place in my heart,
让我默默地叩拜你
Let me quietly bow to you.
圣洁的巴拉格宗
The sacred Balagezong,
我心中美丽的家园
Beautiful homeland in my heart,
.. 心中的家园
.. homeland in my heart.
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Translated by
ck  2020-03-19
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* Balagezong : a Tibetan hamlet in a deep valley with breathtaking scenery, located in the northwestern region of Yunnan Province. “Bala” denotes the people there were originally from Batang county in western Sichuan province. “Gezong” in Tibetan means holy mountains. This place has been settled more 1300 years ago.
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Suggested English syllable allocation in the sentence corresponding to the Chinese version is noted below. Number at the end of a sentence denotes syllable count. I keep it close to the original such that it may be sung in the translated verse. 
Lyrics：
•————————[ Stanzas 1, 4 ]————————•
远远的 - 巴拉格宗 (7)
The far-off - Balagezong, (7)
在高高的 - 雪山顶上 (8)
is high on the - summits of snow. (8)
近近的 - 巴拉格宗 (7)
The near-by - Balagezong, (7)
在我 - 心灵深处 (6)
is deep in - my heart and soul. (7)
•————————[ Stanzas 2, 5 ]————————•
当我 - 轻轻地 - 走进你 (8)
When I - walk into - you softly, (8)
就怕 - 打破你的 - 寂静 (8)
I'm a - fraid to disturb - your peace. (8)
当我 - 轻轻地 - 触摸你 (8)
When I - touch you - gently, (6)
就怕 - 碰碎你 - 深藏的秀丽 (10)
I'm a - fraid to break - your hidden beauty. (10)
•——————[ Stanza 3 • Interlude ]——————•
噢 , 静静的 - 巴拉格宗 (8)
Oh, the serene - Balagezong, (8)
我心中的 - 圣地 (6)
The holy place - in my heart. (7)
在不知 - 不觉中 (6)
Without me be - ing aware, (7)
已把我 - 紧紧拥抱 (7)
You have me - tightly embraced. (7)
•—————————[ Stanza 6 ]—————————•
噢 , 静静的 - 巴拉格宗 (8)
Oh, the serene - Balagezong, (8)
我心中的 - 圣地 (6)
The holy place - in my heart, (7)
让我 - 默默地 - 叩拜你 (8)
Let me - quietly - bow to you. (8)
圣洁的 - 巴拉格宗 (7)
The sacred - Balagezong, (7)
我心中 - 美丽的 - 家园 (8)
Beautiful - homeland in - my heart, (8)
.. 心中的家园 (5)
.. homeland in my heart. (5)
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