Can You Tell a Story in 55 Words?

For her “Can You Tell a Story In…” prompt today, Esther Chilton has challenged us to tell a 55-word story using the words wheel, cruel, soak, labyrinth, yellow, and crab.

The yellow wheel spun wildly before snapping off of Eddie’s little red wagon, sending it crashing into the labyrinth of tidepools. Saltwater began to soak his jeans as an indifferent crab skittered by. As the tide rapidly came in and submerged his wagon, adding insult to injury, he muttered, “That’s just cruel,” dragging himself upright.


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SoCS — Opposites

When Linda G. Hill asked us to use the word “opposites” or write about things that are opposites for this week’s Stream of Consciousness Saturday prompt, I immediately thought about when we brought home two dogs who were litter mates years ago in the late Eighties.

These were both Labrador retriever puppies, about eight weeks old, when we brought them home. They weren’t pure bred Labs, but seemed to be mostly Lab. Little did we know how opposite to one another they would turn out to be.

One, the female, was a chocolate Lab. The male was a yellow Lab. He was sweet, affectionate, and mellow. She was high strung, ditsy, and nervous. He was a homebody who rarely seemed to want to leave the house or wander away from the yard. She was an escape artist and a runner. Any time anyone would open a door she would try to run out of the house and would literally run until she dropped.

He was motivated by food and treats and would respond whenever we shook the biscuit box. She seemed to be relatively uninterested in treats. He always wanted to be around us, close to us, and would either snuggle next to us when my wife and I were on the couch watching TV or would drape his 80 pound body across the two of us. She rarely sat near us and more often than not, would pace back and forth or go lie down in the corner when we watched TV.

Our dogs lived to the ripe old ages (for large breed dogs) of 14 (the male) and 15 (the female). They were opposites, but we loved them both and still miss them terribly.

Total Eclipse of the Moon

BAC5010C-BC9D-464D-A383-3314F09EE39DWhat is the nature of your trickery?
You are clearly using some form of witchery!
You have made the moon in the sky disappear,
Causing all of us to cry and cower in fear.
What demon tool is it that you use,
To make us all behave like fools?
Be warned that you have made a grave mistake,
And we are going to burn you at the stake.

You cannot burn me, don’t even try,
If you want your yellow boulder to shine in the sky.
It’s no witches trick that I implement.
Such a deception was never my intent.
I am a person of astronomy and so I allege,
That the moon will return if you watch the edge.
Returning your moon to you, that’s my thing,
And then you will bow down to me and kiss my ring.


Written for Paula Light’s Three Things Challenge, where the three things are “kiss,” “boulder,” and “yellow.” And for Teresa’s Story Starter Challenge using the phrase “watch the edge.” And finally for these daily prompts: Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (trickery),  Word of the Day Challenge (moon), Ragtag Daily Prompt: (tool), and Your Daily Word Prompt (implement). Photo credit: biancamentil@Pixabay.com.