Thursday Inspiration — A Sanctuary for Teenage Angst

For this week’s Thursday Inspiration prompt, Jim Adams has given us the word “place” and asked us to repond by writing about retreating into a secluded, private space to heal, find solace, and re-engage with one’s own life.

I came up with this tale, which might sound familiar to many of you.

At sixteen, everything in Brian’s life felt mislabeled. Friends he’d known since kindergarten now spoke a language of inside jokes and shifting loyalties he didn’t understand. His parents asked careful questions that sounded more like accusations. Even his reflection seemed slightly off, as if the mirror was lagging behind whoever he was becoming.

One Thursday afternoon, after a day at school that made him feel like he was walking through fog, Brian bypassed the kitchen, ignored the hum of the television in the living room, and went straight to his bedroom. He closed the door softly, then firmly, until the latch clicked like a period at the end of a long, exhausting sentence.

His small, cluttered room was undeniably his. Posters on the wall over his bed, dog-eared books in a bookcase, empty soda cans on his desk next to his laptop, and the familiar dent in his pillows on his bed.

He lay back on the bed and let the quiet settle over him. No expectations. No interpretations. Just the faint whir of his ceiling fan and the steady rhythm of his breathing.

Slowly, the fog thinned. He picked up his guitar, fingers stumbling at first, then finding a chord progression he’d almost forgotten. The notes filled the room, warm and imperfect. Then the words formed in his mind and he mouthed them, barely a whisper.

There’s a world where I can go and tell my secrets to. In this world I can lock out all my worries and my fears. It may dark, I may be alone, but I won’t be afraid…
In my room
.

In that private, ordinary sanctuary, Brian began stitching himself back together, one quiet moment at a time.


Image conjured using ChatGPT.

Friday Fictioneers — The Clubroom

The clubroom at the senior living center was their sanctuary from the reality of their situations. The bookcase shelves were stocked with board games that transported them, at least temporarily.

Hank traced the spine of Catan, remembering yesterday’s victory. Across the room, Betty giggled at the new quote of the day on the whiteboard.

“Who’s up for Risk?” Vince asked, shaking the box.

“Are you ready to lose again?” Michael shot back.

As the clock blinked 1:41 pm, time melted into dice rolls and debates. The world outside was chaotic, but here, in their clubroom, friendship ruled the board.

(100 words)


Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ Friday Fictioneers prompt. Photo credit: Jennifer Pendergast.

50 Word Thursday — Sanctuary

F95EF0E0-C9A1-43B9-9145-AB600AAEF1F7“Why did you bring me here?” Miss Wonderly asked in a hushed voice.

“I love it here. It gives me comfort and joy. It’s my sanctuary, it offers me peace, and I wanted to share this place with you,” Miss Anthrope answered.

Miss Wonderly murmured, “Thank you,” softly as before and sat down on the edge of the chair’s wooden seat. “But you know I don’t believe, don’t you?” she said.

“That’s okay. I just felt the need to share this with you. Can’t you feel His presence?

“Feel whose presence?”

“God’s presence, silly girl.”

“Sorry, but no, I don’t.”

(100 words)


Written for this week’s 50 Word Thursday prompt from Kristian at Tales From the Mind of Kristian. The idea is to use the image above (unattributed), along with the lines, “Miss Wonderly murmured, ‘Thank you,’ softly as before and sat down on the edge of the chair’s wooden seat,” from Dashiell Hammett’s The Maltese Falcon and to write a post that must be between 50 and 250 words, in 50 word increments.


 

The Agony and the Ecstacy

73904F3D-7A36-4D5B-A5A2-AD0D8889E7D9The cacophony of the street sounds exacerbated the intensity of my migraine. I continued along the urban road until I finally reached the sanctuary of my home. Once inside, I prayed that the agony inside my head would subside and that I would finally achieve some relief.

You were waiting for me and immediately sensed my suffering. “Sit down,” you said. “I will summon up some magic with my fingers.” I did as you instructed and slowly lowered myself into my favorite easy chair. You positioned yourself behind me told me to close my eyes and think of nothing. And then, in your special, sensual way, you began the massage.

It was ecstacy.


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Photo Credit: Andrei Lazarev — Unsplash