Simply 6 Minutes — Mission Accomplished

Through the sight, the village looks gentle, a toy town cradled in the lap of mountains. Children scatter like marbles across cobblestones, mothers barter for bread, a man in a blue coat laughs too loudly.

I adjust the dial.

The timber-framed inn becomes my cathedral, its windows lit with midday hush. Wind sings against the barrel, steadying breath becomes prayer.

He steps into view, the target shaped by sun and shadow, just another part of the scenery until he’s not.

My finger waits, half a thought from forever. I see them all, living their lives, never knowing how close death leans or how the world narrows to a heartbeat and a crosshair.

I breathe in and hold it.
I pull the trigger.
He falls.
Mission accomplished.


Written for Christine Bialczak’s Simply 6 Minutes Challenge.

A note from the author: when I saw this image I imagined a sniper’s eye view and what goes through his mind as he looks through the scope of his rifle searching for and finally pinpointing his target.

FFfAW — Pull

B8F45964-7C00-42C2-8335-79A305E063D0“Omigod, Hank. You couldn’t hit the floor if you fell out of bed,” Jimmy said, trying to control his laughter.

“Pull!” yelled a determined Hank. As the clay pigeon became airborne, Hank pumped the shotgun, took aim, and fired. Once again, he missed the target. “Dammit,” he said.

“With aim like that,” Jimmy said, “I pity your wife when she has to clean the floor around your toilet.”

“Hey, cut the dude some slack, Jimmy,” Mike said. “This is his first time going skeet shooting.”

“Yeah, Jimmy,” Hank said. “How many targets did you hit your first time?”

“Every damn one, Hank,” Jimmy answered.

“That’s a load of bullshit, Jimmy,” Hank replied.

“Oh yeah? Watch this.” Jimmy yelled, “Pull!” and as the clay pigeon catapulted across the sky, he pumped the shotgun, tracked the disc, and fired. The target broke into tiny pieces.

Hank was enraged. He turned toward Jimmy, raised the shotgun, aimed it at him, and said, “Who’s the clay pigeon now, asshole?” as he pumped the barrel. “Pull!”

(171 words)


Written for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers prompt from Priceless Joy. Photo credit: Yinglan.