Fandango’s Story Starter #255

It’s once again time for my Story Starter prompt.

Here’s how it works. Every week I’m going to give you a “teaser” sentence or sentence fragment and your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to build a story (prose or poetry) around that sentence/fragment. It doesn’t have to be the first sentence in your story, and you don’t even have to use it in your post at all if you don’t want to. The purpose of the teaser is to spark your imagination and to get your storytelling juices flowing.

This week’s Story Starter teaser is:

She had followed the woman for days and at last her patience was paying off.

If you care to write and post a story built from this story starter teaser, be sure to link back to this post and tag your post with #FSS. I would also encourage you to read and enjoy what your fellow bloggers do with their stories.

And most of all, have fun.

Weekend Writing Prompt — Blood or Money

The rain wrote crooked lines on the windshield while I tailed a man who looked like trouble wearing a cheap hat. The dame who hired me said it was about money, but my sensibility told me it was blood.

He turned down a dead alley, and I followed. When I stepped out, he raised his hands slowly.

“Relax,” he said. “I know the bitch is having me followed. She’ll get what’s coming to her very soon.”


Written for Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt, where the challenge is “sensibility” in exactly 76 words. Image conjured using Gemini.

WDYS — Behind the Rain-speckled, Foggy Glass Window

I am not a stalker, I swear to God I’m not. But when Maggie told me she couldn’t go out tonight to grab a bite to eat with me as we had planned, I asked her why not. She said she had some stuff she needed to take care of, and her vague answer made me suspicious.

I drove to her house and parked my car up the block and out of sight. Not so much to follow her when she left to “take care of stuff,” but just to make sure she was going to be okay. After all, it was rainy and a little foggy and I was naturally worried for her.

A few minutes after I got to her block a car pulled up and honked its horn in front of her house. The house door open and Maggie ran to the car and jumped into the passenger seat. It was too dark for me to get a good look at the driver, but I’d bet my bottom dollar it was some dude.

I followed them into town and I saw them park the car in the lot behind the diner. I saw him — definitely a dude — get out of the car, walk around and open the door for her. Shit, I never do that for her. They ran quickly into the diner to keep from getting soaked. I parked my car across the street from the diner and I saw them take a booth by the front window.

The rain-speckled glass on the outside and slightly fogged over on the inside made the two figures at the table look like ghosts caught between worlds. The neon lights from the street outside bled across the condensation in bruised hues of purple and green. From inside my car, I watched two silhouettes lean toward each other, their gestures sharp, their words lost to the pane.

They could have been lovers, plotting how Maggie could dump me and he could dump his girlfriend or maybe even his wife. But given from what could see through the rain and the mist, they could also have been enemies bargaining through clenched teeth, forcing civility in a public space. The guy leaned forward, hand curled like a fist beneath his chin, while Maggie reclined, her posture taut but measured. Their legs crossed and uncrossed, betrayed a restless current between them.

The windows in my car started to fog up from my breathing and the rain had settled into a fine mist, so I stepped out and onto the sidewalk next to the curb to try to get a better view.

I wondered if they knew how cinematic they looked from where I was watching. I was mesmered by the poetry of their blurred outlines framed in a window dripping with light and water, as though the world itself wanted to remember them in oil and canvas.

A taxi hissed by, spraying the curb. I shivered, though not from the cold. There was something in their stillness, the way neither seemed willing to leave, that tightened the air. Perhaps it was nothing — just two people sharing a meal on a wet night. Or perhaps, behind the fog, a choice was being made that would splinter their lives — or mine — in two.

I didn’t stay to see how it ended. I was actually feeling ashamed of myself for having followed her here. I headed home, showered to take the damp chill off my bones, and fell asleep thinking that some stories are better left unfinished, their secrets locked behind a diner’s rain-speckled, foggy window.


Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Egor Myznik @ Unsplash.

Fandango’s Flashback Friday — June 13th

Wouldn’t you like to expose your newer readers to some of your earlier posts that they might never have seen? Or remind your long term subscribers of posts that they might not remember? Each Friday I will publish a post I wrote on this exact date in a previous year.

How about it? Why don’t you reach back into your own archives and highlight a post that you wrote on this very date in a previous year? You can repost your Flashback Friday post on your blog and pingback to this post. Or you can just write a comment below with a link to the post you selected.

If you’ve been blogging for less than a year, go ahead and choose a post that you previously published on any day this past year and link to that post in a comment.


I’m going to do something I’ve never done before on Flashback Friday. I’m going to feature two posts I wrote on June 13, 2018. I liked them both and was having trouble picking just one. So I decided to use them both.

Here they are:

100 Word Wednesday — Graduation Revelation

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“Your mother must be very proud of you,” a woman I didn’t know said to me.

“Yes, I suppose she is,” I politely responded and started to walk away to get lost in the crowd. But before I could, she grabbed me by my wrist.

“So what are your plans?” she asked me.

“I’m sorry,” I said. “Do I know you?”

She gave me a very sad look. “No, not really.”

“Then leave me alone,” I said.

“I did that once already,” she said. “I won’t do it again.”

“What are you talking about?” I asked.

“I’m your birth mother.”

(100 words)


Written for today’s 100 Word Wednesday prompt from Bikurgurl.


FFfPP — Wholesome Looking

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I wasn’t stalking her. Well, not exactly. When she entered the lobby of the building, I have to admit I was immediately smitten. It wasn’t so much that she was beautiful. She was just so wholesome looking. Clean, fresh, almost no makeup.

Unlike most of the women who worked here. They were like painted ladies. Lots of eye makeup, false eyelashes, blush on their cheeks, bright red lipstick, coiffed hair, dressed to the nines.

No, this one was different. Since I’d never seen her in the building before, I decided to follow her, to see what floor she worked on. That way I’d know where to find her.

She took the escalator down from the lobby to the garage level and headed toward the parking garage, which was strange because she’d just entered the lobby from the outside moments before.

I wanted to catch her before she left the building to introduce myself, so I ran down the escalator and got to her just as she was entering the garage. I touched her shoulder and that’s when she turned around and sprayed mace into my eyes.

“This creep was stalking me,” she told the police officer as he cuffed me.

(197 words)


Written for Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practioner from Roger Shipp. Photo credit: Kaique Rocha pexels-photo-125532 escalator.

FFfPP — Wholesome Looking

img_1560I wasn’t stalking her. Well, not exactly. When she entered the lobby of the building, I have to admit I was immediately smitten. It wasn’t so much that she was beautiful. She was just so wholesome looking. Clean, fresh, almost no makeup.

Unlike most of the women who worked here. They were like painted ladies. Lots of eye makeup, false eyelashes, blush on their cheeks, coiffed hair, dressed to the nines.

No, this one was different. Since I’d never seen her in the building before, I decided to follow her, to see what floor she worked on. That way I’d know where to find her.

She took the escalator down from the lobby to the garage level and headed toward the parking garage, which was strange because she’d just entered the lobby from the outside moments before.

I wanted to catch her before she left the building to introduce myself, so I ran down the escalator and got to her just as she was entering the garage. I touched her shoulder and that’s when she turned around and sprayed mace into my eyes.

“This creep was stalking me,” she told the police officer as he cuffed me.

(197 words)


Written for Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practioner from Roger Shipp. Photo credit: Kaique Rocha pexels-photo-125532 escalator.