Simply 6 Minutes — The Wannabe Writer

He walked the long path every afternoon, hoping the fog would finally give him something — an image, a phrase, a spark. Anything. The trees rose like dark parentheses around him, holding in the silence. His notebook stayed tucked under his arm, accusing him with its blank, uncreased pages. He was a wannabe writer, and lately even the word wannabe felt generous.

The fog thickened as he moved, swallowing the world in soft gray. It reminded him too much of his own mind. How dense, unmoving, impossible to navigate it felt to him. Every idea he chased dissolved the moment he reached for it. Characters blurred. Plots evaporated. Sentences collapsed into mist. He felt as if he were walking inside his own writer’s block, trapped in a weather system he couldn’t outthink.

He tried tricks, like prompts, rituals, coffee strong enough to wake the dead. But nothing cut through. The fog stayed. The silence stayed. The blank page stayed.

Yet today, something tugged at him. A faint shimmer in the distance, like a lantern behind the haze. He followed it, heart thudding, unsure whether it was real or just another imagined breakthrough that would vanish when he blinked.

But it didn’t vanish. It sharpened.

A figure emerged. It reminded him of himself, or someone like him. The figure was walking toward him with purpose, not hesitation. The figure carried a small flame cupped in both hands, its glow slicing through the mist.

As they passed each other, the flame leapt — quick, bright, alive — and landed in his chest.

He stopped. Opened his notebook.

And for the first time in months, the fog thinned.


Written for Christine Bialczak’s Simply 6 Minutes prompt. The photo is unattributed.

And even though this was not written as a Stream of Consciousness post, it does contain the word “spark,” which is what Linda G. Hill’s SoCS prompt word was yesterday. And as long as I am breaking the rules, this did take me more than six minutes to write.

WDYS — A Target on My Back

A light coating of snow and freezing rain slicked the platform, turning steel and concrete into frosted mirrors that told the truth whether you liked it or not. The train hissed in, tired and late, like it had secrets to unload. Don’t we all?

He told me to wait under the rusted girders, where the lights flickered and the cameras pretended not to see. Funny thing about cameras — they never blink, but they miss plenty. I pulled my collar up and watched the mist swallow the tracks, each rail a thin promise going nowhere good.

The train’s doors slid open. She was supposed to be on this train, he told me. Red coat. Cheap perfume. Troubled dark eyes. Instead, all I got were commuters with faces stamped from the same gray mold, clutching briefcases like alibis. The train exhaled its living drones, nobody looking back. Soon, the doors closed and the train pulled away, taking its answers with it. I stood still, watching the fog swallow up the departing train.

I lit a cigarette I didn’t need and thought about the call that started this mess. His voice was like gravel in a glass, saying her name like a confession. She’d apparently crossed the wrong people, and now everyone wanted her found. Each for different reasons. He needed to find her first.

In professions like mine, you don’t always catch what you’re chasing. And in this case, I was okay with that. I didn’t know what the dame did, but I felt sorry for her. Turning her over to a fate that I am sure would be about as pleasant as a stick in the eye was not an assignment I should have accepted in the first place.

But while I was not that bothered about her being a no show on that train, I knew that the guy who hired me was not the type to be trifled with. I worried that I had just painted a target on my own back.


Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Tobias Reich @ Unsplash.

MFFFC — An Ungrateful Bitch

The tulip lay broken on the weathered bridge, its soft, pink petals a stark contrast to the unforgiving gray planks. Luke had brought it to Allison, a small gesture of affection after a long argument. He had hoped it would mend what was broken between them.

She laughed at him, a mocking laugh, with a cruel, sharp edge that cut him deeper than any words. “A single tulip?” she sneered. “Not even a rose?” She threw it down hard and it bounced once, then rolled, coming to rest near the edge of the bridge.

Luke watched her walk away, her figure a dark silhouette against the blurred, mist covered bridge. “Allison, wait!” he called out, but she kept on walking until she disappeared in the fog. Luke knelt, his fingers tracing the soft curve of the petals, a silent apology to the small, wilted blossom.

It was only then that he had felt the subtle vibration in his pocket, the buzzing of his phone. He was sure Allison had a change of heart, but the text was from an unknown number.

“She’s an ungrateful bitch. You’re better off without her. ♥️♥️♥️”


Written for Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge. Photo credit: Jonathan Cooper on Unsplash.

Fandango’s Flashback Friday — August 1st

Wouldn’t you like to expose your newer readers to some of your earlier posts that they might never have seen? Or remind your long term subscribers of posts that they might not remember? Each Friday I will publish a post I wrote on this exact date in a previous year.

How about it? Why don’t you reach back into your own archives and highlight a post that you wrote on this very date in a previous year? You can repost your Flashback Friday post on your blog and pingback to this post. Or you can just write a comment below with a link to the post you selected.

If you’ve been blogging for less than a year, go ahead and choose a post that you previously published on any day this past year and link to that post in a comment.


This was originally posted on August 1, 2019

#writephoto — The Fog

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Ted was taking his early morning jog along the paved path that cuts through the center of the park. He loved this part of his run, with the trees lining both sides of the path and a canopy of green leaves overhead. At this time of the year, the rising sun was casting long shadows across the path.

Like every other morning, there were just a few other regulars jogging in the opposite direction who Ted would acknowledge with a head nod or a hand wave as they passed one another.

Ted noticed an unusual mist up ahead. More than a mist, really. A fog bank, actually. He chalked it up to the morning dew condensing and didn’t give it much thought until he saw one of the joggers heading his way out of the fog. The man was stumbling a little and was clutching his chest. The man finally fell to his knees and Ted thought he might be having a heart attack.

Rushing over to the man, who was still on his knees, Ted could see a look of desperate panic in his eyes. “Is it your heart?” Ted asked.

The man, who was having difficulty breathing, shook his head, pointed back to the fog from which he had just emerged, and, in a raspy voice said, “Turn around. Run.” With that, the man fell flat, unconscious.

Ted pulled out his cellphone and dialed 9-1-1. “There’s a man on the path in the park who needs emergency assistance. Please send someone immediately.” Knowing that there was nothing further he could do to help the man, Ted stood up and moved slowly toward the mist.

As he got closer, he could see the bodies of a few other joggers along the path. They all seemed lifeless. His instincts told him to turn around, but his curiosity drove him forward.

Within minutes he was surrounded by the dense fog and his breathing was becoming labored. He saw some sort of dark, shadowy figure with red eyes coming toward him through the mist. He squinted his eyes to try and decipher what he was seeing, but what he saw didn’t make any sense to him.

Ted tried to turn around and run, but his body was frozen in place. Then he heard what he could only describe as some strange, piercing, banshee-like scream, just before losing consciousness.

******

Waking up in what appeared to be a hospital room, Ted found a call button and pressed it. Three dark figures with red eyes floated into the room.

“Ah, you’re finally awake. We thought we lost you,” one of them said.

“The lesson learned is that we will have to limit our agents to no more than one year of infiltration,” another said.

“Exactly,” a third one said. “You were there for two Earth years, THRG, and we almost lost you to the human life form you were inhabiting. Fortunately, our extraction team pulled you out just in time to save you.”


Written for this week’s Thursday Photo Prompt from Sue Vincent.

OMIMM — The Night Visitors

When the night fog settles over the streets of Whitechapel, it can feel a little creepy. Nevertheless, the lamplighters move with purpose, their steps echoing through alleyways stained with old secrets. But no lamp could pierce the gloom of Bracken Hollow, a narrow crescent lane absent from all maps and whispered of only in hushed tones. It was there, on the last Sunday of October 1897, that the three gentlemen appeared.

Clad in black suits of an older fashion and wearing towering stovepipe hats, they walked in silent step, their faces shadowed beneath brims too wide, their presence chilling the air like frost crawling across glass. No one saw them arrive. No carriage, no footprints in the mud. Only the sound of cane tips tapping cobblestone, deliberate and too perfectly timed.

Old Mrs. Hardwick, a widow of some seventy years, swore up and down that they came to her door once, asking for tea in voices like wind through reeds. She turned them away that night, but on the very next night she let them in. By morning, her home was cold and still, her body untouched, but the expression on her face was frozen in a grimace of knowing.

Over the next few weeks, five more households fell silent, shutters closed forever. The police officers who entered Bracken Hollow did not return, and soon, the city simply grew up around the lane, folks pretending it had never existed.

But some nights, when the mist rises thick and the moon has a faceless grin, you might hear of sightings of three tall figures with high hats and hollow eyes, watching from a place you can’t quite reach. They are the final visitors.

And once they’ve called on you, it is said, the silence never leaves.


Written for Mike Jackson’s Only Murders In My Mind Weekly Writing Prompt. Image credit: no attribution. (Sorry to have exceeded the suggested word limit of 250 words by about 45 words, but once I started writing I was on a roll.)

OLWG #416 — No Way Out

A heavy fog rolled in, cloaking the jagged coastline just below Alamo Bay in a ghostly mist. Jonah waited near the old clocktower, his nerves on edge.

A shadow emerged from the fog. Elena moved like a phantom, familiar yet faintly frightening. “Did you bring the diamond?” she asked, her voice low, and gravely, probably from years of chain smoking cigarettes.

Jonah pulled out a small velvet pouch and held it out. “I kept my word.”

She hesitated before taking it, her eyes scanning the horizon like she expected someone, or perhaps something, to interrupt. She opened the pouch, peered inside, and nodded. “Good, our employer will be pleased.”

“I want out, Elena” Jonah said. “This ends tonight. I can’t do this anymore.”

Elena laughed, short and humorless. “There’s no way out. You work for the wrong people. You do as you’re instructed and everyone will be happy. Making waves will not be good for your health.”

“This was a mistake. I should never have listened to you. I’m in over my head.”

“It’s too late, Jonah. You made your bed and now you have to sleep in it,” Elena said. “And as for regrets, there’s no medicine for that.”

Elena leaned over and kissed Jonah on the cheek. “I’m sorry. There is nothing that I can do.” She turned and walked away, the fog swallowing her silhouette until only her footsteps remained, crunching over gravel, fading into silence.

Jonah stood alone, the weight of his actions pressing down on his chest. He looked toward the black waters of Alamo Bay, where secrets drowned but never died, and wondered if anything could ever wash clean what he’d done.


This post is in response to a prompt from TN Kerr at The New Unofficial Online Writer’s Guild. TN’s prompt is called OLWG and he posts two, three, or more prompt words or phrases from his vast collection of writing prompts weekly. Our task is to choose one of them, choose all of them, or choose none of them and incorporate them into a story or poem. This week, his prompts are:

1. just below Alamo Bay
2. Did you bring the diamond?
3. no medicine for that


Image credit: leonardo.ai.

Friday Fictioneers — The Prodigal Son

The fog swallowed the East River like a secret, cloaking the Brooklyn Bridge in silence. Ellen stood at the edge, coat wrapped tight, watching the world blur.

She and her teenage son had a falling out five years earlier, something from which there was no going back. She thought she had lost her only child and that she’d never hear from him again.

She’d read the letter again: “Home soon. Wait by the bridge.” The mist thickened, but she waited, heart tethered to hope. Then, through the gray, a shadow, slowly forming. She smiled. He had found his way back.

(100 words)


Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ Friday Fictioneers prompt. Photo credit: Roger Bultot.

WDYS — Mysterious Cloud

“Dad, can we go swimming today at East Sussex?” Ian asked his father.

“Actually, Ian, I was just reading in the morning paper that a chemical cloud hovered over the East Sussex coastline yesterday. It was dense enough to obliterate the nearby lighthouse from view and, as of now, it’s still a mystery, with officials saying it is unclear what caused the fog or what it was composed of,” Ian’s father, Matthew said.

“Oh, that’s so cool,” Ian said. “I want to go see the mystery cloud. Can we, please?”

“I don’t think so, Ian,” Matthew said. “The paper said that the cloud has lifted, but beachgoers yesterday were experiencing stinging eyes, sore throats, and even vomiting. So the authorities are advising people to stay out of the water while the source of the chemical cloud is being investigated.”

“So the cloud is gone and we can’t even go swimming,” Ian whined.

“No, I’m afraid not,” Matthew said. “It’s better to be safe than sorry, son.”

“Somebody must know what caused it,” Ian said.

“There are some possible causes that the experts are looking into,” Matthew said. “The cloud could have been caused by an accidental discharge of chemicals at water treatment plants. Or it might be due to airborne toxins from algae blooms. Some experts have suggested that, because the cloud was close to the ground, it was composed of a gas heavier than air, noting that chlorine gas meets that profile and is a known irritant. But without knowing what the fog was actually composed of, it’s difficult to investigate further.”

“I know where the cloud that made people sick came from,” Ian said. “It’s as clear as day.”

“Okay then, Ian, if you know what caused it, please tell me so that we can tell the authorities,” Matthew said.

Ian got a conspiratorial look on his face and whispered in his Dad’s ear, “Aliens from outer space,” he said. “This is the beginning of an alien invasion.”


Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Elias Kipfer @ Unsplash.

Five Word Weekly Challenge — The Skydive

“The fog is coming in heavy,” the flight controller in the tower said to the pilot. “It’s a barrier to safe jumps, even if you have them wearing orange jumpsuits for visibility. I think you should, for various reasons, over and above the fog, cancel the skydiving run and return to the airfield while you still can.”


Written for Greg’s Five Word Weekly Challenge, where the words are: various | tower | barrier | jumpsuit | fog

#WDYS — Into the Woods

Her daughter had offered to pick her up, but Helen said it wouldn’t be necessary. It wasn’t that long of a walk and Helen knew the path through the woods very well. But the sun started setting earlier these days and then fog set in, and Helen got confused.

As the fog thickened around her, enveloping her in a cold mist, she realized that she was lost and she started to panic, wondering if she’d see her daughter and grandchildren ever again. She started to sob.

She was startled when she heard the voice. “May I be of assistance?” the deep voice asked. Helen turned around to see a very old, hunched over man. He was rather creepy looking once he got close enough for her to see his features through the fog, and his breath was rancid.

“No thank you,” Helen said, “I’m on my way to visit my daughter and her husband and I must have gotten turned around in the fog, but I think I’ve got my bearings now.” She lied, but she was frightened by this strange man who emerged from the thick fog out of nowhere.

Suddenly Helen felt his gnarly fingers grab her hand and squeeze hard enough that she couldn’t get out of his grip. “Come with me,” he said, “I will take you where you need to be.” Then he pulled her hand.

“No!” Helen screamed, standing her ground. “Let go of me.” But the man’s grip further tightened around her hand.

The sound of a barking dog could be heard coming closer to where Helen and the man were standing. Then a woman’s voice. “Mom? Mom?”

Then a man’s voice. “Helen, is that you? Are you all right?”

The man holding Helen’s hand loosened his grip, turned around, and vanished into the fog right before Max, her daughter’s German Shepherd reached Helen, followed momentarily by her daughter and son-in-law. “Mom, we got worried when you didn’t arrive when we expected you. You seem a little shaken. What happened?”

“Nothing, sweetheart,” Helen lied. “It’s the fog. It came in so quickly and so thick. I became a little disoriented, but I’m fine. But I think next time, I’ll accept your offer to come get me and give me a lift.”


Written for Sadje’s What Do You See prompt. Photo credit: Shahzin Shajid @ Unsplash.