WARNING THIS WILL GET A LITTLE LONG
Hi my name is Rayven :3 I found this community through more_then_one. And I think this would be a great place to get some feedback for some of the artsy things i like to dabble in, mianly music a little bit of drawing and a lot of writing. Last night I was messing around with some synth pads in Grage band and made this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wg_-97xdaLo this is the first time I've made a song using this program, please tell me what you think.
I'm also working on a fanfic of the Vampire Chronicles, I'm not quite sure where its going but anyways here's what I have so far.
Preface
I had stalked the man for awhile now, watching as he moved from house to house in the middle of the night like a wraith, or an angel of death. He delivered the first blow the father then he moved on to the children, sick I know, but these guys were the kind I loved, their blood tasted gritty and in that final moment, the one where they surrendered to the Death and went limp in my arms, in that moment where they gave their memories to me as that hot sweet fountain passed the threshold of my lips I saw at last they found peace in whatever place they chose and with ever God they believed in, in that final moment I became one with them. Human.
My name, by the way and if anyone cares is Adriana. What am I? You ask? Well its really simple and if you paid close enough attention to that short little description, you would see they have many, many names for us. The most common being Nosferatu, now you’re starting to catch on aren’t you? Yes say the words if you must, whisper the taboo word and let it fill the empty space around you just say it, I know you will and I know that you will scoff at it. Vampire.
I can hear you saying it now, whispering my name over and over again, wondering it’s a joke if I’m just some author with a hook, or if you’re listening to that little voice at the back of your head as you say my name and noticing the chills running up your spine and the goose bumps appearing on your arms.
I have often dreamed of becoming known the world but Lestat effectively put an end to that little fantasy with his brief stint as a rock star. Oh what a smash he had been! Mortals flocked around him after every show craving that mane of gorgeous blond hair and those perfect blue eyes that sparkled with every move of his head as the light caught them like the light of a candle might catch in the russet colored hair of a child thereby turning it to spun amber or, if the shade is light enough, gold.
I guess that with this book I shall become known, under a false name, though of my origins no one will believe. What do you expect to find in this book as you pick it up off the shelf in a book store or library, do you expect to find the secret to life? Or are you harboring some deep seated fantasy in yourself that as you read my story you will imagine yourself as a vampire? The vampire has been romanticized over and over again. When I tell you this, believe it: What you are about to read doesn’t involve an immortal falling in love with a frail, pitiful human. There maybe is no happy ending but I would like to think there is and as I pen my story out for you, you will see that my existence (up until I met Lestat) has been less then interesting. And to tell my story I shall switch to an omniscient point of view.
A little of chapter one :P
Chapter One: Enter the Brat Prince
As Lestat paced the thickly carpeted room of the small, dark, apartment building he sensed he was not alone. He couldn’t define what he sensed but he knew it wasn’t human, he knew that scent all to well he thought as he gazed at the mortal who lay before him. Dead she was, though he couldn’t remember her name, he never did anymore. All he remembered was seducing her as he did every night for the blood which pulsed beneath her skin flowing like liquid gold beneath an earth of easily breakable flesh. Just like her… Everything he saw reminded him of her, her pleated hair, her polished skin that was so soft despite all the preternatural hardness of it. Oh how his heart had ached when the Twin killed her… he stopped, he was doing just fine he told himself. But was he?
Now he could hear a noise soft a persisting, click, click, click. The sound of heels walking on the surface of the polished hallway outside he got a sudden flash of a woman- no a vampire but she had her scent, foolishly he dared to hope. Was it she? No it couldn’t be, but he had to see, Lestat had to see if was her. He had to see if he was just imaging things…
Click, click, click again came that sound the more he thought about it the more likely he was to go insane. Lestat took one last glance around the darkened room, turned on his heel and went to the front part of the room to see if the sound would come again or if he could see that woman- vampire he reminded himself, striding down the hallway. He waited, he listened, his ears perked and ready for that sound, that soft step of her foot. So attuned to it were his senses, that he picked up on it almost immediately click, click, click. This time it sounded closer, louder its tempo filling the small space within his ears and making him shake.
Why was he suddenly afraid, what did he have to fear from this strange being? Oh the curiosity was eating away at him! He must know, he must look through the peep hole, for surely she stopped right outside the door, as much in tune to his presence as he was to hers. But he couldn’t, he couldn’t find the strength to move that two inches, “Get a hold of yourself! What are you a vampire or a mortal who quakes at the mere mention of the boogie man?” He said; without another thought, he moved towards the door softly and peeked through the little glass opening, what he saw was a pixie of a vampire. Not her, but as he really looked at her, he could see that she was like him. The expression in her emerald eyes was confident but underneath he could see the torment that haunted her. Her skin was the same shade of brown as his, darkened by the sun, had she tried to destroy herself like he had in the middle of that great graveyard in the middle of the world. Her hair was a thick ebony that was made all the more darker by the mahogany color of her skin. She looked so small against the interior of the white washed hallway. Her eyes seemed to cut through the door and stare into his heart. She put her small hand against the door, “Lestat, I know you’re in there, come out. I need you…” she said. Her voice was like a thousand instruments all rolled into one. He could spend hours upon hours listening to that voice.
“I’m here chérie I’m here.” He thought but couldn’t bring himself to move he laid his forehead against the cool surface of the door as if he could phase himself through it without moving. Her energy reminded him of her so much it was like stepping into the sun again, her beauty was blinding and tore at his soul. ‘Lestat come to me’ her voice seemed to float into his very mind and filled him with warmth and safeness. He found he could move now, at least a little. Shakily he got up and watched in a trance as his too white hands grasped the golden knob and turned it.
There she stood a feeling of delightful dizziness came over him as he looked at her and sensed her power full on. Oh how he wanted her!